Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap doğal ancak dağınık ve tekrarlar içeriyor. Önce doğrudan kısa bir konu cümlesi kurun, sonra 1-2 destekleyici ayrıntı ekleyin. Bağlaçlar (for example, also, especially) kullanarak cümleleri birbirine bağlayın ve gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın. Ayrıca "wheels pictures" ifadesi belirsiz; hangi nesneleri kastettiğinizi açıklayın.

例: Yes, I really enjoy taking photographs of different views. For example, I often take portraits of my family and candid shots of friends, and I also like photographing interesting objects like car wheels or architectural details.

提案: Cevap belirsiz ve çok kısa; doğrudan soruya yanıt vermiyor. Tercihiniz yoksa bunu açıklayın ve ardından gerekçeler veya örnekler verin. Bağlaç (however, although, because) kullanarak sebep belirtin ve cümleler 2-3 kısa cümleyle genişletin.

例: I don't really have a strong preference between urban and rural views. Although I enjoy the energy and architecture of cities, I also appreciate the peaceful landscapes of the countryside because they offer different photo opportunities.

提案: Cevapta dilbilgisi ve mantık sorunları var; "I don't go my country before" yanlış. Önce düzgün bir konu cümlesi kurun, sonra nedenini açıklayın. Eğer hiç kendi ülkenizde bulunmadıysanız bunu net ifade edin ve sebep verin. Daha resmi kelimeler kullanın (prefer, visit, because).

例: I prefer views in other countries because I haven't had the chance to visit my own country yet, so foreign landscapes and cultures feel more familiar to me through photos and travel stories.

× Not only the wheels pictures, also my sister's pictures, my brothers, my friends.

✓ Not only pictures of wheels, but also pictures of my sister, my brothers, and my friends.

The phrase 'Not only the wheels pictures, also...' is incorrect because word order and connector are wrong. Use 'not only ... but also ...' construction and correct noun phrases: 'pictures of wheels' and include commas and 'and' for a list. Suggestion: Use 'Not only ... but also ...' and form noun phrases as 'pictures of X'. Use commas to separate items in a list.

× I don't prefer both of them.

✓ I don't prefer either of them.

The student used 'both' incorrectly with a negative. In negative contexts 'either' is used (I don't prefer either of them). 'Both' is used in positive statements. Suggestion: Use 'either' after negatives to refer to two options.

× Actually, I don't go my country before, so I'm gonna say I prefer other countries.

✓ Actually, I haven't been to my country before, so I'll say I prefer other countries.

The original mixes present simple and incorrect word order 'go my country before'. To express lack of past experience, use present perfect: 'haven't been to'. Also, 'gonna' is informal and 'I'll' or 'I will' fits spoken but better 'I'll say'. Suggestion: Use present perfect 'haven't been to' for life experiences; use 'been to' with country names; avoid 'gonna' in formal responses.