Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a clear, direct opinion (topic sentence) and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences).

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph city skylines and coastal landscapes because the light and colors change throughout the day, which makes each photo unique.

提案: Again you repeated the question rather than answering. State a preference directly, then explain why with a specific reason and a linking word (e.g., because, since, and). Limit to 2–3 short sentences to be natural and effective.

例: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and more scenic. For instance, I like photographing fields and mountains since they offer natural textures and peaceful compositions.

提案: You echoed the question and mispronounced a word (“preview”). Answer the question with a clear preference and give a brief reason or example. Use linking words (e.g., however, but) if comparing both options. Keep answers brief and specific.

例: I prefer views in other countries because they often have different architecture and landscapes that I haven’t seen before. However, I also enjoy local scenes for their familiarity and cultural meaning.

× Do you like taking picture of different views?

✓ Do you like taking pictures of different views?

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because the question asks about taking multiple photographs in general. Use plural after 'taking' when referring to the activity of making more than one item. Suggestion: use 'pictures' for general activities or add a determiner ('a picture') if referring to one specific image.

× Do you prefer view in urban areas or rural areas?

✓ Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

The noun 'view' should be plural 'views' because the question compares types of scenery in general, not a single view. When speaking generally about kinds of scenes, use the plural form. Suggestion: use 'views' to indicate more than one or general preference.

× Do you preview in your own country or in another country?

✓ Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

The student used 'preview' which is incorrect here; the intended verb is 'prefer'. Also the question asks about 'other countries' plural to match the general comparison and to mirror the examiner's original 'in other countries'. Use 'prefer' for expressing preference. Suggestion: replace 'preview' with 'prefer' and use 'other countries' (plural) or 'another country' if asking about a single alternative, but keep consistent with the examiner's plural form.