Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap doğal ancak dağınık ve bazı dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha doğrudan bir konu cümlesi kullanın, gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın ve nedenlerinizi daha spesifik hale getirin. Örneğin, "I prefer handwriting because it helps me concentrate and feel more creative" gibi net bir sebep verin. Ayrıca 'don't wanna' gibi konuşma dilini daha formal alternatiflerle ('do not want to') değiştirin ve 'technology devices' yerine 'digital devices' veya 'technology' kullanın.

例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me concentrate and makes me feel more creative. For example, when I write notes by hand I remember information better, so I often choose handwriting for studying or brainstorming.

提案: Cevap kısa ve belirsiz; 'someday' yanlış kullanımına dikkat edin. Netlik ve doğruluk ekleyin: ne kadar sıklıkla kullandığınızı açıkça söyleyin ve örnek verin. Bağlaçlarla cümleleri genişletin (e.g., 'but not every day, because...').

例: I usually type on a laptop or an iPad, but not every day because I often prefer handwriting for my personal notes. I type most often when I need to write emails or work on assignments.

提案: Cümle yapısı ve zaman kullanımı hatalı; ifadeler tekrar ediyor. Daha doğru bir geçmiş zamanı kullanın ve daha akıcı bir yapı tercih edin. Örneğin: 'I learned to type at school when I was X years old; my teacher showed us the basics and I've practiced since then.' gibi net bir zaman ve süreç belirtin.

例: I learned to type at school when I was about ten years old. My teacher taught us the basics, and I practiced regularly after class, so I have been typing comfortably ever since.

提案: Cevap tekrarlı, dolgu sözcükleri fazla ve net detay eksik. Günlük alışkanlıklarınızı ve gelişim yöntemlerinizi daha spesifik örneklerle açıklayın; örneğin dakiklik, egzersizler veya uygulamalar (typing apps) hakkında konuşun. 3-4 cümlede tekrarı azaltın ve akıcı bağlaçlar kullanın.

例: I improve my typing by practising daily, often using online typing exercises to increase my speed and accuracy. Besides that, I type emails and short stories regularly, which helps me maintain fluency and reduce errors.

× I definitely prefer handwriting because it makes me feel alive, you know, I don't wanna spend so much time in a technology devices, so I prefer handwriting.

✓ I definitely prefer handwriting because it makes me feel alive. I don't want to spend so much time on technological devices, so I prefer handwriting.

The sentence contains informal contraction 'wanna' which should be 'want to' in formal speech. 'In a technology devices' is ungrammatical: 'in' should be 'on' when referring to using devices, 'a' is incorrect with plural 'devices', and 'technology' should be the adjective 'technological'. Suggestions: replace 'wanna' with 'want to', change 'in' to 'on', remove the article 'a' before 'devices', and use 'technological' to modify 'devices'.

× I usually type on a laptop keyboard or iPad keyboard. Not every day, but someday, yeah.

✓ I usually type on a laptop keyboard or an iPad keyboard. Not every day, but sometimes, yes.

'iPad' should be preceded by the article 'an' because it begins with a vowel sound. 'Someday' means at some future time and is incorrect in this context; 'sometimes' (meaning occasionally) is appropriate. Also replace informal 'yeah' with 'yes' for formality. Suggestions: add 'an' before 'iPad', use 'sometimes' for frequency adverb, and use 'yes' instead of 'yeah' if a formal tone is required.

× I learned it from school, it was the developed. So naturally my teacher teach me for the first time and I and since then I can type.

✓ I learned it at school; it was developed there. My teacher taught me for the first time, and since then I have been able to type.

Several tense and form errors: 'from school' is acceptable but 'at school' is more natural. 'It was the developed' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'it was developed there' or omit entirely. 'Teach' should be past 'taught' to match 'learned'. The clause 'since then I can type' should use present perfect ('have been able to type') to indicate ability continuing from past to present. Suggestions: use past tense 'taught' for the teacher action, use present perfect 'have been able to' for ongoing ability, and rephrase 'it was developed' or remove if unclear.

× By typing every day. I really love typing. So it it, it's isn't hard for me to type every day. I love it. I will type novels and some emails. So I love it, yeah.

✓ I improve by typing every day. I really love typing, so it isn't hard for me to type each day. I write novels and some emails, so I enjoy it.

The original contains sentence fragments ('By typing every day.'), repetition ('it it'), incorrect contraction 'it's isn't' (double contraction), and inconsistency in tense/future intent ('I will type novels' sounds like future plan but likely refers to current activity). Use a full sentence 'I improve by typing every day.' Remove duplicate words and correct contraction to 'it isn't'. Replace 'will type' with 'write' if referring to regular activity; keep future only if planning to do so. Also replace informal 'yeah' with 'so I enjoy it' for clarity. Suggestions: form complete sentences, remove duplicate words, correct contractions, and ensure tense matches intended meaning.