Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然且語法正確，避免重複與口頭語。可以用一個主題句開頭，然後用1–2句具體細節支持，並使用連接詞使語意順暢。例如說明你拍照的目的、常用工具或最喜歡拍的題材。

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. When I see something beautiful or interesting, I usually take out my phone to capture it and later share the best shots with friends online, especially landscapes and street scenes.

提案: 回答要結構清晰並避免重複。開頭直接表明偏好，接著用1–2個具體理由並用連接詞銜接。描述要具體，例如夜景如何吸引你及其特色。

例: I prefer urban views because I love modern architecture. At night the buildings are illuminated with lights, which creates a vibrant and dramatic atmosphere that I find very appealing.

提案: 表達要更精簡並避免填充詞（如 uh）。先給出明確答案，然後用具體例子支持，並可以簡短說明原因或未來計劃。

例: I prefer views in my own country because it has a long history and many ancient sites, like the Great Wall and the Forbidden City. I haven't visited all of them yet, so I enjoy exploring and photographing these historical places.

× A Yes, I am big fan of photographing.

✓ Yes, I am a big fan of photographing.

句子缺少不定冠词“a”，导致名词短语“a big fan”不完整。这是冠词/代词使用错误的表现。建议记住英文中表示某一类人的短语（a fan, a teacher 等）通常需要不定冠词“a”或“an”。

× When I go outside, see something beautiful or interesting, I will take out my phone to take to capture it and then I will share online with my friends.

✓ When I go outside and see something beautiful or interesting, I will take out my phone to capture it and then I will share it online with my friends.

原句缺少连词和主语，出现重复和多余动词（“take to capture”）。这是句子结构错误。建议：使用连词“and”连接并列动作，确保每个从句有主语，去掉多余词并把“share online with my friends”改为“share it online with my friends”以明确宾语。

× Personally, I prefer views in urban areas because I prefer the modern buildings.

✓ Personally, I prefer views in urban areas because I prefer modern buildings.

句中“the modern buildings”使用了定冠词“the”，但在泛指喜欢建筑这一概念时不需要“the”。这是现在时语境下的冠词使用和时态一致性问题。建议在表达一般偏好时使用一般现在时并省略不必要的定冠词：prefer modern buildings。

× They are very beautiful When when the night when the night comes, all lights come up, all night up.

✓ They are very beautiful. When night comes, all the lights come on.

原句有重复（多次出现 when）、大小写错误和不自然短语“all night up”。这是句子结构和用词错误。建议把句子拆成两句，删除重复，使用习惯表达“lights come on”。同时在特定情况下使用定冠词“the lights”。

× In fact, I prefer using our own country, uh, because our country has a long history and we have a lot of ancient buildings such as the Great Wall, the palace, uh, I for and so on.

✓ In fact, I prefer my own country, because our country has a long history and we have a lot of ancient buildings such as the Great Wall and the palaces, and I haven't visited them all.

原句中“prefer using our own country”搭配不当，应为“prefer my own country”。“the palace”若泛指多座古建筑应为复数“palaces”。另外“I for and so on”不通，且“haven't visit”动词时态错误（见下一条）。这是代词和名词形式使用错误。建议用“prefer my own country”和将“palace”改为复数或具体名称，整理句子结构。

× And uh, I haven't visit them all, uh.

✓ And I haven't visited them all.

使用现在完成时（haven't）时，后面应该用过去分词“visited”，原句用了动词原形“visit”，这是时态/动词形式错误。建议记住现在完成时结构是 have/has + 过去分词。