Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific reasons with linking words, avoid repetition and small grammatical errors. Replace 'for for us to do something on' with 'for tasks on' and 'must be used the pen and paper' with 'requires pen and paper.'

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient for tasks on my phone or computer. For example, I can quickly edit and share documents online, whereas handwriting is slower and harder to revise.

提案: Use a clear topic sentence, correct tense and word order, and add one specific detail. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' correctly. Replace 'when I going to work' with 'when I go to work' and 'we use a lot on computer on typing' with 'we use computers a lot.'

例: Yes. I usually type on my laptop when I go to work because we use computers a lot. For example, I type emails to clients and prepare reports on my laptop every day.

提案: Begin with a clear time phrase and correct grammatical errors. Use linking words like 'at first' and 'because' properly. Be specific about what made it difficult and how you improved. Replace phrases like 'final year of primary school' with 'the final year of primary school' and 'keyboard out layout' with 'keyboard layout.'

例: I learned to type in the final year of primary school. At first it was difficult because the keyboard layout was unfamiliar and my fingers were uncoordinated, but after regular practice I became much faster and more accurate.

提案: Answer directly with a topic sentence explaining how you improve typing, use past and present consistently, and give specific actions and frequency. Remove unrelated time clause or combine it smoothly. Use linking words 'for example' or 'also.'

例: I improved my typing through regular practice in school and at home. For example, in grade six we had computer class twice a week, and I also practiced typing exercises at home to increase my speed and accuracy.

× Personally, I prefer typing rather than handwriting because typing is much more convenient for for us to do something on cell phone or computer, while handwriting must be used the pen and paper to do it.

✓ Personally, I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is much more convenient for us to do things on a cell phone or computer, while handwriting requires a pen and paper.

Problems: 'prefer X rather than Y' should be 'prefer X to Y' (preposition choice). 'for for us' has duplicated word. 'do something on cell phone or computer' needs plural 'things' and articles: 'a cell phone or computer'. 'must be used the pen and paper to do it' is incorrect verb and article use — use 'requires a pen and paper'. Suggestion: use 'prefer X to Y', remove duplicate words, use correct articles and pluralization, and choose appropriate verb (require).

× Yes, I usually type on my laptop when I going to work because nowadays we use a lot on computer on typing.

✓ Yes, I usually type on my laptop when I go to work because nowadays we use computers a lot for typing.

Problems: 'when I going to work' is missing auxiliary 'am' or should be simple present 'I go' for habitual action (tense). 'we use a lot on computer on typing' has incorrect word order and prepositions; use 'use computers a lot for typing'. Suggestion: use simple present 'I go' for habitual situations and place prepositions correctly: 'use computers for typing'.

× For example I use e-mail typing with my client.

✓ For example, I type emails to my clients.

Problems: 'use e-mail typing with my client' mixes nouns and verbs incorrectly and wrong preposition 'with'. Better: 'I type emails to my clients' or 'I use email to communicate with my clients'. Also add comma after introductory phrase. Suggestion: make verb and object clear and choose correct preposition ('to' or 'with' depending on phrasing).

× I learned to type on a keyboard when I was a final year of primary school.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in my final year of primary school.

Problems: 'was a final year' missing preposition 'in' and possessive 'my' for that period. Use 'in my final year' to indicate time in past. Suggestion: include 'in' and 'my' to correctly describe the school year in past tense context.

× At first I found it very difficult because the keyboard out layout was unfamiliar and I had a little patties so my finger feels uncoordinated until I practice regularly.

✓ At first I found it very difficult because the keyboard layout was unfamiliar and I had weak typing skills, so my fingers felt uncoordinated until I practiced regularly.

Problems: 'keyboard out layout' is wrong word order; use 'keyboard layout'. 'I had a little patties' is unclear and likely wrong word choice — meant 'little practice' or 'weak skills'. 'my finger feels uncoordinated' mixes present with past; should match past 'felt'. 'until I practice regularly' should be past 'practiced'. Suggestion: use correct noun phrases ('keyboard layout'), choose correct vocabulary ('practice' or 'skills'), and keep past tense consistent.

× I was a grade six student.

✓ I was a sixth-grade student.

Problems: word order and form: 'grade six' should be 'sixth-grade' as an adjective before student. Past tense is fine but structure should be 'sixth-grade student'. Suggestion: use ordinal form 'sixth' and hyphenate when used adjectivally.

× We have a computer class.

✓ We had a computer class.

Problems: In context the student is describing past schooling, so tense should be past ('had') to match surrounding sentences. Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense when discussing past events.

× We have to practice it typing on computer cards regularly, like twice a week and I usually I used to practice typing at home as well.

✓ We had to practice typing on computer cards regularly, like twice a week, and I usually practiced typing at home as well.

Problems: 'practice it typing' has incorrect placement of 'it' and gerund form: should be 'practice typing'. 'have to' should be past 'had to' to match context. 'I usually I used to practice' is redundant and incorrect combination of 'usually' and 'used to'; choose one and keep tense consistent: 'I usually practiced' or 'I used to practice'. Suggestion: use 'practice + -ing' for actions, avoid redundant auxiliaries, and keep tense consistent.