Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear, contains irrelevant and inappropriate words, and lacks coherence. Give a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then briefly explain why with relevant reasons. Avoid hesitations and off-topic or inappropriate phrases. Keep it under 3–4 sentences and use linking words such as 'because' or 'so'.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and easier to edit. For example, when I write reports at work I can correct mistakes and reorganize paragraphs quickly, which saves time. This also helps me stay organized because my notes are searchable on a computer.

提案: Your reply answers the question but has many errors and unclear phrases (e.g., 'full time child', 'tie', 'driving in the paper'). Give a clear topic sentence about which device you use, then add a brief supporting detail about frequency or purpose, using linking words like 'because' or 'but'.

例: Yes, I type on my laptop every day because my work requires writing emails and documents. However, sometimes I use paper when I plan projects because I prefer sketching ideas by hand.

提案: Your answer is mostly relevant but contains odd phrasing ('learned how to use company') and grammar mistakes ('to typing'). Start with a clear topic sentence stating when you learned, then add one specific detail about how or where you learned, using correct verb forms and simple linking words like 'and' or 'so'.

例: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in secondary school. At that time we had a computer class where the teacher showed us proper hand position and basic typing exercises, which helped me improve quickly.

提案: Your answer is brief and relevant but lacks detail and linking. Give a clear topic sentence about your main method for improving, then add specific strategies (practice tasks, software, goals) and use linking words such as 'for example' or 'so'.

例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly at work, since I type a lot of emails and reports. For example, I also use online typing exercises for 10 minutes each evening to increase speed and accuracy.

× I prefer football umm typing when I'm working and I umm riding when I have diarrhea to make more creative.

✓ I prefer typing when I'm working, and I prefer handwriting when I want to be more creative.

This sentence has multiple problems: incorrect word choice ('football' and 'diarrhea' are wrong words), unclear coordination, and verb form issues. Replace incorrect words with 'typing' and 'handwriting' to match the question context; repeat the verb 'prefer' for parallel structure; use 'when I want to be more creative' to express purpose. Keep present simple for general preferences. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Yes I do because I have a full time child at an office so I tie on my laptop keyboard every day almost.

✓ Yes, I do because I have a full-time job at an office, so I type on my laptop keyboard almost every day.

Errors: 'full time child' is incorrect word choice; it should be 'full-time job'. Hyphenate 'full-time' as a compound adjective. 'tie' is a misspelling; use 'type'. Place adverb 'almost' before 'every day' or after; 'almost every day' is natural. Include commas for readability. This fixes sentence structure and verb use. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× But sometime when I make the plan I use I usually uh, driving in the paper.

✓ But sometimes when I make a plan, I usually write it down on paper.

Errors: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' for frequency. 'make the plan' -> 'make a plan'. 'use I usually uh, driving in the paper' is ungrammatical; correct meaning is 'write it down on paper'. Use present simple 'I usually write' for habitual action. Add comma after introductory clause. Grammar problem type ID: 20

× When I was in secondary school, I learned how to use company, and that time I also learned how to use a keyboard to typing.

✓ When I was in secondary school, I learned how to use a computer, and at that time I also learned how to type on a keyboard.

Errors: 'use company' is wrong word choice; should be 'use a computer'. 'that time' -> 'at that time' for correct preposition. 'learned how to use a keyboard to typing' mixes infinitive and -ing; correct is 'learned how to type on a keyboard' or 'learned to type on a keyboard'. Past tense 'learned' is correct; adjust surrounding words for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× Every day I go to office to work, that's the time I improve my typing.

✓ Every day I go to the office to work; that's when I improve my typing.

Errors: 'go to office' needs the definite article 'the' in this context: 'go to the office'. Use 'that's when' to refer to that time more naturally. Present simple 'I improve' is acceptable for habitual action. Use a semicolon or period to separate independent clauses. Grammar problem type ID: 11