Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and avoid repetition and filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Reduce hesitations and correct small grammatical errors (e.g., "when it comes to"). Aim for 2–4 sentences and use varied vocabulary like "handwrite" and "type".

例: I like both handwriting and typing. For personal journals I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and helps me reflect, whereas I type letters and emails because it's faster and more convenient for sharing.

提案: Answer directly and avoid long pauses and repetitions. Use correct grammar (e.g., "I usually use a laptop"), and give 2–3 concise reasons with linking words like "because" and "so". Use precise adjectives (e.g., "sleek interface" or "lightweight") instead of vague words like "careful."

例: I usually use a laptop because I don't own a desktop. My MacBook is lightweight and portable, and I like its sleek interface and comfortable keyboard, so it's ideal for studying and working on the go.

提案: Give a clear, confidently phrased answer with chronological details and avoid repeating phrases. Begin with a direct statement of time, then briefly add relevant context or a short anecdote. Use correct tense and smoother expressions (e.g., "the first time I typed on a keyboard").

例: I first learned to type when I was in Grade 5. After I passed a scholarship exam, my father bought me my first desktop computer, and that was when I started practicing on a keyboard regularly.

提案: Be specific about methods and avoid generic phrases and pronoun confusion. State one or two concrete strategies (e.g., practicing with typing programs, doing daily exercises, using correct posture), and use linking words like "for example" or "also". Keep answers concise and grammatically correct.

例: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice. For example, I use online typing tutors for 15 minutes daily and type my university assignments on a laptop, which helps increase my speed and accuracy over time.

× I prefer both because I enjoy enjoying in different ways when I'm typing and when I'm writing, uh, usually, uh, I use handwriting for my journal writing because I like to, uh, spend hours with my handwriting when I write my journal.

✓ I prefer both because I enjoy them in different ways when I'm typing and when I'm writing. Usually, I use handwriting for my journal because I like to spend hours writing in my journal.

The phrase 'enjoy enjoying' is redundant and incorrect; use 'enjoy' followed by an object or gerund. 'Enjoy them' refers to 'typing and writing'. 'Journal writing' is better as 'writing in my journal' or 'my journal' for natural English. Also remove unnecessary filler words. Suggestion: avoid repeating 'enjoy' and use clear objects or gerunds (e.g., 'I enjoy typing' or 'I enjoy writing in my journal').

× But when it's come to. Feel things like typing letter, message or emails.

✓ But when it comes to tasks like typing letters, messages, or emails,

'When it's come to' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'when it comes to'. 'Feel things' is unclear and likely wrong; use 'tasks' or 'things' instead. Nouns 'letters', 'messages', 'emails' should be plural or parallel and need articles only if specific. Suggestion: use the fixed expression 'when it comes to' and list items in parallel form.

× I prefer uh typing method because it's very easy to access, very quick and umm.

✓ I prefer typing because it's very easy to access and very quick.

'Typing method' is awkward; simpler 'typing' is natural. No definite article needed. Also remove trailing filler. Suggestion: use concise nouns and avoid unnecessary articles when speaking generally.

× I usually using laptop because I don't have a desktop.

✓ I usually use a laptop because I don't have a desktop.

Subject-verb form error: 'using' needs auxiliary 'am' to be progressive ('I am usually using') but intended meaning is habitual, so simple present 'use' is correct. Also include the indefinite article 'a' before 'laptop'. Suggestion: for habitual actions use simple present ('I usually use').

× I think it's very convenient and easy to uh take it anywhere and lightweight uh and also I have a MacBook.

✓ I think it's very convenient, easy to carry anywhere, and lightweight. I also have a MacBook.

'Lightweight' is an adjective and should describe the laptop; 'take it anywhere' is awkward—use 'carry' or 'take with me'. Split into two sentences for clarity. Suggestion: use appropriate verb for action (carry) and place adjectives correctly.

× I love in love with MacBook because it's one of my dream laptop.

✓ I am in love with my MacBook because it's one of my dream laptops.

Incorrect verb phrase 'love in love' should be 'am in love'. 'My' needed to show possession. 'One of my dream laptop' requires plural 'laptops'. Suggestion: use 'am in love with' and make nouns agree in number when using 'one of'.

× I bought it umm umm, the interface also very umm. Careful and I love the interface of my laptop and keyboard.

✓ I bought it a while ago. The interface is also very nice, and I love the interface of my laptop and its keyboard.

Sentence fragments and tense/word choice issues: after 'I bought it' add time phrase or end the sentence. 'Careful' is wrong word for describing interface; use 'nice', 'clean', or 'user-friendly'. Ensure verb 'is' for present description. Add 'its' to clarify keyboard belongs to laptop. Suggestion: use appropriate adjectives for UI and complete sentences with verbs.

× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard? Student: I can't remember the actual word I learned to learn how to type but I just remember when I was grade 5 I passed my grade 5 scholarship.

✓ I can't remember the exact day I learned how to type, but I remember that when I was in grade 5 I passed my grade 5 scholarship exam.

'Actual word' is incorrect; use 'exact day' or 'exact time'. 'I learned to learn how to type' is redundant; use 'I learned how to type'. Include 'in' before grade 5. Specify 'exam' after 'scholarship' for clarity. Suggestion: avoid redundant verbs and use precise time expressions.

× Then my father gifted me a desktop that was the my very first desktop.

✓ Then my father gifted me a desktop; it was my very first computer.

The phrase 'that was the my very first desktop' is ungrammatical—remove extra articles and use clearer noun 'computer' for variety. Use semicolon or separate sentences. Suggestion: avoid repeating the noun and use correct articles ('my').

× Umm I think when I was grade 5 the that was the first time I type. Keyboard and uh yeah, I think that was the first time I typed using keyboard.

✓ I think when I was in grade 5, that was the first time I used a keyboard. Yes, I think that was the first time I typed using a keyboard.

Use 'in grade 5'. For past events use past tense 'used' and 'typed'. 'Type' should be 'typed'. Add articles 'a keyboard'. Suggestion: maintain past tense consistently for past events and include necessary articles.

× I think it's comes with consistency when I, when you also typing a lot or using many times in the day, it's, uh, become, uh, it's become improving our ability.

✓ I think it comes with consistency: when you type a lot or use it many times during the day, your ability improves.

'It's comes' is incorrect; should be 'it comes'. Mix of pronouns 'I' and 'you' confusing—use 'you' for general statements. Use base verb 'type' for general habit. 'Become improving' is wrong; say 'your ability improves'. Suggestion: keep subject consistent and use simple present for general truths.

× Umm, and also, uh, I use sing, I use keyboard for many time because.

✓ Also, I use the keyboard a lot.

'Sing' is unclear (likely mis-speech) and unnecessary. 'Use keyboard' needs article 'the' and 'many time' should be 'a lot' or 'many times'. Suggestion: use 'the keyboard' and 'a lot' for frequency.

× Uh, I use my laptop for my high studies also so I think it helps me to improve my computer ability.

✓ I use my laptop for my higher studies, so I think it helps me improve my computer skills.

'High studies' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'higher studies' or 'my studies'. 'Improve my computer ability' is unnatural; use 'computer skills'. Remove unnecessary 'to' before 'improve'. Suggestion: use natural collocations like 'higher studies' and 'computer skills'.