Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (because, for example). Avoid repetition and incorrect forms (e.g., "like to type", "laptop"). Keep within 3–4 sentences.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and more convenient. For example, I can type on my laptop or phone anywhere, so I can study or work while travelling. Also, typed notes are easier to organize and edit than paper ones.

提案: Give a clear direct answer first (desktop, laptop, or both), then provide specific contexts and a brief reason. Use correct verb forms and linking words (for example, at home, at school). Avoid unclear phrases and vocabulary errors.

例: I use both, but mostly my laptop. At home I sometimes use a desktop, but I take my laptop to school because it is portable. For example, I can study in the library or a cafe without carrying heavy equipment.

提案: Answer directly with a clear time reference (e.g., during the COVID-19 pandemic) and then explain briefly how you learned. Use past tense and avoid awkward phrasing. Keep it concise and coherent with linking words (because, so, then).

例: I learned to type during the COVID-19 lockdown when classes moved online. Because all lessons and assignments were digital, I practised typing every day and gradually improved my speed and accuracy.

提案: Provide specific methods you use to improve typing (practice, lessons, online tools) and give one or two concrete examples. Use correct tenses and clearer vocabulary; avoid filler words. Mention frequency or measurable improvement if possible.

例: I improve my typing by practising daily. For example, I use online typing tutors for 15 minutes a day and I also type messages and game chats often, which helps my speed. As a result, my words-per-minute has increased over time.

× Well, probably in this digital era as students like me, I'm I'm pretty like to typing on my computer and my laptop's cause it's all pretty convenient and effective.

✓ Well, probably in this digital era, as a student like me, I prefer typing on my computer and my laptop because it's convenient and effective.

Incorrect verb and expression usage: 'I'm pretty like to typing' mixes 'like' and 'prefer' and incorrect verb form. Use simple present 'prefer' to state habitual preference and 'typing' as a gerund after 'prefer' can be used with 'prefer typing' or use infinitive 'to type'. Also 'my laptop's cause' is informal and incorrect; use 'because'. Improve clarity and article use: 'a student' not 'students' when referring to self.

× Like you can learn everywhere that you wanted to do or learn to learn and have free time expect like handwriting, you have to bring your paper with you.

✓ For example, you can learn anywhere you want and have free time, whereas with handwriting you have to carry your paper with you.

Incorrect prepositions and word forms: 'everywhere that you wanted to do' is wrong; use 'anywhere you want'. 'expect' is wrong word; use 'whereas' or 'while' to contrast. 'bring your paper' is acceptable but 'carry your paper' is more natural. Also remove redundant words like 'to do' and 'learn to learn'.

× Well, probably I'm do both, you know, at home I'm takes on my keyboard, yeah.

✓ Well, probably I do both. At home I use my keyboard, yeah.

Subject-verb agreement and wrong verb forms: 'I'm do both' should be 'I do both'. 'I'm takes on my keyboard' mixes 'I am' with third person 'takes'; correct is 'I use my keyboard'. Keep simple present for habitual actions.

× And otherwise at school, so every, every, you know, other environment.

✓ And at school or in other environments.

Fragment and redundancy: original is a fragment with repeated fillers. Simplify to a concise phrase 'at school or in other environments' to convey meaning.

× So I'm love to take on Next up 'cause I didn't have to bring, you know, my keep or belong with me every day for holiday.

✓ So I like to take my laptop because I don't have to carry my computer with me every day when I travel.

Incorrect pronouns and verb forms: 'I'm love' is incorrect; use 'I like' or 'I love'. 'take on Next up' is unclear; likely 'take my laptop'. 'didn't have to' wrong tense; use 'don't have to' for present habitual. 'my keep or belong' is incorrect nouns; use 'my computer' or 'my laptop'. 'for holiday' -> 'when I travel' or 'on holiday'.

× Well, that a memorable question, you know, 'cause this appearance, COVID-19, you know, attacked my country and so every people have to stay online to learn and studies work and studies.

✓ Well, that's a memorable question, because when COVID-19 appeared and affected my country, people had to stay online for lessons and work.

Tense and article issues: 'this appearance, COVID-19, attacked my country' is awkward and mixes tenses. Use past 'appeared' and 'affected' for events that happened. 'every people' incorrect; use 'people' or 'everyone'. 'have to stay online to learn and studies work and studies' is ungrammatical; use 'had to stay online for lessons and work'.

× So that's where that's when I'm running to use my laptop and I know how to type on my laptop.

✓ So that's when I started using my laptop and learned how to type on it.

Incorrect tense and verb forms: 'I'm running to use' is wrong; use past 'I started using'. 'I know how to type' should be past 'learned how to type' because referring to when the skill was acquired. Also replace 'my laptop' with 'it' for variety.

× Well, kind of like I'm texting with my friends are every single days on my laptop and besides I'm playing video games on online and text with my friends in chat and otherwise I'm searching online with my computer.

✓ Well, I text with my friends every day on my laptop, and I also play online video games and chat with them. I also search online with my computer.

Incorrect use of progressive and plural forms: Remove unnecessary 'I'm' before habitual actions and use simple present 'I text' for routine. 'every single days' incorrect number agreement; use 'every day'. 'playing video games on online' wrong preposition; use 'online video games'. Simplify sentence structure and use consistent tense.

× So that's gonna be improved.

✓ So that has improved my typing.

Incorrect tense and informal contraction: 'gonna be improved' is informal and suggests future; the intended meaning is that these activities improved typing in the past or present. Use 'has improved' or 'improves' depending on context. Prefer formal 'will' if future is intended, but here present perfect fits.