Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response more natural and concise: give a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, avoid repetitions, and add a brief reason with a linking word. Keep to 1–3 sentences.

例: I prefer handwriting because taking notes by hand helps me remember information better. For example, when I'm studying I retain concepts more easily, so I usually write key points in a notebook rather than typing them.

提案: Combine short sentences into a smooth, natural reply and correct vocabulary errors (e.g., 'segments' likely meant 'assignments' or 'documents'). Use a linking word to explain the reason briefly.

例: Yes, I type on my laptop every day because most of my work and studies are online; I use it for emails, assignments and research.

提案: This answer is clear and well structured. To improve further, add a linking word to connect ideas and a brief result or feeling to enrich the response.

例: I learned to type when I was in primary school. We had regular computer lessons where the teacher taught proper finger placement, and we practiced with typing games, which helped me become faster and more accurate.

提案: Correct grammar and make the answer more concise: use a linking word to connect reason and result, and specify how these activities help (e.g., speed, accuracy, consistency).

例: I improve my typing by playing typing games and chatting with friends online because these activities are enjoyable, so I practice consistently and gradually increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting because I find writing notes by hand helps me remember information they please and typing, especially when I was when I'm studying.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I find that writing notes by hand helps me remember information better than typing, especially when I'm studying.

The original sentence has several pronoun and cohesion problems: 'they please' is incorrect and unclear (incorrect pronoun/reference) and there is a tense/confusion 'when I was when I'm studying.' Corrected by introducing 'that' for clarity, replacing 'they please' with 'better than typing' to make a clear comparison, and using consistent present progressive 'I'm studying.' Suggestion: keep pronouns referent clear and maintain consistent tense within the clause.

× Yes, I do. I type. I type on my laptop every day because most of my work and studying is done online now, so I use it for emails, segments and research.

✓ Yes, I do. I type on my laptop every day because most of my work and studying are done online now, so I use it for emails, assignments and research.

The sentence had repetition ('I type. I type') and a wrong noun 'segments' likely intended as 'assignments.' Also subject-verb agreement: 'work and studying' as compound subject should take plural verb 'are.' Corrected by removing repetition, fixing the noun to 'assignments,' and using 'are done online.' Suggestion: avoid repeating identical sentences and ensure compound subjects match verbs; choose correct vocabulary.

× I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school. We had regular computer lessons, our teacher told us proper finger placement and we practiced with typing games.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school. We had regular computer lessons; our teacher taught us proper finger placement and we practiced with typing games.

The original mixes past actions but uses 'told us' which is not wrong but 'taught us' is more appropriate for instruction (word choice). Also comma splice between independent clauses should be fixed; replaced with a semicolon and used 'taught' to better reflect teaching. Suggestion: use precise verbs for actions and avoid comma splices by joining clauses correctly.

× I improve my typing by practicing typing games and chatting with my friends online because this activities are fun and enjoyable so they are easy to stick.

✓ I improve my typing by playing typing games and chatting with my friends online because these activities are fun and enjoyable, so they are easy to stick with.

Problems: 'this activities' is wrong quantifier/pronoun agreement (singular 'this' vs plural 'activities'); also 'practicing typing games' is more naturally 'playing typing games.' 'Easy to stick' is incomplete; needs 'stick with.' Corrected by using plural demonstrative 'these,' more natural verb 'playing,' and full phrasal verb 'stick with.' Suggestion: ensure demonstratives agree in number with nouns and use complete phrasal verbs.