Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答总体能表达意思，但语法和表达不够自然，有冗余，句子过长且有小错误。改进点：1) 开头用简洁有力的主题句；2) 避免重复（如“different views and beauties”可合并）；3) 修正语法（例如“I'm not professional in photographing”应为“I’m not a professional photographer”或“I’m not professional at photography”）；4) 使用一两个具体细节来丰富回答，并用连词衔接句子。

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different scenes. I’m not a professional photographer, but I like to capture beautiful places when I travel. Looking back at these photos helps me remember the atmosphere and people from those moments, so they’re very meaningful to me.

提案: 回答有明确偏好，但用词不当且表达含糊（如“formal one”不合适），语法和发音错误影响理解（“It give me”应为“It gives me”）。改进点：1) 用正确词汇表达偏好（e.g. “urban views”）；2) 用一到两句具体原因并用连接词衔接；3) 注意主谓一致和简洁句子。

例: I prefer urban views because I love city skylines and tall buildings. For example, I enjoy photographing busy streets and illuminated skyscrapers, which make me feel excited and proud when I capture a great shot.

提案: 回答清晰且内容具体，但有小的语法和表达问题（如“It’s all worthwhile seeing”可更自然，“different views of buildings”可改为“different architectural styles”）。改进点：1) 用更准确的词汇描述（如“architectural styles”或“landscapes”）；2) 用连接词增强流畅度；3) 给一两个具体例子说明为什么在国外拍得更多。

例: I don’t have a strong preference because both offer unique sights. However, I tend to take more photos abroad since I often encounter unusual architecture and cultural scenes there, such as historic temples or colorful markets that are rare at home.

× Yes, even though I'm not professional in photographing, but I would like to record different views and beauties in different areas.

✓ Yes, even though I'm not a professional photographer, I would like to record different views and beauties in different areas.

错误类型属于动词/动名词及词类使用（应使用名词形式而非动词-ing）。原句中“professional in photographing”搭配不自然且有词类错误，应使用名词短语“a professional photographer”来表示“专业的摄影师”。建议用法：用职业名词或形容词 + 名词的结构（a professional photographer / a professional in photography）。

× It's really meaningful because whenever I look back to these pictures, it would record my memory in that time.

✓ It's really meaningful because whenever I look back at these pictures, they record my memories from that time.

错误类型为现在时使用和代词/主谓一致问题。原句中“would record”与时间状语“whenever I look back”不一致，应使用一般现在时或现在完成时；且“these pictures”为复数，谓语应为复数“record”，且代词“that time”改为更自然的“from that time”；介词搭配应为“look back at”。建议：保持时态一致（一般事实用一般现在时），注意介词搭配和主谓一致。

× Uh, for me personally, I would like to choose formal one.

✓ Uh, for me personally, I would like to choose the former one.

错误类型为单复数/单词形态错误。原句中使用“formal”错误，语境需用“former”（前者）而不是“formal”（正式的）。此外“one”前通常加定冠词“the”。建议：区分形近词，注意冠词使用："the former one"表示“前者”。

× I just enjoy the skyline, the high buildings and the crowded in urban areas.

✓ I just enjoy the skyline, the tall buildings and the crowds in urban areas.

错误类型为形容词/副词使用与名词搭配问题。原句中“high buildings”较常用“tall buildings”；“the crowded”用法错误，应使用名词“crowds”表示“人群”。建议：注意形容词与名词的常见搭配以及将形容词或过去分词名词化时的正确形式。

× It give me a sense of accomplishment when I stand and uh, take this picture.

✓ It gives me a sense of accomplishment when I stand and, uh, take this picture.

错误类型为主谓一致。主语“It”是单数，谓语应使用单数第三人称形式“gives”而不是“give”。建议：主语为单数时动词需加 -s；可阅读句子找到主语并匹配动词形式。

× I don't have preference actually.

✓ I don't have a preference, actually.

错误类型为现在时/名词搭配。短语“have preference”需加不定冠词“a”表示“一种偏好”。建议：名词“preference”作可数时在泛指单一偏好前加“a”。

× They have different cultural background and have different views of buildings.

✓ They have different cultural backgrounds and have different views on buildings.

错误类型为介词使用与名词单复数。应将“cultural background”改为复数“cultural backgrounds”以匹配复数主语“they”；“views of buildings”更自然的介词搭配是“views on buildings”。建议：注意主语复数时相关名词也应为复数，并选择正确介词搭配（views on/ about）。

× It's all worthwhile seeing, but I would say I take more photos in other countries because it's really rare to see them in my country.

✓ It's all worthwhile to see, but I would say I take more photos in other countries because it's really rare to see them in my country.

错误类型为动词形式/不定式和动名词的选择问题。短语“worthwhile seeing”不如“不定式”或“worth seeing”自然，常见表达为“it's worthwhile to see”或“it's worth seeing”。句中整体时态为一般现在，保持一致即可。建议：常用固定搭配“it's worth seeing”或“it's worthwhile to see”。