Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your response more grammatical, concise, and slightly more specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and correct singular/plural and verb forms.

例: I prefer handwriting to typing because it allows me more flexibility in organizing information. For example, I can draw diagrams, highlight key points, and rearrange notes on the page, which helps me remember things better.

提案: Be more concise and correct grammar (tense and articles). Use a clear topic sentence then one or two supporting details. Avoid irrelevant information and small errors like 'drive' instead of 'carry' or 'move'.

例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day. My father gave me a laptop for my birthday, and I prefer it because it's portable and convenient to use anywhere, unlike a desktop computer.

提案: Organize the answer with a clear time reference, use correct verb forms, and finish the sentence. Provide one concrete detail about how you practised to make it more specific.

例: I learned to type in my third year of college during the summer holidays. I practised every day on simple exercises and assignments, which helped me increase speed and accuracy over a few months.

提案: Be succinct and correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, tense). Mention specific features or routines (time spent, types of exercises) to show progress. Use linking words to show sequence or result.

例: I improve my typing by practising daily on a typing app installed on my laptop. The app offers progressive levels and timed drills, and by spending about 20 minutes a day I have steadily increased my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting to typing because handwriting give us more flexibility and convenience to write.

✓ I prefer handwriting to typing because handwriting gives us more flexibility and convenience when writing.

The verb 'give' must agree with the singular subject 'handwriting', so use 'gives' (subject-verb agreement). Also 'to write' is awkward after 'convenience'; use 'when writing' or 'for writing' to make the phrase natural and concise. Grammar problem type ID:27

× We can use a handwritten notes and can design them accordingly.

✓ We can use handwritten notes and design them accordingly.

The phrase 'a handwritten notes' mixes a singular article 'a' with plural 'notes'. Remove the article and pluralize correctly: 'handwritten notes'. Also drop the second 'can' to avoid redundancy: 'use... and design' is sufficient. Grammar problem type ID:22

× I find handwriting to be much easier than typing.

✓ I find handwriting much easier than typing.

The infinitive 'to be' is unnecessary here; 'find X much easier than Y' is the natural structure. This corrects wordiness and improves fluency. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I have a laptop with me and it was gifted by my father on my birthday and I usually type everything on my laptop and I find it much convenient as I can drive the laptop anywhere anytime but I can't move a desktop.

✓ I have a laptop that my father gifted me for my birthday, and I usually type everything on it. I find it much more convenient because I can carry the laptop anywhere, but I can't move a desktop.

Use simple past 'gifted me' (correct past-tense phrasing) and prefer 'that my father gifted me for my birthday' instead of passive 'was gifted by'. Replace 'drive the laptop' with 'carry the laptop' (correct verb choice). Use 'much more convenient' to compare properly. Break long run-on sentence into two for clarity and correct punctuation. Grammar problem type ID:5

× So yes I type on laptop keyboard.

✓ So yes, I type on a laptop keyboard.

Missing article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard' (article error) and missing comma after 'So yes' for clarity. Also include 'a' to mark singular countable noun. Grammar problem type ID:11

× When I was in college, I had my summer vacations in 3rd year, so in that time I learned the typing I used to type every day and this daily routine helped me to learn typing and build more flexibility to.

✓ When I was in college, during the summer vacation of my third year I learned to type. I used to practice typing every day, and this routine helped me improve my speed and flexibility.

Use 'during the summer vacation of my third year' for natural phrasing. Replace 'learned the typing' with 'learned to type'. 'Used to practice' is better than 'used to type every day'. Remove awkward 'to' at the end and replace 'build more flexibility' with 'improve my speed and flexibility'. Ensure past-tense consistency. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I usually practice typing every day on an app which I have installed in my laptop.

✓ I usually practice typing every day on an app that I have installed on my laptop.

Use 'on my laptop' (not 'in') for software installed on a device. Also use 'that' instead of 'which' in restrictive relative clauses in spoken English. Article 'an app' is fine. Grammar problem type ID:11

× That app is very convenient and flexible.

✓ The app is very convenient and flexible.

Use 'the app' because the speaker already mentioned it; this is an article choice (definite article). 'That app' is possible but 'the app' is more natural here. The original verb 'is' is correct. Grammar problem type ID:22

× It has different levels and each level have a varying difficulty level.

✓ It has different levels, and each level has a varying degree of difficulty.

'Each level' is singular and requires the singular verb 'has' (subject-verb agreement). Also avoid repeating 'level' and 'difficulty level'; use 'a varying degree of difficulty' for clarity and to eliminate redundancy. Grammar problem type ID:27

× It helped me to improve my typing skills gradually.

✓ It helped me improve my typing skills gradually.

The verb 'helped' is correct in past tense; remove unnecessary 'to' after 'helped' (both 'helped me to improve' and 'helped me improve' are acceptable, but the shorter version is more natural). Ensure tense matches previous sentences referring to past practice. Grammar problem type ID:6