Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and link the two preferences clearly. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one specific reason for each preference using a linking word (e.g., "however" or "but"). Avoid redundancy and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer typing for projects and assignments because it’s faster and easier to edit. However, for personal letters I choose handwriting, as a handwritten note feels more heartfelt and special.

提案: Give a clear direct answer and use correct tense and articles. Start with a short topic sentence about current habit, then contrast with past habit using a linking word like "previously". Correct grammatical errors like articles and verb forms.

例: I don’t type every day at the moment. Previously I used laptop keyboards more often than desktop ones because I found laptops more convenient.

提案: Make the timeline clear and simplify the story. Use one or two sentences: state when you learned and give a specific brief context. Fix tense consistency and unnecessary details.

例: I learned to type when I was in primary school. I practiced on my cousin’s desktop computer when I visited, which helped me get more comfortable with the keyboard.

提案: Provide a clear, current routine with specific methods and logical linking. Use correct verb forms and avoid vague phrases like "anything." Keep it to 2–3 sentences and mention measurable ways you track improvement (e.g., timing, accuracy).

例: I improve my typing by practicing daily on typing websites and timed tests to boost speed and accuracy. I also type short articles or notes on my laptop to maintain consistency and check my progress with online accuracy reports.

× In terms of making outputs like projects, assignments, I prefer typing.

✓ In terms of producing outputs like projects and assignments, I prefer typing.

The original uses 'making outputs' which is unnatural; 'producing outputs' or simply 'producing' fits present simple context of preferences. Also use 'projects and assignments' with conjunction 'and' for correct coordination. Suggestion: use natural collocations (produce/complete) and connect items with 'and'.

× But when it comes to letters, especially expressing your feeling to someone, I prefer it handwritten because it is more heartwarming and rare to experience now.

✓ But when it comes to letters, especially when expressing your feelings to someone, I prefer them handwritten because they are more heartwarming and rare to find nowadays.

Pronoun agreement: 'letters' is plural so use 'them' not 'it'. 'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings' in this context. 'Handwritten' modifies 'letters' so plural verb 'are' is needed. 'Rare to experience now' is awkward; use 'rare to find nowadays'. Suggestion: match pronouns and plurality and choose natural adverbials like 'nowadays'.

× Right now I don't really do typing, however before I use laptop keyboards more than desktop keyboard.

✓ Right now I don't really type; however, before I used laptop keyboards more than desktop keyboards.

Do not use the noun 'typing' with 'do' here; simple present 'I don't really type' is correct. For past reference use simple past 'used' not present 'use'. Also ensure plural agreement: 'desktop keyboards'. Suggestion: use 'type' for the activity and match tense and plurality.

× I learned to type on a keyboard when I was on grade school when I went to my cousin's house and they have a desktop set up so I used to play there and it usually uses the district K keyboard.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in grade school; I went to my cousin's house where they had a desktop set up, so I used to play there, and it usually had a 'D' key keyboard.

Multiple issues: use 'in grade school' not 'on'. Replace second 'when' with a relative clause 'where'. Maintain past tense consistency: 'had' and 'used to'. 'It usually uses the district K keyboard' is unclear and ungrammatical; likely meant a keyboard with a 'D' key or specific layout — I changed to 'had a 'D' key keyboard' as plausible correction. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense, use correct preposition 'in', and break long sentence into clearer clauses.

× Before I used to play games that requires your typing speed and accuracy, but right now I used to improve my typing by constantly practicing everyday or typing anything on a laptop, creating something and while ensuring accuracy since.

✓ Before, I used to play games that required typing speed and accuracy, but right now I improve my typing by practicing every day or typing anything on a laptop, creating things while ensuring accuracy.

Use past 'required' to match 'used to'. 'Requires your typing speed' should be 'required typing speed' without second-person 'your'. 'Right now I used to improve' mixes tenses; use present 'I improve'. 'Practicing every day' is correct gerund usage; 'creating something and while ensuring accuracy since' is ungrammatical—simplify to 'creating things while ensuring accuracy'. Suggestion: maintain tense consistency, use correct verb + -ing forms, and avoid redundant words like 'since' here.