Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve accuracy and concision: correct minor word choice errors (e.g., 'settees skylines' → 'city skylines') and avoid redundancy by tightening sentences. Add one specific detail about technique or purpose to make the answer more vivid, and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

例: Yes, I love photographing different views because it lets me preserve special moments and beautiful scenery. For instance, I often photograph coastal sunsets and city skylines when I travel, using a wide-angle setting to capture color and depth so I can vividly remember the atmosphere later.

提案: Work on word choice, fluency and coherence: fix incorrect words ('wrestling' → 'bustling', 'kind countryside' → 'quiet countryside'), and link contrasting ideas with a clear connecting phrase (e.g., 'However,' or 'In contrast,'). Keep answers concise and avoid repetition.

例: It depends on my mood. Sometimes I prefer a bustling city skyline with cafes, museums and good transport because it feels exciting. However, I also enjoy the quiet countryside, where unspoiled scenery and peace help me relax and recharge.

提案: Correct grammar and be more precise: change 'I would prefer views and other countries' to 'I prefer views in other countries.' Fix plural/singular and collocations ('foreign cities and landscapes', 'firsthand'). Add a brief specific example of a country or observation to support the point.

例: I prefer views in other countries because I like discovering foreign cities and landscapes and learning how people get around. For example, I enjoyed Japan’s efficient trains and compact urban parks, which gave me new ideas about public transport and city design.

× Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because they let me capture special moments and beautiful scenery.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because they allow me to capture special moments and beautiful scenery.

The issue is word choice rather than strict grammar list but fits 'Verb in the present participle form' category because 'let' + object + bare infinitive is correct, yet 'let me capture' implies permission rather than ability; 'allow' is more appropriate for expressing enabling. Using 'allow' + object + to-infinitive is correct here: 'allow me to capture.' Suggestion: use 'allow' to clearly express capability or enablement.

× For example, I often photograph coastal sunsets and settees skylines so I can look back at them after trips and remember exactly how the place felt.

✓ For example, I often photograph coastal sunsets and city skylines so I can look back at them after trips and remember exactly how the place felt.

The word 'settees' is incorrect; likely a mistaken adjective or noun. It should be 'city skylines.' This is an incorrect word choice (adjective/noun misuse). Suggestion: replace incorrect word with the intended noun phrase 'city skylines.'

× I usually choose depending on my mood.

✓ I usually choose depending on my mood.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable but a more natural phrasing is 'I usually choose based on my mood.' The original uses 'depending on' which is not wrong, but 'based on' is clearer. No strict error per list, so no change required except stylistic improvement.

× Sometime I prefer an urban view.

✓ Sometimes I prefer an urban view.

The error is in the use of 'Sometime' (singular adverb) instead of 'Sometimes' (plural/frequent adverb). This is an issue of incorrect word form related to singular/plural idea. Suggestion: use 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× A wrestling city skyline with cafes, museums and easy transport feels exciting and convenient.

✓ A bustling city skyline with cafes, museums, and convenient transport feels exciting and convenient.

'Wrestling' is the wrong word; likely intended 'bustling.' This is a sentence structure/word choice error causing semantic nonsense. Also add comma before 'and' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'bustling' to describe a lively city.

× On the other hand, I enjoy the serene, kind countryside where unspoiled scenery and peace and quiet help me relax and unwind.

✓ On the other hand, I enjoy the serene countryside where unspoiled scenery and peace and quiet help me relax and unwind.

'Kind' is an incorrect or redundant adjective modifying 'countryside.' This is misuse of adjective. Remove 'kind' to make the sentence natural. Suggestion: use a single appropriate adjective like 'serene.'

× I would prefer views and other countries because I enjoy seeing what foreign cities and landscape I like and learning how people there travel and communicate.

✓ I would prefer views in other countries because I enjoy seeing which foreign cities and landscapes I like and learning how people there travel and communicate.

Several issues: incorrect preposition 'and' instead of 'in' (preposition error) and 'what' should be 'which' for choices; 'landscape' should be plural 'landscapes.' The primary grammatical fix involves relative/interrogative word choice and plural agreement; categorized here as modal verb usage since sentence uses 'would' but needed to keep modal while fixing surrounding grammar. Suggestion: use 'in other countries,' 'which,' and plural 'landscapes.'

× Visiting different places lets me experience diverse cultures first hand and pick up new ideas about lifestyle and transport.

✓ Visiting different places lets me experience diverse cultures first-hand and pick up new ideas about lifestyles and transport.

'First hand' should be hyphenated when used as an adjective/adverb 'first-hand.' Also 'lifestyle' may be plural 'lifestyles' when referring to different cultures. This is adjective/adverb and noun number misuse. Suggestion: use 'first-hand' and 'lifestyles.'