Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise, correct grammar and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Fix tense and article errors and remove redundant phrases.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting. For example, I use my phone and tablet every day, so typing is faster and more convenient for messaging and taking notes.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence, use correct verb forms and add one specific detail. Use a linking phrase to connect the reason to the statement.

例: Yes, I type on a laptop every day. Because I use social media and messaging apps a lot, I find my laptop convenient for long messages and schoolwork.

提案: Provide a clear time reference and avoid unclear phrases. Correct vocabulary mistakes (learned, borrow/own) and describe progression briefly with linking words like 'then' and 'after'.

例: I learned to type when I was around eleven, after I got my first phone. At first I typed slowly, but after more than ten years of practice I can type quite quickly now.

提案: Answer directly and give a specific method for improvement. Use correct grammar and one or two concrete examples of practice methods, connected with linking words.

例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly. For example, I use online typing tests and type messages to friends every day, which helps me increase speed and accuracy.

× I think in our 23rd 21st century typing also displaced dis displayed handwriting because everybody use phones and iPads and i more prefer typing.

✓ I think in the 21st century typing has displaced handwriting because everybody uses phones and iPads and I prefer typing more.

Errors: '23rd 21st century' is incorrect adjective/numeral use; 'displaced dis displayed' is garbled duplication; tense and auxiliary omitted. Use present perfect 'has displaced' to describe a change that started in the past and continues now. 'Everybody use' has subject-verb agreement (everybody is singular), so use 'uses.' 'i' should be capitalized and position of 'more' corrected to 'prefer typing more.' Suggestion: simplify to one century, use correct auxiliary and agreement, and place adverb after verb or object.

× Of course I do. I'm type on laptop every day because in social media you always typing to talk to your friends, to talk to your family.

✓ Of course I do. I type on my laptop every day because on social media you are always typing to talk to your friends and your family.

Errors: 'I'm type' is wrong form—use simple present 'I type' for habitual action. Include possessive 'my laptop.' Preposition should be 'on social media.' 'you always typing' lacks auxiliary; use 'you are always typing.' Combine 'to talk to your friends, to talk to your family' into 'to talk to your friends and your family' for brevity and parallelism. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and include necessary auxiliaries for continuous forms.

× And yeah, it's already in our life.

✓ And yeah, it's already part of our lives.

'in our life' is an awkward collocation; use 'part of our lives.' 'it's already' is acceptable but 'already' fits better before 'part' or after 'is.' Suggestion: prefer natural collocations like 'part of our lives' for native-like phrasing.

× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard? Student: I can make sure. I think I loaned it from my childhood because I got my first phone when I was 11.

✓ I am not sure. I think I learned it in my childhood because I got my first phone when I was 11.

Errors: 'I can make sure' is incorrect; use 'I am not sure' or 'I'm not certain.' 'loaned it from my childhood' is wrong verb and preposition; 'learned it in my childhood' correctly uses past simple 'learned' for a past completed action. Suggestion: use 'learned' for past events and correct phrasing 'in my childhood.'

× So then I started really slowly typing and then after more than 10 years I used to eat and type really fast.

✓ So then I started typing very slowly, and after more than ten years I became able to type very fast.

Errors: word order 'started really slowly typing' should be 'started typing very slowly.' 'used to eat and type' is incorrect and nonsensical; likely meant 'used to' for past habit or 'became able to.' Use 'became able to type' to indicate development. Also write numbers under ten as words; 'very' is a better adverb than 'really' in formal correction. Suggestion: order adverb properly and choose correct verb to show skill development.

× I do not improve it. I think the most are good practice for typing is just to type more and more so if you have a good friends.

✓ I do not practice to improve it. I think the best practice for typing is just to type more and more, especially if you have good friends to practice with.

Errors: 'I do not improve it' is ungrammatical; use 'I do not practice to improve it' or 'I don't actively improve it.' 'the most are good practice' is incorrect quantifier and structure—use 'the best practice.' 'a good friends' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'good friends' or 'a good friend.' Suggestion: use correct quantifiers ('best'), correct article-noun agreement, and clarify meaning about practicing with others.

× I know like most people now using voice messages but I really think like typing is better.

✓ I know that most people now use voice messages, but I really think typing is better.

Errors: missing conjunction 'that' for content clause: 'I know like' is colloquial and redundant. 'most people now using' lacks auxiliary; use 'most people now use.' Remove filler 'like' for clarity. Suggestion: avoid filler words, include auxiliary verbs for present simple, and use 'that' for clarity when needed.