Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Limit to ≤5 sentences.

例: I prefer typing for most digital tasks, but I write by hand during class. For example, typing is faster for emails and assignments, while handwriting helps me remember notes better during lectures.

提案: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, correct basic grammar (subject-verb agreement), and give a brief supporting detail. Remove hesitations and redundant words.

例: I don't have my own computer, so I don't type every day on a personal device. Instead, I use my sister's laptop regularly to complete assignments and other daily tasks.

提案: Use correct past tense and a clear structure: state when you learned, then give concise supporting details. Avoid filler sounds and combine related ideas with linking words.

例: I learned to type in fourth grade when my school introduced a computer class. During that course we were taught typing, basic programming, and general computer skills, so I became comfortable using a keyboard early on.

提案: Make your answer specific and logical: state your main method of improvement, explain how often you practice, and mention any concrete techniques. Keep sentences natural and correct (e.g., 'often' not 'oftenly').

例: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice on my sister's laptop. I type assignments and notes daily, and I also use online typing exercises to increase speed and accuracy.

× I don't have a desktop uh, neither I have laptop but my sister have and I use her laptop to type the assignments for my uh, daily use.

✓ I don't have a desktop, nor do I have a laptop, but my sister has one and I use her laptop to type my assignments for daily use.

Incorrect pronoun and auxiliary use: 'neither I have' is ungrammatical; use 'nor do I have' for negation with inversion. 'my sister have' should be 'my sister has' for subject-verb agreement. 'the assignments for my daily use' is awkward; 'my assignments for daily use' is clearer.

× I learn when I was class 4, our school had a subject named computer where students are, uh, teach to uh, how to type, how to program, how to use the computer.

✓ I learned when I was in class 4; our school had a subject called Computer where students were taught how to type, how to program, and how to use the computer.

Tense and passive/verb form errors: 'I learn when I was' mixes present and past; use past 'learned'. 'class 4' needs preposition 'in'. 'named computer' is better as 'called Computer'. 'students are teach to' is incorrect; use past passive 'students were taught'. Also list items need parallel structure and commas.

× So I'm very familiar with typing on the keyboard.

✓ So I am very familiar with typing on the keyboard.

Contraction is acceptable, but ensure tense consistency: 'I'm very familiar' is present and correct; correction only expands contraction for formality. No grammatical error beyond style; kept present tense to match meaning.

× I improved my typings as today's generations are running in digital markets, so I often do my assignment on my sister's laptop.

✓ I improved my typing because today's generation is active in digital environments, so I often do my assignments on my sister's laptop.

Word choice and number errors: 'typings' is incorrect; use uncountable 'typing'. 'today's generations' should be singular 'today's generation'. 'running in digital markets' is awkward; 'active in digital environments' fits meaning. 'assignment' should be plural 'assignments' for general activities.

× Or when I'm doing assignments or, uh, when I'm in a class, I prefer writing handwriting.

✓ Or when I'm doing assignments or when I'm in class, I prefer handwriting.

Redundant and incorrect form: 'writing handwriting' is redundant and ungrammatical; 'handwriting' alone expresses writing by hand. 'in a class' is acceptable but 'in class' is more natural. Keep gerund 'doing assignments' and noun 'handwriting'.

× So I improve my writings or typing by using them oftenly or daily.

✓ So I improve my writing and typing by using them often or daily.

Plural and adverb errors: 'writings' is usually uncountable 'writing'. 'oftenly' is not a word; correct adverb is 'often'. Use 'and' instead of 'or' for both skills.