Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and grammatical: begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Reduce hesitations and repetition. Use more accurate vocabulary (e.g., "satisfying" or "personal") and correct pronouns and tense.

例: I prefer handwriting, although I type a lot for work. Handwriting feels more personal and satisfying because it helps me think more slowly and remember ideas better. For example, when I jot down notes by hand I often understand concepts more deeply.

提案: Give a direct answer first, then one short specific detail. Avoid filler words and repetition. Use correct article and word order (e.g., "a data scientist") and link sentences with words like "because" or "so".

例: Yes, I type every day on both a desktop and a laptop. Because I work as a data scientist, I mostly use my laptop for coding and a desktop for heavier data processing tasks.

提案: Start with a clear time reference, then give concise supporting details. Correct tense and article usage ("in grade 6", "computer classes taught us"). Remove fillers like "uh" and avoid unclear phrases such as "programming language as intermediate."

例: I learned to type in grade 6 during computer classes. The teacher showed us proper finger placement and we practiced typing exercises, which helped me gain speed and accuracy.

提案: Answer directly and structure with linking words (first, second). Be specific about methods and frequency, and avoid repetition. Mention particular websites or exercises to add concreteness.

例: I improve my typing by practicing daily and using online typing tutors. For example, I spend 15 minutes each morning on typing.com and do accuracy drills and timed tests to increase my speed.

× So for me, I because I work as a data scientist, so most of my time is typing on the laptop.

✓ For me, because I work as a data scientist, I spend most of my time typing on a laptop.

The original sentence uses incorrect present-tense structure and awkward phrasing ('most of my time is typing'). Use the simple present to describe habitual actions: 'I spend most of my time typing' or 'I type on a laptop most of the time.' Also add the article 'a' before 'laptop.' Avoid redundant 'so' and misplaced 'because.' Suggestion: Use clear subject-verb-object order for habitual actions (subject + simple present verb + object).

× But for me I prefer handwriting.

✓ However, I prefer handwriting.

This is a minor style and cohesion issue rather than a tense error; replacing 'But for me' with 'However' or 'Personally' improves fluency. The present tense 'prefer' is correct for general preference; no tense change is needed. Suggestion: Use a single discourse connector ('However' or 'Personally') to avoid repetition.

× Of course it gives more feelings in the writing, the writing sessions and it feels like a human to human.

✓ Of course, it feels more personal when I handwrite; the writing session feels more like human-to-human communication.

'Gives more feelings' is unnatural; use 'feels more personal' or 'conveys more feeling.' Also 'human to human' should be hyphenated as 'human-to-human' when used as an adjective or use 'like a human conversation' for clarity. Suggestion: Use natural collocations such as 'feels more personal' or 'conveys more emotion.'

× Yeah, I have to type on desktop and laptop every day because I'm data scientist, so my my my actual job is to work on the laptop.

✓ Yes, I have to type on a desktop and a laptop every day because I'm a data scientist, so my actual job is to work on a laptop.

Missing indefinite articles before 'desktop' and 'laptop' and before 'data scientist' cause article errors. Also remove repeated filler words 'my my my.' Use 'work on a laptop' rather than 'the laptop' unless a specific laptop is meant. Suggestion: Remember to use 'a' before singular, countable nouns when they are non-specific.

× At grade 6, I have a computer sessions, uh, and we, they teach us how to type on keyboards and, uh, they gave us programming language as intermediate and there I, uh, learn how to use a keyboard.

✓ In grade 6, I had computer classes where they taught us how to type on keyboards; they also introduced programming at an intermediate level, and that is where I learned how to use a keyboard.

The response mixes present and past tense incorrectly ('I have' and 'they teach' with past events). Use past tense to describe past experiences: 'I had,' 'they taught,' 'they introduced,' 'I learned.' Also 'computer sessions' should be 'computer classes,' and 'programming language as intermediate' is unclear; 'introduced programming at an intermediate level' clarifies meaning. Suggestion: Use past simple for completed actions in the past and choose accurate nouns ('classes').

× I improve my typing first by practice every day to type on the keyboard, second by using websites that help you to, uh, write or type faster on the keyboard every day.

✓ I improve my typing first by practicing every day on the keyboard, and second by using websites that help me type faster.

'I improve' describes a habitual action so present simple is acceptable, but the verb form after 'by' must be gerund: 'by practicing' not 'by practice.' Also avoid repeating 'every day' and use correct pronoun consistency ('help me' rather than 'help you') when speaking about personal routine. Suggestion: Use gerunds after 'by' and keep subject-consistent pronouns.