Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve by giving a stronger topic sentence and adding one specific detail about why you take photos on those occasions. Avoid repeating similar ideas and use a linking word to connect the general statement to the example.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos, although I do it infrequently. For instance, I usually take pictures at friends' birthdays because I want to capture memorable moments and at trips to remember the places I visited.

提案: Good direct answer with a clear reason and an example. To improve, combine sentences to sound more natural and add a brief additional detail (e.g., an emotion or a specific place) using a linking word to make it more coherent.

例: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the lights and architecture at night; for example, walking by tall buildings and busy streets in downtown makes me feel energized.

提案: The response communicates preference but is unclear and has grammar and vocabulary errors. Improve by producing a clear topic sentence, correcting structure (prefer other countries to my own), removing fillers (umm), and giving a specific reason with a supporting example. Use linking words for clarity.

例: I prefer views in other countries to those in my own because I often find unfamiliar sights more exciting; for example, seeing traditional markets or unusual architecture abroad makes me curious and eager to explore.

× I prefer to other country to in my country because umm some strange views or always feel me weird but very excited for me.

✓ I prefer other countries to my own because some of the strange views always make me feel weird but also very excited.

This sentence has multiple problems matching types: incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11) and sentence structure errors (ID 26) and incorrect pronoun/word order. 'Prefer' should be followed by 'A to B' or 'A rather than B'. The original 'prefer to other country to in my country' misorders prepositions and articles. Change to 'prefer other countries to my own' (plural for general preference). 'Some strange views or always feel me weird' misuses 'or' and word order: correct is 'some of the strange views always make me feel weird'. Also 'for me' at the end is unnecessary and awkward; remove or replace with 'to me' if needed. Suggest practising correct 'prefer A to B' pattern and using active verb constructions ('make me feel') rather than passive or incorrect order.