Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one specific reason or example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' and correct verb forms (e.g., 'helps me with my coursework').

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it helps me complete coursework more quickly and neatly. For example, I can draft essays, edit them easily, and submit assignments online, so it saves time and reduces mistakes.

提案: Answer directly, correct phrasing and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details with linking words like 'because' and 'also'.

例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I own a laptop and use it for all my homework. Also, it is easy to carry to the library, so I can work in different places comfortably.

提案: Start with a clear time phrase and correct vocabulary. Fix grammar (e.g., 'If I remember correctly' and 'the first course taught us'). Provide one brief detail about how you learned or practiced.

例: If I remember correctly, I learned to type at the beginning of university when a compulsory course taught touch-typing techniques. The course emphasized accuracy and speed through guided exercises and drills.

提案: Be more fluent and grammatical: use a topic sentence, specific tools, and linking words. Use correct adjectives/adverbs (e.g., 'quickly and efficiently') and give one concrete example of a practice routine or resource.

例: I improve my typing by using an online typing course that offers exercises and video tutorials. For example, I practice 20 minutes daily on accuracy drills and follow speed-building lessons, which has increased my words-per-minute and reduced errors.

× Actually I really prefer typing because I think typing is a really practical skill for me to my coursework.

✓ Actually I really prefer typing because I think typing is a really practical skill for my coursework.

The preposition 'for' should be used with 'my coursework' to indicate purpose or relation. 'to my coursework' is incorrect here. Remove 'to' and use 'for' to make the phrase natural and grammatically correct. Suggestion: Use 'for my coursework' when saying something is useful or relevant to coursework.

× The thing is I could do I could do many assignments by typing on laptop which is really convenient and fast.

✓ The thing is I can do many assignments by typing on a laptop, which is really convenient and fast.

The sentence contains repetition ('I could do I could do') and a modal tense mismatch. Replace 'could' with 'can' to express ability in general present context. Also add the article 'a' before 'laptop' and a comma before the relative clause 'which is really convenient and fast.' Suggestion: Remove doubled phrases, use 'can' for general abilities, and include articles where needed.

× Actually I type on laptop keyboard every day because I just have the laptop by myself, so I just could use this type of keyboard to complete my homework.

✓ Actually I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I only have the laptop, so I can use this type of keyboard to complete my homework.

Missing article: 'on laptop keyboard' should be 'on a laptop keyboard.' 'By myself' is unnecessary and awkward; 'only have the laptop' or 'I only have a laptop' is clearer. 'Could' suggests conditional or past ability; use 'can' for present habitual ability. Suggestion: Use articles before singular countable nouns, avoid unnecessary phrases, and use 'can' for present habitual actions.

× But I think laptop is really convenient to bring to the library, so I really enjoy that.

✓ But I think the laptop is really convenient to bring to the library, so I really enjoy that.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'laptop' when referring to a specific device already mentioned. Adding 'the' clarifies reference. Suggestion: Use 'the' when referring back to a specific noun already introduced.

× If memory surveyors, I think it happened in the beginning of university and I remember that the first course is was teaching us how to typing with high accuracy and high speed.

✓ If my memory serves me, I think it happened at the beginning of university, and I remember that the first course was teaching us how to type with high accuracy and high speed.

Multiple issues: incorrect phrase 'If memory surveyors' should be 'If my memory serves me.' Preposition 'in the beginning of university' should be 'at the beginning of university.' 'Is was' has redundant forms; keep 'was.' 'How to typing' should be 'how to type' because 'to' requires the base verb. Suggestion: Use set phrase 'If my memory serves me,' use 'at the beginning of...' for time points, keep past tense consistent ('was'), and use base verb after 'to'.

× I use the website which is used to learn how to type in quickly and efficiency.

✓ I use a website that is used to learn how to type quickly and efficiently.

The clause 'which is used to learn' is awkward; 'that is used to learn' or simpler 'a website to learn' is better. 'In quickly' is incorrect; adverb 'quickly' should not be preceded by 'in.' 'Efficiency' is a noun; use adverb 'efficiently' to modify 'type.' Also add article 'a' before 'website.' Suggestion: Use adverbs to modify verbs and choose correct relative pronoun or simpler structure.

× I learned skill on it and practice on it which is really efficiency for me and also I could follow the video to learn how to type quickly and accuracy.

✓ I learned skills on it and practiced on it, which is really efficient for me, and I can also follow the videos to learn how to type quickly and accurately.

Multiple corrections: 'learned skill' should be 'learned skills' (plural) or 'a skill.' 'Practice' should be past tense 'practiced' to match 'learned' if referring to past activities, or use 'practice' as noun. 'Which is really efficiency' is incorrect; use adjective 'efficient.' 'I could' should be 'I can' for present ability. 'Video' likely plural 'videos.' 'Accuracy' should be adverb 'accurately' to modify 'type.' Suggestion: Maintain tense consistency, use correct noun/adjective/adverb forms, and choose singular/plural appropriately.