Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and correct small grammar errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, use one linking phrase to add a specific reason, and avoidFillers like 'uh'. Also correct verb agreement and use articles: 'it helps me'.

例: I prefer handwriting. It feels more comfortable, and when I take notes by hand I understand concepts better and remember them for longer.

提案: Answer directly and keep tense consistency. Use one clear sentence to answer and one to explain. Remove hesitation sounds and unify tense: say 'I'm preparing' or 'I am preparing'.

例: No, I don't type every day. At the moment I'm preparing for the IELTS exam, so I mostly write in a notebook instead of using a computer.

提案: Provide a specific time and clear explanation. Use past simple and reduce repetition. Give one or two supporting details connected with linking words (e.g., 'because' or 'when') to explain how you learned.

例: I learned to type when I was a child. I practised on a laptop while playing games that required drawing and painting, so I became familiar with the keyboard controls early on.

提案: Answer directly, use clear timeline and specific methods for improvement (practice, online lessons, typing tests). Replace vague phrases with concrete actions and avoid fillers.

例: My typing has improved over time through regular practice. I built on the basics I learned as a child and now I practise typing passages and use online exercises, which lets me type a long paragraph in about five minutes.

× I prefer handwriting because I think it is more comfortable to me, uh and especially while studying it help me to understand the concept better and memorize for a long period of time.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I find it more comfortable, and especially when studying it helps me understand the concepts better and remember them for a long time.

Use 'comfortable to me' is incorrect; use 'comfortable' or 'comfortable for me' or 'I find it more comfortable'. 'While studying' is acceptable but 'when studying' sounds more natural. 'it help' is subject-verb agreement and tense problem (should be 'it helps'). 'understand the concept better and memorize for a long period of time' is awkward: use plural 'concepts' (more natural) and 'remember them for a long time'. Suggestions: use 'I find' + 'comfortable', ensure subject and verb agree ('it helps'), use 'remember' instead of 'memorize for a long period of time' for clarity.

× No, uh, currently I'm, I was preparing for my IELTS exam. Uh, so I don't need any desktop or laptop. Umm, I usually write on my notebook.

✓ No, currently I'm preparing for my IELTS exam, so I don't need a desktop or laptop. I usually write in my notebook.

Mixed tenses: 'I'm, I was preparing' is redundant and incorrect. Use present continuous 'I'm preparing' to show current activity. 'any desktop or laptop' is acceptable but 'a desktop or laptop' is more natural. Preposition with 'notebook' should be 'in my notebook' not 'on my notebook'. Suggestions: keep tense consistent (present continuous), use correct article 'a', and use 'in' for notebooks.

× When I was child, I used to type on the keyboard, uh, while playing games and uh, I used to, uh, in laptop, there is a feature, uh, in that we have to paint, right? I have to draw and then paint. Uh, uh, so I came, so I learned that time.

✓ When I was a child, I used to type on the keyboard while playing games. On the laptop there was a feature where we had to draw and then paint, so I learned at that time.

Missing article: 'When I was child' should be 'When I was a child' (singular with article). Sentence run-on and awkward phrasing: break into clearer sentences. 'in laptop' should be 'on the laptop' and tense consistent 'there was a feature' (past). 'we have to paint' should be past 'we had to draw and then paint'. 'I came, so I learned that time' is incorrect; use 'so I learned at that time'. Suggestions: add the article 'a', use 'on the laptop', maintain past tense and simplify sentence structure.

× I think with time my typing has been improved, uh, because when I was child, uh, I knew the basics and now I can easily type a long paragraph, uh, within just 5 minutes, yeah.

✓ I think over time my typing has improved because when I was a child I learned the basics, and now I can easily type a long paragraph in just five minutes.

'has been improved' is passive and unnatural here; use active present perfect 'has improved'. Missing article: 'when I was child' -> 'when I was a child'. 'I knew the basics' is okay but 'I learned the basics' fits better with development. 'within just 5 minutes' -> 'in just five minutes' is more natural. Suggestions: use 'has improved', include articles, and use 'in' for time duration; spell out small numbers in formal speech if desired.