Views— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
受験者
Well, not really for me when I am traveling, when I am umm, you know, just relaxing myself. I prefer to take photos of different kinds of views to left a great memory for the whole thing, the whole travel, yeah.
試験官
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
受験者
For me, I prefer the landscape in urban areas because I really, I am really into the towers and also the grand umm buildings in the city and that makes me feel comfortable.
試験官
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
受験者
Well, for me, I prefer views in my own country, China. So we all know that China is a huge country and there are a lot of fascinated, umm, landscape in China. What's more, I uh, have to admit that other countries feels better.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
スコア: 62.0提案: 回答需要更直接和简洁；减少填充词（如“umm”、“you know”）和重复表达；句子结构应更清晰，先给出主句回应，再用1–2个具体细节支持。可以把不确定的表述改为确定或用简单对比。
例: Not really. When I travel I usually relax instead of taking many photos. However, I do like photographing distinctive views sometimes, because photos help me remember the highlights of a trip.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
スコア: 68.0提案: 回答明确但有重复与填充词，需精简并加入更具体的理由或例子（比如哪些建筑或氛围），使用连接词让逻辑更清楚。避免简单重复“really”。
例: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the skyline and grand architecture. For example, tall towers and historic city halls create a dramatic backdrop that I find inspiring and comfortable.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答逻辑矛盾且表达混乱（先说喜欢本国景色，随后又说其他国家更好）；应先明确立场，并给出具体原因或对比；去掉填充词并改正语法错误（e.g. 'fascinated'→'fascinating', 'feels'→'feel').
例: I prefer the views in my own country, China, because it offers a huge variety—from mountains and rivers to historic towns. That said, I also enjoy some landscapes abroad when they offer unique features I can't find at home.
文法
× I prefer to take photos of different kinds of views to left a great memory for the whole thing, the whole travel, yeah.
✓ I prefer to take photos of different kinds of views to leave a great memory of the whole trip.
句中使用了不正确的动词形式 “left”，原句想表达“留下回忆”，应使用动词不定式或动词原形“leave”。动词“left”是leave的过去式/过去分词，用在此处不符合语法。建议记住常见动词原形用法：在“to”后应接动词原形（不定式），如“to leave”。另外将“the whole travel”改为更自然的短语“the whole trip/whole journey”。
× For me, I prefer the landscape in urban areas because I really, I am really into the towers and also the grand umm buildings in the city and that makes me feel comfortable.
✓ For me, I prefer the landscapes in urban areas because I am really into the towers and the grand buildings in the city, and that makes me feel comfortable.
句中有几处时态/数的一致与用法问题：1) “I really, I am really into”中的重复“really”可简化为“I am really into”以保持自然的现在时表达。2) “the landscape”在泛指城市的多种景观时应使用复数“landscapes”。3) 连接词后保留现在时“makes me feel”正确，但句子中冗余的停顿词应删除以流畅表达。建议简化重复词、注意可数名词单复数并保持现在时一致。
× What's more, I uh, have to admit that other countries feels better.
✓ What's more, I have to admit that other countries feel better.
原句中主语“other countries”为复数，但谓语使用了单数形式“feels”，产生主谓不一致。正确用法是复数动词“feel”。另外将“I uh”中的填充词“uh”可以在正式表达中省略。建议学习主谓一致规则：复数主语对应复数动词（不加-s）。
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