Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Pronunciation and word choice need correction (e.g., 'oregonic' is unclear). Keep answers natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and stay within 3–4 sentences. Also correct grammar: use "I'm not photogenic" only if that is intended, or choose a clearer phrase such as "I'm not a professional photographer."

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often photograph city skylines and seaside sunsets to capture the memories. I prefer experimenting with different angles because they help me notice details I would otherwise miss.

提案: This answer is unclear and contains vocabulary/grammar mistakes (e.g., 'province' and 'cheese province' are confusing). Start with a direct topic sentence stating your view, then support it with two clear contrasting points using linking words ('on the one hand', 'on the other hand'). Use correct singular/plural forms and precise vocabulary ('rural areas' not 'province').

例: I don't have a strong preference between urban and rural views. On the one hand, urban areas excite me with dramatic skylines, bright lights, and architectural details. On the other hand, rural areas calm me with wide-open landscapes and natural textures, which are great for peaceful photos.

提案: Good clear opinion but avoid slang ('A1 of kind') and ensure grammatical correctness (e.g., 'their own beauty' -> 'other countries' beauty'). Begin with a direct topic sentence stating preference, then give specific reasons and an example. Keep it concise and natural.

例: I would prefer views in other countries because traveling exposes me to different cultures and landscapes. For instance, seeing European architecture or Japanese gardens offers a contrast to the tropical beaches and lush mountains I see in the Philippines, which makes traveling more inspiring.

× I do. I'm not oregonic so I feel like I tend to capture the scenery around me more.

✓ I do. I'm not photogenic, so I feel that I tend to capture the scenery around me more.

The student used the nonword 'oregon ic' likely intending 'photogenic' (an adjective). This is a vocabulary/spelling error affecting adjective choice. Correcting to 'photogenic' makes the sentence meaningful. Also replace 'feel like' with 'feel that' for formality and clarity; both are acceptable but 'feel that' is slightly more standard in this context.

× I like taking pictures of different angles because I know that I can use them to remind me of the places I've been.

✓ I like taking pictures from different angles because I know that I can use them to remind myself of the places I've been.

Two issues: preposition and pronoun. 'Of different angles' is less natural than 'from different angles' (preposition choice). 'Remind me' should be 'remind myself' because the reflexive pronoun refers back to the subject 'I'. According to the list, pronoun use maps to incorrect use of pronouns, but primary change here is pronoun and preposition; listed as subject-verb agreement error was chosen because sentence contained reflexive pronoun misuse relating to subject; corrected sentence uses proper reflexive pronoun and preposition.

× I don't have a preference because I think the city and the province has its own magic.

✓ I don't have a preference because I think the city and the provinces have their own magic.

Agreement between plural subjects and verbs: 'the city and the province' refers to two entities, so verb must be plural 'have' rather than 'has'. Also 'province' should be plural 'provinces' if referring generally to rural areas; this is a quantifier/number choice. The correction makes subject-verb agreement and number consistent.

× Behind the camera you can see that the concrete and lights of urban areas gives you thrill.

✓ Behind the camera, you can see that the concrete and lights of urban areas give you a thrill.

Subject-verb agreement error: compound subject 'the concrete and lights' is plural, so verb should be 'give' not 'gives'. Also add article 'a' before 'thrill' for natural English. A comma after introductory phrase improves clarity.

× On the other hand, the cheese province.

✓ On the other hand, the countryside does the same for me.

Original fragment 'the cheese province' is ungrammatical and unclear. It appears to be a mispronunciation or wrong word choice ('cheese' likely intended 'the provinces' or 'the countryside'). This correction forms a complete sentence that contrasts urban areas with rural ones. The change fixes sentence structure and word choice.

× It's hard to choose because I live in the Philippines and I can always see its beauty, but going to another country and experiencing their own beauty is A1 of kind experience.

✓ It's hard to choose because I live in the Philippines and I can always see its beauty, but going to another country and experiencing its beauty is a one-of-a-kind experience.

Pronoun agreement: 'the Philippines' is a country name treated as plural but often referred to with singular 'its' for the country's beauty; keep 'its beauty' for consistency. 'Their own beauty' incorrectly uses plural pronoun; replace with 'its beauty'. Phrase 'A1 of kind experience' is nonstandard; correct idiom is 'a one-of-a-kind experience'. Also use article 'a' before the phrase.

× So I think I would prefer the views of other countries.

✓ So I think I would prefer the views of other countries.

The sentence is grammatically correct. No tense or other errors that match the provided list require change. It appropriately uses modal 'would' for preference in hypothetical/conditional context. Included here to confirm it needs no correction.