Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は直接的で分かりやすいですが、情報がやや冗長で構成（トピック文＋補足）が曖昧です。5文以内に収め、接続語を使って理由と具体例を明確に分けるとより自然で効果的になります。また、“bad handwriting” を別の言い方（例えば “my handwriting is hard to read”）で表現すると丁寧です。

例: I prefer typing because it's much faster and my handwriting is hard to read. For example, when I take notes quickly they become messy, so typing helps me keep clear records and share them easily.

提案: 答えは内容を伝えていますが、冗長な繰り返し（desktop, laptop, keyboardの混同）と文の焦点が不明瞭です。まず結論を明確にし、その後に仕事の具体的な内容を一貫して述べ、接続語（for example, so, therefore）を適切に使って論理を整えましょう。

例: Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because my job involves reviewing and summarizing documents from companies. For example, I read submissions, extract key points, and type concise summaries for my manager, so I rely on the laptop constantly.

提案: 良い構成で過去の経験を述べていますが、繰り返し表現（from... and from...）や語彙の自然さを改善できます。英語らしい表現にして、具体的な例や感想を短く付け加えると説得力が増します。

例: I learned to type in elementary school during a computer class where the teacher taught basic skills like typing and internet searching. I enjoyed those lessons because practicing games and exercises made learning fun.

提案: 答えは正直で分かりやすいですが、少し冗長で語順がやや不自然です。簡潔に結論を述べ、日常の具体的な活動（長文作成、速読など）を例示すると説得力が増します。また、将来の改善方法について一文加えると好印象です。

例: I don't practice typing formally; daily use at work has naturally improved my speed. For instance, summarizing long documents every day helps me type faster, but I plan to use an online typing tutor occasionally to boost accuracy.

× I prefer typing because it's much faster to write things down and also I have a bad handwriting and I always hesitate to show my notes to other people.

✓ I prefer typing because it's much faster to write things down, and I have bad handwriting, so I always hesitate to show my notes to other people.

The student used 'a bad handwriting' which incorrectly uses the article 'a' with the uncountable noun 'handwriting'; also the sentence is run-on. Correct by removing 'a' and linking clauses with 'so' for cause and adding commas to improve clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× Yes, I type on the desktop keyboard every day because it's related to my job.

✓ Yes, I type on a desktop keyboard every day because it is related to my job.

Using the definite article 'the' implies a specific desktop previously mentioned; 'a desktop keyboard' is more appropriate. Also expanded contraction for formality consistency. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× My job is reviewing the documents submitted by the companies and I have to summarize the details of the documents and I do the work with my laptop.

✓ My job is to review documents submitted by companies; I have to summarize the details, and I do this work on my laptop.

Use of gerund 'reviewing' after 'My job is' is acceptable but 'to review' is clearer. 'The documents' and 'the companies' are overly specific; plural without articles is natural. Replace repeated 'the documents' and restructure to avoid run-on sentence. Use 'on my laptop' rather than 'with'. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Therefore I use my keyboard.

✓ Therefore, I use my keyboard.

Mainly punctuation: add comma after 'Therefore'. No major preposition error but comma improves sentence flow. This is a minor structural correction. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× There was a computer class in my school and the teacher taught us the basic skills of computer, starting from how to type with a keyboard and from how to search on the Internet.

✓ There was a computer class at my school, and the teacher taught us basic computer skills, starting with how to type on a keyboard and how to search the Internet.

Use 'at my school' rather than 'in my school'. 'Basic skills of computer' is incorrect — use 'basic computer skills'. Use 'starting with' not 'starting from', and 'type on a keyboard' is the standard collocation. Remove 'on the' before 'Internet'. Grammar problem type ID: 3

× It was very fun to learn them.

✓ It was a lot of fun to learn those things.

'Very fun' is informal; 'a lot of fun' or 'very enjoyable' is more natural. 'Them' is vague; use 'those things' or 'those skills'. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× Actually, I don't do anything particular to improve my typing in my work.

✓ Actually, I do not do anything particular to improve my typing at work.

Use 'at work' rather than 'in my work'. Contraction expanded for consistency. No need for present participle change, but prepositional correction fits listed types. Grammar problem type ID: 10

× I use my computer and keyboard every day.

✓ I use my computer and keyboard every day.

This sentence is grammatically correct; keep present simple to describe habitual action. No change required. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Therefore doing my work is kind of a training of typing for me, so my typing skills are improved day by day.

✓ Therefore, doing my work is a kind of typing training for me, so my typing skills improve day by day.

Add comma after 'Therefore'. 'Training of typing' is awkward; use 'typing training'. Use 'improve' rather than 'are improved' to keep active voice for gradual improvement. 'Day by day' is fine. Grammar problem type ID: 26}]} FiscalíaGrammarArguments could not be parsed. Please use the specified interface.}