Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers, correct grammar (e.g. "handwriting isn't as useful as typing"), and add one specific reason with a linking word. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use relevant vocabulary like "efficient," "convenient," or "digital."

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is more efficient and widely used in work and study. For example, typing lets me edit documents quickly and share them online, so it suits my modern lifestyle.

提案: Give a clear direct answer followed by one specific reason. Remove hesitations and correct grammar (e.g. "I type on a desktop every day because I don't own a laptop"). Use a linking word like "because" and a precise reason (e.g. "better performance"). Limit to 2 sentences.

例: I type on a desktop every day because I don't own a laptop. I prefer it since the desktop has better processing power, which helps when I work with large files.

提案: Start with a clear time expression and simplify the description. Remove fillers and improve grammar (e.g. "I learned to type in my first year of university when I joined the computer lab"). Add one specific detail about how you learned (course, practice, tutor) using a linking word like "because" or "so."

例: I learned to type during my first year at university when I joined the computer lab. There I took a basic computer course and practised regularly, which helped me become faster.

提案: Answer directly and give concrete methods with specific details and linking words. Avoid clichés and fillers; instead of general statements, mention tools or routines (e.g. "daily touch-typing exercises, online tests, or typing software"). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

例: I improve my typing by practising daily with online typing exercises and timed tests. I also use typing software to track my speed and accuracy, which helps me focus on my weak keys.

× Most probably I prefer typing more than handwriting because, uh, in modern lifestyle, handwriting isn't very as like typing uh, every, in every sector, like jobs, uh, study, umm, we.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because, in modern life, handwriting is not used as much as typing in many areas such as work and study.

Issues: (1) 'Most probably' and 'prefer' together are redundant and informal; 'I prefer' is sufficient. (2) 'prefer typing more than handwriting' is awkward—use 'prefer X to Y'. (3) 'modern lifestyle' better as 'modern life'. (4) 'handwriting isn't very as like typing' is ungrammatical; correct comparative form is 'not used as much as typing'. (5) 'every, in every sector' redundant; use 'in many areas such as work and study'. Suggestion: simplify sentences, use correct comparative structure 'not as ... as' and 'prefer X to Y'. This matches Grammar Problem Type IDs 13 and 26 but per list choose 13.' ,

× I type on desktop keyboard every day because I don't have any laptop.

✓ I type on a desktop keyboard every day because I don't have a laptop.

Issues: Missing article 'a' before 'desktop keyboard' and unnecessary 'any' before 'laptop'. Use 'a desktop keyboard' and 'a laptop' for a single countable item. This is an Article error (ID 22) and singular/plural consideration (ID 1) but primarily ID 22.' ,

× Uh, I was by uh computer because uh, computer uh, processing speed is more than laptop I guess.

✓ I use a desktop computer because its processing speed is higher than a laptop's, I guess.

Issues: 'I was by computer' is incorrect verb and preposition; use 'I use a desktop computer'. 'computer processing speed is more than laptop' needs possessive and comparative: 'its processing speed is higher than a laptop's'. Also add 'I guess' at end. This is a Sentence structure error (ID 26) and Incorrect use of prepositions/pronouns (IDs 11 and 12) but primarily ID 26.' ,

× I type on desktop keyboard every day because I don't have any laptop. Uh, I was by uh computer because uh, computer uh, processing speed is more than laptop I guess. So desktop.

✓ I type on a desktop keyboard every day because I don't have a laptop. I use a desktop computer because its processing speed is higher than a laptop's, I guess.

Combined correction for clarity and tense: replace 'I was by computer' with present 'I use a desktop computer' to match habitual action. Ensure articles are used: 'a desktop keyboard', 'a laptop'. Use possessive 'laptop's' and comparative 'higher than'. This addresses Past tense/misuse (ID 5) and Article errors (ID 22), but primarily ID 6 (Present tense issue) and ID 22.' ,

× Uh, when I was in BSS first year, then I admitted in Jalapao computer lab where uh, computer management system uh, was required.

✓ When I was in the first year of my BSS, I was admitted to the Jalapao computer lab where a computer management system was required.

Issues: Word order and articles: 'BSS first year' -> 'the first year of my BSS'; 'admitted in' should be 'admitted to'. Add article 'the' before lab and 'a' before 'computer management system'. Maintain past tense 'was'. This matches Past tense issue (ID 5) and Article errors (ID 22).' ,

× And then I was uh, learning how to type in keyboard.

✓ And then I learned how to type on the keyboard.

Issues: Use simple past 'learned' instead of past progressive unless emphasizing ongoing action. Preposition with 'type' is 'type on the keyboard', not 'in keyboard'. Add article 'the' before 'keyboard'. This covers Verb + -ing form (ID 8) and Incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).' ,

× Well, uh, improve my typing by, uh, regular practice.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing regularly.

Issues: Missing subject 'I' and awkward noun phrase 'regular practice'. Use gerund 'practicing regularly' and include subject. This is a Sentence structure error (ID 26) and Verb + -ing form issue (ID 8).' ,

× We know that practice makes a man perfect.

✓ We know that practice makes perfect.

'Makes a man perfect' is idiomatic but outdated and gender-specific. Use neutral idiom 'practice makes perfect'. Also keep present tense. This is Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and sentence style (ID 13 and 26) but primarily ID 13.' ,

× So I think I do it, uh, very generally. So I got improvement.

✓ So I think I do it quite regularly, and I have improved.

Issues: 'very generally' is wrong choice; use 'quite regularly'. 'So I got improvement' is incorrect past form; use present perfect 'I have improved' to indicate change up to now. This involves Present tense issue (ID 6) and Past tense issue (ID 5) but primarily ID 6.' }]}]}