Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be careful with grammar and redundancy. Use one clear topic sentence, then add a concise reason and a specific example. Correct verb agreement and avoid double connectors (e.g., 'but however'). Keep under five sentences.

例: I generally prefer typing on my mobile phone because it is fast and convenient. For casual messages I can type quickly and use autocorrect, which saves time. However, for formal letters to higher authorities I sometimes handwrite because it feels more personal and official.

提案: Answer directly and use natural phrasing. Avoid awkward or formal verbs like 'involve myself in the usage of'. Provide a short reason or frequency detail with linking words.

例: No, I don't use a desktop or laptop every day. I only use them occasionally for meetings or online classes when I need to type notes or complete tasks.

提案: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear time reference, then give a specific supporting detail. Avoid unclear phrases ('If my memory solves my ride') and repetition.

例: I learned to type in primary school when my teacher showed us the basic layout. Since then I have practiced regularly because typing is essential for schoolwork and online tasks.

提案: Organize your answer: start with the main methods, then give a specific result. Fix repetition and small errors ('mess family members'). Use linking words like 'also' and 'for example' appropriately.

例: I improve my typing by regularly texting friends and family and drafting emails for work or study. This practice has increased my speed and also helped me notice and correct grammatical mistakes; for example, I used to type very slowly but now I type much faster.

× Nowadays, I prefer typing on my mobile phone as I believe that technology have greatly impacted our lives.

✓ Nowadays, I prefer typing on my mobile phone as I believe that technology has greatly impacted our lives.

Subject 'technology' is singular, so the verb requires third person singular form 'has' rather than 'have'. Use 'has' for correct subject-verb agreement.

× Moreover, it is more easier and convenient to write a message.

✓ Moreover, it is easier and more convenient to write a message.

'More easier' is redundant and ungrammatical because 'easy' is a one-syllable adjective that takes the comparative 'easier' not 'more easier'. Also place 'more' before 'convenient' for parallel structure.

× But however, during some cases when I have to write a letter to the higher authorities, I prefer handwritten notes as they are quite easier and lesser complex.

✓ However, in some cases when I have to write a letter to higher authorities, I prefer handwritten notes as they are much easier and less complex.

Do not use 'but however' together; choose one (here 'However'). Use 'in some cases' rather than 'during some cases'. Omit 'the' before 'higher authorities' when speaking generally. Use 'much easier' and 'less complex' rather than 'quite easier' and 'lesser complex' for correct comparative forms.

× No, I don't involve myself in the usage of desktop or laptops.

✓ No, I don't use desktop or laptop computers regularly.

The phrase 'involve myself in the usage of' is awkward. Use the verb 'use' and match 'desktop or laptop' with 'computers' or simply 'desktops or laptops'. Also include 'regularly' to reflect 'every day' question.

× However, sometimes during my meetings or virtual classes I have to use them in order to attain or to accomplish my task.

✓ However, sometimes during meetings or virtual classes I have to use them in order to complete my tasks.

'Attain or accomplish my task' is awkward; 'complete' is more natural. Use plural 'tasks' if meaning multiple tasks. Remove unnecessary 'to' before 'accomplish' or replace phrase as shown.

× If my memory solves my ride during my primary classes, my teacher taught me how to operate a keyboard.

✓ If my memory serves me right, during my primary classes my teacher taught me how to operate a keyboard.

The idiom is 'if my memory serves me right', not 'solves my ride'. Also reorder phrase for clarity: place 'during my primary classes' where it fits the sentence.

× I personally believe it is of a paramount importance as nowadays technology is used everywhere and it facilitates the works different works.

✓ I personally believe it is of paramount importance as nowadays technology is used everywhere and it facilitates different kinds of work.

Use 'of paramount importance' (no article 'a'). 'the works different works' is incorrect repetition; use 'different kinds of work' or 'various tasks'.

× I however believe that I usually practice on the keyboards in order to increase my speed of typing.

✓ However, I usually practice on the keyboard to increase my typing speed.

Better word order: 'However' at start or after subject, 'practice on the keyboard' (singular) is natural, and 'typing speed' is the correct noun phrase. 'Usually' fits present habitual tense.

× I text message my friends and family mess family members.

✓ I text my friends and family members.

Remove redundant words: 'text message' as a verb should be 'text'. 'family mess' is a typo; use 'family members'. Keep pronoun/phrase concise.

× Besides that, I involve myself in drafting certain emails or messages which enhances my typing and speed.

✓ Besides that, I draft certain emails or messages which enhance my typing and speed.

Use active verb 'draft' instead of 'involve myself in drafting'. 'Which enhance' agrees with plural 'emails or messages' so use plural verb 'enhance'.

× It also helped me to improve my grammar.

✓ It has also helped me improve my grammar.

Present perfect 'has helped' is appropriate to show effect continuing to present. Also 'helped me to improve' can be shortened to 'helped me improve'.

× For example, earlier I used to type really slow but now I can type with a rapid speed.

✓ For example, I used to type very slowly, but now I can type much faster.

Use 'used to' for past habit, adverb 'slowly' not adjective 'slow'. 'with a rapid speed' is unnatural; use comparative 'much faster'.