Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason and an example. Avoid awkward phrases like "because of current days" and repetition. Use linking words such as "because" or "so" correctly.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because I use computers for most of my work. For example, I type emails and reports every day at my job, which is faster and easier to edit than writing by hand.

提案: Give a direct answer first, then explain briefly with clearer grammar. Reduce redundancy ("every day" repeated). Use correct prepositions and simpler sentence structure.

例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because I work from home and only have a laptop. As a result, I use it every day for emails, coding and online meetings.

提案: Provide a clear time reference and one concise reason or detail. Use past tense consistently and correct countable/uncountable forms ("a lot of free time"). Add a linking word like "so" to show cause.

例: I learned to type during the COVID lockdown when schools were closed, so I had a lot of free time to practice. I spent several weeks on online typing lessons and exercises.

提案: Answer directly and give a specific method for improvement. Avoid vague phrasing like "automatically improve." Use present tense for ongoing habits and explain how web development helped your typing with a clear link.

例: I improved my typing by learning web development a few years ago, which forced me to type code every day. Practicing coding and using online typing tests helped me increase speed and accuracy over time.

× Truly I prefer typing because of current days.

✓ I truly prefer typing these days.

The phrase 'because of current days' is ungrammatical. Use 'these days' to refer to the present period and place adverb 'truly' before the verb for natural word order: 'I truly prefer typing these days.' This fixes tense reference and word order.

× We work in computer more than a notebook, so we need to learn typing.

✓ We use computers more than notebooks, so we need to learn to type.

'Work in computer' is incorrect; use 'use computers'. Also 'learn typing' is unnatural; use the infinitive 'learn to type'. Pluralize 'computer' and 'notebook' because you mean them generally. This corrects structure and verb form.

× That's why I prefer typing.

✓ That's why I prefer typing.

This sentence is acceptable, but 'prefer typing' is a gerund phrase; no change needed. Included for completeness; no grammatical correction required.

× Usually I type on laptop keyboard in everyday because of I have a laptop and I work from I doing work at my home so I type with the laptop in everyday.

✓ Usually I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I have a laptop and I work from home, so I type on the laptop every day.

Multiple errors: missing article before 'laptop keyboard' (use 'a laptop keyboard'), 'in everyday' should be 'every day', 'because of I have' should be 'because I have', 'I work from I doing work at my home' is ungrammatical — use 'I work from home'. Use 'type on the laptop' rather than 'with the laptop'. Corrections fix article use, adverb phrase, pronoun and verb structure.

× When we faced the COVID time, that time our school are off so we got a lots of free time.

✓ When we faced the COVID period, our school was closed, so we had a lot of free time.

Use 'period' or 'time' with 'COVID' and past tense: 'school are off' is wrong; use 'school was closed'. 'We got a lots of free time' should be 'we had a lot of free time' — 'a lot of' not 'a lots of' and past tense 'had'. This corrects tense and quantifier.

× In that time I learned typing.

✓ At that time I learned to type.

Use the expression 'at that time' and the infinitive 'learned to type' rather than 'learned typing'. This is the correct past-tense phrasing.

× Few years ago I interested in web development.

✓ A few years ago I became interested in web development.

'Few years ago' needs an article: 'A few years ago'. 'I interested' is incorrect; use 'I became interested' to show a change of state in the past. This fixes tense and verb usage.

× That time I learned typing and coding.

✓ At that time I learned to type and to code.

Use infinitives 'learned to type' and 'to code' rather than gerunds after 'learned' for natural English. Also add 'At' for correct time expression.

× Usually it's automatically improve my typing skill.

✓ Usually it automatically improves my typing skills.

Use third-person singular verb 'improves' to agree with subject 'it' and place the adverb 'automatically' before the verb. Also use plural 'skills' or 'my typing skill' consistently; 'skills' is more natural. This corrects subject-verb agreement, adverb placement, and noun number.