Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and informal fillers ('cause', 'each and everyone').

例: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal. For example, I keep a diary and writing by hand helps me remember events more vividly and reflect on my feelings.

提案: Give a direct answer, then provide one or two specific reasons using linking words; avoid awkward phrasing and unnecessary generalizations. Correct grammar (e.g. 'type on a desktop keyboard', 'typing quickly').

例: Yes, I type on a desktop keyboard every day because my job requires a lot of data entry. Also, I enjoy improving my typing speed, so I practice short exercises to become faster and more accurate.

提案: Use correct past tense and combine sentences for clarity. Start with a direct time statement, then briefly explain context with a linking word (e.g. 'because' or 'as'). Avoid vague phrases ('each and everything').

例: I learned to type when I was six years old because computers were becoming popular and my parents encouraged me to learn basic computer skills. As a child, I enjoyed using the keyboard and practiced simple typing games.

提案: Be concise and provide one specific method with details and a linking word. Avoid repetition and grammar mistakes ('practice makes perfect', not 'practice make perfect'). Give an example of a specific exercise or tool.

例: I improve my typing by practicing every day with timed typing tests and online lessons. For instance, I use a 10-minute daily exercise that focuses on accuracy first, then speed, which has noticeably reduced my errors.

× I prefer handwriting.

✓ I prefer handwriting.

No change needed; sentence is acceptable. However, consider adding an article if referring to 'handwriting' as a kind of activity: 'I prefer handwriting' is fine as a general preference.

× It will give me the writing experience very well.

✓ It gives me a good writing experience.

Original uses future 'will' and the adverb 'very well' awkwardly. Use present tense to state a general effect and replace 'very well' with the adjective phrase 'a good' modifying 'writing experience'. Suggestion: use simple present for general truths and place adjectives before nouns.

× Preferably I do write all the time 'cause writing in a diary gives a specific experience for each and everyone, 'cause it will give the chance to go through the memories as well, which is very important.

✓ I prefer to write all the time because writing in a diary gives a unique experience for everyone and it also gives the chance to revisit memories, which is very important.

Problems: 'Preferably I do write' is awkward; use 'I prefer to write' or 'I like to write'. Redundant colloquial 'cause' should be 'because'. 'Specific experience for each and everyone' is unidiomatic; use 'unique experience for everyone'. 'It will give the chance to go through the memories' should be 'it gives the chance to revisit memories' and keep tense consistent. Use parallel clauses and avoid repetition.

× Yes, I do type on a desktop keyboard each and every day 'cause it is very essential thing for my work and I also really enjoy typing as well because it's the skill that which every individual can develop over time.

✓ Yes, I type on a desktop keyboard every day because it is essential for my work, and I really enjoy typing because it is a skill that everyone can develop over time.

Issues: unnecessary auxiliary 'do' in positive statement; 'each and every day' is wordy—use 'every day'. 'Very essential thing' is ungrammatical; use 'essential'. Redundant 'also' and 'as well'—choose one. 'the skill that which every individual' uses both 'that' and 'which' incorrectly; use 'that' or 'which' (here 'that' or 'which' with no extra 'the') and 'everyone' preferable to 'every individual'. Maintain concise, idiomatic phrasing.

× There are some people who can type in very speed and they do really.

✓ There are some people who can type very quickly, and they really can.

'Type in very speed' is incorrect: use adverb 'very quickly' to modify 'type'. 'They do really' is ungrammatical; use 'they really can' or 'they are very fast typists.' Use adverb form and correct word order.

× I learn how to type on a keyboard when I was six years old.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was six years old.

The action occurred in the past, so use the past tense 'learned' (or 'learnt') rather than present 'learn'. Keep tense consistent with 'was'.

× Because at that time it was the beginning of the computer era and people were like very enthusiastic about the technology and they always want to learn each and everything which is related to computer work.

✓ At that time it was the beginning of the computer era, and people were very enthusiastic about technology; they always wanted to learn everything related to computer work.

Don't start a sentence with 'Because' when it creates a sentence fragment. Use past tense 'wanted' to match 'were'. Remove filler 'like' and 'each and everything'—use 'everything'. Place 'related to computer work' after 'everything' for clarity. Use proper punctuation to join clauses.

× So I was very interested in learning the things as well when I was a kid.

✓ So I was very interested in learning things when I was a kid.

Redundant 'the things' and 'as well' removed for conciseness. Past tense 'was' is correct. Keep simpler noun 'things' or specify what you learned.

× I think the best way to improve the typing is the practicing typing each and every day.

✓ I think the best way to improve typing is by practicing every day.

Remove unnecessary definite articles: 'the typing' and 'the practicing typing' are incorrect. Use the gerund 'practicing' with 'by' to show method, and 'every day' instead of 'each and every day' for conciseness.

× Practice make perfect and also I think there is no other way which we can improve the typing rather than doing typing each and every day.

✓ Practice makes perfect, and I don't think there is any other way to improve typing than by practicing every day.

'Practice' is singular here, so the verb must be 'makes' not 'make'. 'There is no other way which we can improve the typing' is unidiomatic; use 'any other way to improve typing.' Use 'by practicing every day' for clarity and remove redundancy.