Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh) and minor grammar errors. Use one or two specific reasons with linking words. For example, say you prefer typing because your writing is hard to read, and add a brief consequence or example.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is quite messy and can be hard to read. For example, my teacher has sometimes misunderstood my letters, so typing helps me present clear, neatly formatted work.

提案: Improve accuracy and coherence: answer directly with a topic sentence, then use linking words to clarify frequency and exceptions. Correct tense and word choice errors (e.g., 'I usually type on a desktop' not 'typed'). Keep it under five sentences.

例: I usually type on a desktop because of online classes, but not every day. For instance, I often use my iPad for studying, so I switch between my desktop and iPad depending on the task.

提案: Make the answer more fluent and eliminate repetition. Start with a clear time reference, then give a concise supporting detail about the school's classes. Use past tense correctly and avoid fillers like 'you know.'

例: I learned to type when I was in first grade at primary school. My school had a technology class where teachers showed us how to use the keyboard and basic computer programs.

提案: Organize your answer with a clear method: state one or two concrete steps you take to improve, use correct grammar and precise vocabulary (e.g., 'practice regularly', 'use typing websites'). Avoid vague phrases like 'type fast or something.'

例: I improve my typing by practicing on my laptop every day. First, I practice consistently for 20 minutes, and second, I use a website called 'TypeFast' which gives exercises and tracks my accuracy and speed.

× From my opinion, I would prefer uh typing rather than handwriting.

✓ In my opinion, I would prefer typing rather than handwriting.

Use 'In my opinion' not 'From my opinion' because 'in' is the correct preposition for expressing opinions (Incorrect use of prepositions - ID 11). Also remove filler 'uh' for clarity; this is optional and not a grammar error.

× The most important reason for me is my handwriting isn't that beautiful and I'm afraid that uh the teachers might be confused some letters from my handwriting.

✓ The most important reason for me is that my handwriting isn't very neat, and I'm afraid the teachers might be confused by some letters in my handwriting.

Multiple errors: missing 'that' after 'is' (Sentence structure/article issue; treated here as Sentence structure - ID 26), 'isn't that beautiful' is informal and better as 'isn't very neat' (Incorrect use of adjectives - ID 13), 'confused some letters from my handwriting' uses wrong preposition and structure; correct is 'confused by some letters in my handwriting' (Incorrect use of prepositions - ID 11). Also remove filler 'uh'.

× So typing is still the best alternative for me.

✓ So typing is still the best alternative for me.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. It matches subject-verb agreement and article usage.

× An as a result from learning online, I usually type on a desktop.

✓ As a result of learning online, I usually type on a desktop.

Incorrect phrase 'An as a result from' is wrong; correct is 'As a result of' using preposition 'of' (Incorrect use of prepositions - ID 11). Also remove the extraneous 'An'.

× But it's not every day because sometimes I study from my iPad.

✓ But not every day, because sometimes I study on my iPad.

Use 'study on my iPad' rather than 'study from my iPad'—wrong preposition (Incorrect use of prepositions - ID 11). Also 'It's not every day' is acceptable but 'Not every day' is more natural; tense remains present (Present tense issue - ID 6).

× So I'm usually typed from my iPad all of the time, but there's also a time that I type on the desktop too.

✓ So I usually type on my iPad all the time, but there are also times when I type on the desktop.

'I'm usually typed' wrongly uses passive/past participle; should be active 'I usually type' (Verb + -ing form / Past participle misuse - IDs 8 and 9). 'from my iPad' wrong preposition; use 'on my iPad' (Incorrect use of prepositions - ID 11). 'there's also a time that' is awkward; use 'there are also times when' (Sentence structure - ID 26).

× The first time that I learned to type the keyboard was when I was in grade one at the primary school.

✓ The first time I learned to type on the keyboard was when I was in grade one at primary school.

Use past tense 'learned' correctly retained; add preposition 'on' before 'the keyboard' (Incorrect use of prepositions - ID 11). 'At the primary school' is better as 'at primary school' or 'in primary school' (Article error / preposition - ID 22 and 11). Also remove the extra 'that' for natural sentence structure (Sentence structure - ID 26).

× The school, the school was a very good school because they have a technology class, you know, which they teach us how to type and to use the program in the computer.

✓ The school was very good because they had a technology class where they taught us how to type and how to use programs on the computer.

Use past tense 'had' and 'taught' to match 'was' and the past time frame (Past tense issue - ID 5). 'They teach us' should be 'they taught us' (Past tense - ID 5). 'To use the program in the computer' uses wrong prepositions and article; use 'use programs on the computer' (Incorrect use of prepositions and article - IDs 11 and 22). Remove redundant phrase 'the school, the school' (Sentence structure - ID 26).

× To improve on my typing are usually types in my laptop every day.

✓ To improve my typing, I usually type on my laptop every day.

Original has wrong word order and forms. Use 'To improve my typing' (correct infinitive phrase). 'Are usually types' mixes plural verb and wrong form; correct is 'I usually type' (Subject-verb agreement and verb form - IDs 27 and 8). Use 'on my laptop' not 'in' (Incorrect use of prepositions - ID 11).

× Like first you need to be consistent and we need to have a stable in what you are doing and next is I go into the type fast or something.

✓ First, you need to be consistent and stay focused on what you are doing. Next, I go to a website called TypeFast or something similar.

Several issues: missing subject/connector 'First,' and unclear clause 'we need to have a stable in what you are doing'—should be 'stay focused on what you are doing' (Incorrect use of prepositions and sentence structure - IDs 11 and 26). 'I go into the type fast or something' is unclear; likely referring to a website 'TypeFast'—use 'I go to a website called TypeFast' (Sentence structure and incorrect preposition - IDs 26 and 11). Tense is present habitual (Present tense issue - ID 6).

× It's a website that helps you to type.

✓ It's a website that helps you to type.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed; structure and verb usage are appropriate.