Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cần trả lời đầy đủ và rõ ràng, tránh để câu bỏ dở. Bổ sung câu chủ đề trực tiếp rồi giải thích ngắn gọn lý do, sử dụng liên từ để mạch lạc. Ví dụ: nêu vì thích ghi lại kỷ niệm, khám phá góc nhìn mới, hoặc thư giãn. Hạn chế lặp từ và giữ dưới 5 câu.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me capture memories and appreciate beauty. For example, when I travel I photograph landscapes to remember the atmosphere, and I often experiment with light and composition to make the images more interesting.

提案: Cần sửa lỗi phát âm/ nói và ngữ pháp cơ bản (ví dụ: 'verse' -> 'views'), hoàn chỉnh ý và dùng liên từ đúng. Trả lời bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể (yên tĩnh, không khí trong lành, cảnh thiên nhiên), và tránh những từ mâu thuẫn như 'fierce' nếu ý muốn nói 'peaceful' hoặc 'refreshing'. Giữ tối đa 3 câu ngắn gọn.

例: I prefer views in rural areas because they are peaceful and relaxing. For instance, I enjoy walking by fields and rivers where the air is fresh, which helps me unwind and feel refreshed.

提案: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và cấu trúc (ví dụ: 'my our countries' -> 'my own country'; thêm chủ ngữ cho câu), nêu lý do cụ thể và so sánh ngắn với nước khác nếu cần. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng cụm từ so sánh và cung cấp một ví dụ cụ thể để tăng tính thuyết phục.

例: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more familiar with the landscapes and culture. For example, the countryside near my hometown is very peaceful and full of traditional villages, so I feel more connected there than when I visit foreign places.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

The sentence is incomplete because it ends with 'because' which requires a clause to explain the reason. Remove the trailing 'because' or add a reason clause (e.g., 'because I enjoy capturing scenery'). Suggestion: provide a complete subordinate clause after 'because' or omit 'because' to form a complete statement. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I like verse in rural areas because it's very peaceful, make me fierce, relaxing. And.

✓ I like views in rural areas because they're very peaceful and relaxing.

Several issues: 'verse' is a misspelling of 'views' (lexical error), 'it's' (singular) should match plural 'views' so use 'they're' or refer to 'the area' as singular. 'make me fierce' is incorrect word choice and grammar; likely intended 'make me feel peaceful' or 'make me feel relaxed'. The phrase 'relaxing' should be joined with 'peaceful' using 'and'. The sentence fragment ending 'And.' is incomplete. Suggestion: use correct noun 'views', match subject and verb, use correct verb 'feel', and avoid sentence fragments. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I prefer views in my our countries because I like my country. Is a very peaceful and is a rural areas.

✓ I prefer views in my country because I like it; it is very peaceful and rural.

Errors: 'my our countries' mixes two possessive pronouns; choose one ('my country'). 'I like my country.' is fine but the next clause 'Is a very peaceful' lacks a subject—use 'it is'. 'is a rural areas' mixes singular 'a' with plural 'areas' and repeats 'is'. Change to 'rural' without 'a' and match number. Suggestion: use consistent pronouns, include explicit subjects for clauses, and ensure agreement between articles and nouns. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I like verse in rural areas because it's very peaceful, make me fierce, relaxing. And.

✓ I like views in rural areas because they're very peaceful and relaxing; they make me feel calm.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it's' (it is) does not agree with plural 'views'; use 'they're'. 'make me fierce' incorrectly uses verb form without a clear subject—add 'they' as subject and correct verb phrase 'make me feel calm/relaxed'. Also avoid sentence fragments like 'And.' Suggestion: ensure plural subjects take plural verbs and include explicit subjects for verbs. Grammar problem type ID:27