Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct clear answer and explain briefly with one or two specific reasons. Use correct vocabulary (typing/handwriting) and simple sentence structures. Keep to 1–3 sentences and avoid unrelated words like 'driving' or 'forgot'.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and easier to edit. For example, when I type I can quickly correct mistakes and save documents on my computer.

提案: Start with a clear statement about which device you use most often (desktop or laptop). Then give a concise reason using linking words (because/so) and a short specific detail about your work routine. Avoid unclear phrases like 'I take on' or 'work return'.

例: I usually type on a laptop every day because my job requires me to work remotely. As a result, I carry my laptop and use its keyboard for emails and documents.

提案: Answer with a clear time reference (e.g., in grade 10 or at age X) and add a brief supporting detail about where or how you learned (school class, self-taught). Use simple past tense and correct phrasing (learned to type, grade 10).

例: I learned to type in grade 10 at school during our computer class. The teacher showed us proper finger placement and we practiced with typing exercises.

提案: Describe one or two specific methods you use to improve typing, using linking words (for example, by/so/then) and concrete details (practice websites, exercises, daily minutes). Avoid vague or incorrect expressions like 'write more number'. Keep to 1–3 clear sentences.

例: I improve my typing by practicing online typing exercises for 20 minutes most days. For example, I use a typing website to work on accuracy and speed and track my progress.

× I prefer driving is easy more and then I forgot work it easy to.

✓ I prefer typing because it is easier, and then I forget work less often.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure problems (Grammar problem type ID 26). It mixes ideas without correct connectors and uses wrong verbs. 'Prefer' should be followed by a gerund ('typing') or 'to' infinitive; here 'typing' fits context. 'Driving is easy more' is ungrammatical—replace with 'because it is easier'. 'I forgot work it easy to' is unclear; likely meaning is 'I forget work less often' or 'it helps me remember work'; choose 'I forget work less often'. Suggestion: break into clear clauses, use appropriate gerund after 'prefer', and use logical connectors like 'because' to link reasons. Use present simple for preferences and general truths.

× Yes, I take on. I type on desktop or laptop. Keyboard is everyday because my work return laptop.

✓ Yes, I do. I type on a desktop or a laptop. I use a keyboard every day because my work requires a laptop.

Multiple issues here match pronoun and article/use problems (ID 12 and ID 22) but primarily unclear pronoun/phrase use (selected ID 12). 'I take on' is not a correct response to 'Do you type...' so replace with 'Yes, I do.' 'I type on desktop or laptop' needs articles: 'a desktop or a laptop.' 'Keyboard is everyday' is ungrammatical; use 'I use a keyboard every day.' 'my work return laptop' is incorrect—likely 'my work requires a laptop' or 'my work provides/returns a laptop.' Ensure correct verbs and articles and reorder for clarity.

× Oh, I learned to tap on the keyboard when I would study Grad 10. Yeah, we have a culture class.

✓ Oh, I learned to type on the keyboard when I was in Grade 10. We had a computer class.

This contains past tense and word choice errors (ID 5). 'Learned' is past, so the time clause should use simple past 'when I was in Grade 10' rather than 'would study.' 'Tap on the keyboard' is awkward; 'type on the keyboard' is appropriate. 'We have a culture class' is present tense and likely wrong word choice—replace with past 'We had a computer class.' Use consistent past tense for past events and correct vocabulary ('Grade 10', 'computer class').

× I improve my typewriting when I have free time. Yes, I write more number.

✓ I improve my typing when I have free time. Yes, I type more often.

This matches verb + -ing form problems (ID 8) and word choice. 'Typewriting' is uncommon; use 'typing' (gerund). 'I write more number' is ungrammatical—likely meant 'I type more often' or 'I type more words/numbers.' Use the gerund after 'improve my' and choose correct adverb/adjective ('more often') to indicate frequency.