Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response more natural and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 concise supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., 'I love trying', 'very natural process' → 'a very natural process'). Avoid redundancy ('very very').

例: I prefer handwriting because I'm a pen enthusiast and enjoy trying different pens. Moreover, handwriting feels like a more natural creative process for me, whereas typing often feels mechanical and less personal.

提案: Provide a concise, natural answer and correct awkward phrasing. Start with the direct answer then add a brief reason. Use proper collocations ('sit in front of my desktop', 'type articles every day').

例: Yes, I use a desktop keyboard every day. As a graduate student I often type papers and assignments, so I spend several hours at my computer daily.

提案: Be precise and correct tense and vocabulary. Begin with a direct time reference, then give a short supporting detail. Improve grammar ('taught', 'basic functions', 'primary school'). Avoid vague phrases like 'the first age.'

例: I learned to type about 15 years ago in primary school. My school ran a computer class where the teacher taught us the basic functions of a personal computer, including typing.

提案: Give a clearer description of methods and use accurate vocabulary. State specific websites or exercises, and explain how they help (e.g., timed drills, accuracy tests). Use linking words for clarity and correct phrasing ('measure accuracy and speed').

例: I improve my typing by using online typing platforms that offer timed drills and accuracy tests. For example, I do daily 10-minute speed tests and focus on accuracy drills to reduce errors and build speed over time.

× I prefer handwriting because I'm a pen enthusiast and I love try different kinds of pen and handwriting.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I'm a pen enthusiast and I love trying different kinds of pens and handwriting.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the -ing form when referring to activities (verb + -ing). Also 'pen' as a countable noun needs plural 'pens' when referring to different kinds.

× And I think handwriting is very very natural process while the typing is not very suitable for me.

✓ And I think handwriting is a very natural process while typing is not very suitable for me.

Use the indefinite article 'a' before a singular countable noun 'process'. Do not use 'the' before general activities like 'typing' unless referring to a specific instance.

× Yes, since I'm a graduate student, I need to sit before in front of my desktop and use my machine keyboard to type articles day by day.

✓ Yes, since I'm a graduate student, I need to sit in front of my desktop and use my keyboard to type articles every day.

The phrase should be 'sit in front of' not 'sit before in front of'. 'Machine keyboard' is unnatural; 'keyboard' suffices. Use 'every day' instead of 'day by day' for habitual action.

× Well, it was almost 15 years ago when I was a primary school student in the first age and our school organized a computer class and teach every student how to use the basic function of a personal computer.

✓ Well, it was almost 15 years ago when I was a primary school student, and our school organized a computer class and taught every student how to use the basic functions of a personal computer.

When describing past events, verbs should be in past tense: 'organized' and 'taught'. 'Function' should be plural 'functions' when referring to multiple basic features. 'In the first age' is unclear and removed to improve clarity.

× Well, I practice typing through some websites and these websites can include several tasks and you may task the accuracy and speed by your computer.

✓ Well, I practice typing through some websites, and these websites include several tasks so you can test accuracy and speed on your computer.

Use the base verb 'test' rather than incorrect 'task' when evaluating accuracy and speed. 'Can include' is acceptable but 'include' is clearer for present habitual action. 'By your computer' should be 'on your computer'.