Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答需要更自然、简洁并且语法准确。可先直接给出观点（主题句），然后用一到两个具体原因支持，避免重复并注意时态和词形（例如“use”应为“using”，“have chance to handwriting”不正确，可说“rarely handwrite”）。控制在最多5句内，并使用连接词如“because”或“so”使语意连贯。

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because I use a computer or laptop for most of my daily tasks. Typing is faster and more convenient for emails and assignments, so I rarely handwrite anything these days.

提案: 回答应更简练并注意句子结构与词序。先给出直接答案，然后用一两条具体理由支持。避免重复“convenient”和语法错误（如“I prefer type”应为“I prefer to type”或“I prefer typing”）。使用连接词如“because”或“so”增强逻辑。

例: I prefer typing on a laptop because it’s portable and comfortable to use. I often take my laptop to school, so a laptop keyboard suits my daily needs better than a desktop.

提案: 回答应更准确地表达时间和原因，避免不恰当的词语（例如“back in iOS 12 years old” 应改为“when I was 12”），并修正语法（“teacher teach us very patient”应为“the teacher taught us patiently”）。结构上先给出时间，再说明学习途径和感受，控制在最多5句。

例: I learned to type when I was about 12 years old. We had computer lessons at school, and my teacher was very patient, so that class was my first real experience using a keyboard.

提案: 回答应更直接说明改进方法，提供具体做法或练习，并注意语法（如“we don't just to focus”不正确，改为“we don't need to focus”或更好“we naturally improve”）。使用连接词如“because”或“so”并给出具体例子（练习网站、练习方法或每天练习时间）。保持简洁不超过5句。

例: I improve my typing mainly by practicing regularly while doing my daily work. For instance, writing emails and school assignments every day helps, and I sometimes use online typing exercises to increase speed and accuracy.

× Well, to be honest I prefer typing in my daily life because nowadays we are usually use computer or laptop to finish our work.

✓ Well, to be honest, I prefer typing in my daily life because nowadays we usually use computers or laptops to finish our work.

句子时态为一般现在时，描述习惯。原句中缺少逗号；“are usually use” 为错误的现在时结构，正确为“we usually use”。此外“computer or laptop”应使用复数以表示一般情况，改为“computers or laptops”。建议：使用一般现在时描述习惯时，用主语 + usually + 动词原形(或代词 + 动词)，名词需注意单复数。

× Therefore we always need to type in on the computer.

✓ Therefore we always need to type on the computer.

原句中出现冗余介词短语“in on”，属于用词重复。若指一般情况可去掉定冠词并用复数："type on computers"。建议：避免连续使用两个表示位置的介词，保留一个合适介词。

× So I barely have chance to handwriting now.

✓ So I barely have a chance to handwrite now.

“handwriting”是名词或动名词，但此处需要动词不定式或动词原形“handwrite”，且缺少不定冠词“a”。因此应改为“have a chance to handwrite”。建议：遇到“have a chance to + 动词原形”。

× I prefer type on the laptop keyboard every day due to the fact that in my opinion laptop is very convenient and I use the laptop is very comfortable and I need to bring my computer to my school and finish my work, so laptop is more convenient.

✓ I prefer typing on a laptop keyboard every day because, in my opinion, laptops are very convenient and comfortable to use. I need to bring my computer to school to finish my work, so a laptop is more convenient.

句子中多处语法错误："prefer"后应接动名词(typing)而不是动词原形(type)；"laptop is very convenient and I use the laptop is very comfortable"结构重复且语序错误，应改为"laptops are very convenient and comfortable to use"；"my school"前的介词不必要，可直接说"to school"；名词单数/复数与冠词使用不当，需要使用复数或加不定冠词。建议：使用“prefer + -ing”，注意句子分句连接和冠词/数的一致性。

× I learned how to type on the keyboard back in iOS 12 years old.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was about 12 years old.

原句中“back in iOS 12 years old”结构混乱，应该使用过去时并用时间状语从句或短语："when I was 12"或"at about 12 years old"。建议：表示某年龄发生的事用“when I was + 年龄”或“at + 年龄”。

× The main reason is that I had a computer lessons in my school and the teacher teach us very patient and this is first time I touched the keyboard.

✓ The main reason is that I had computer lessons at my school, and the teacher taught us patiently. It was the first time I had touched a keyboard.

错误包括冠词和单复数（"a computer lessons"应为"computer lessons"或"a computer lesson"）；时态问题（描述过去应使用过去时，teacher teach → taught）；副词使用错误（"very patient" 应为副词"patiently"）；“this is first time”应为过去时“it was the first time”。建议：回忆过去经历时统一使用过去时，注意名词单复数和形容词/副词区分。

× Well, to be honest, it seemed to me that nowadays we need to use the, uh, keyboard every day.

✓ Well, to be honest, it seems to me that nowadays we need to use the keyboard every day.

原句中时态不一致："seemed"为过去时，但后半句谈论现在的事实应使用一般现在时"seems"。建议：表达当前看法时使用现在时。

× And I think we don't just to focus on how to improve our typing due to the fact that when I finish our work, the type skills are become more and more better.

✓ And I think we don't need to focus specifically on improving our typing because when I finish my work, my typing skills become better and better.

原句问题多样："don't just to focus"中不需要不定式to，应为"don't need to focus"或"shouldn't just focus"；"when I finish our work"代词使用错误，应与主语一致为"my work"；"the type skills are become more and more better"时态和搭配错误，正确为"my typing skills become better and better"（或"are getting better"）。建议：保持人称一致，注意动词结构（不定式/动名词），以及“become/get + 形容词”不用同时用“more and more better”，应用“better”或“better and better”。