Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, right), correct grammar (e.g. "I prefer typing"), and add one specific reason with a linking word. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because typed documents are stored electronically and easy to find and edit. For example, I can search files by keywords and quickly update them without rewriting.

提案: Give a direct answer first, remove repetition and fillers, and correct unclear phrasing about frequency. Use a time expression (e.g. "about five hours a day") and one brief supporting detail about what you type.

例: Yes, I type on a laptop every day because I work as a software engineer. I usually type for about five hours a day, mainly writing and debugging code.

提案: Give a clear timeline and link the two points with a cohesive connector. Correct wording ("learn to type"), avoid repetition, and add a concise reason or example of improvement.

例: I learned to type on a laptop when I was in high school, and later, after I became a software engineer, I significantly improved my speed and accuracy because I practiced daily while working on projects.

提案: Answer directly and clearly: name the method, explain briefly how it helps, and avoid hesitations and repetition. Mention the platform's features (timed tests, leaderboards) as specific supporting details to show effectiveness.

例: I improved my typing by practicing regularly on an online typing platform that runs timed tests and tracks accuracy. This helped me increase my speed and compare my results with other users, which motivated me to keep improving.

× I like better typing because the information typed are stored on some devices and uh, so it is easy to find and edit, right?

✓ I prefer typing because the information typed is stored on some devices, so it is easy to find and edit.

The original sentence has awkward word order and a pronoun/verb agreement issue: 'information' is uncountable and takes a singular verb ('is', not 'are'). Also 'I like better typing' is unnatural; use 'I prefer typing'. Combine clauses to avoid filler and improve clarity. Suggestions: use 'prefer' for comparisons, treat 'information' as singular (uncountable), and streamline the sentence structure.

× Yes, of course, because I work, I'm working as a software engineer, so I need to type some code to develop software.

✓ Yes, of course, because I work as a software engineer, so I need to type code to develop software.

Redundant verb forms 'I work, I'm working' are unnecessary; choose one present tense (simple present for habitual work). 'Type some code' is informal—use 'type code'. Ensure subject-verb forms are consistent and concise. Suggestion: use simple present 'I work as a software engineer' for regular employment and avoid redundant progressive form.

× Yeah. So, umm, usually I, I type for five Year 5.

✓ Usually I have been typing for five years.

The original 'type for five Year 5' is ungrammatical and mixes tense and number. If the action began in the past and continues, use present perfect continuous or present perfect simple, e.g. 'I have been typing for five years' or 'I have typed for five years.' Also 'Year' should be lowercase and plural 'years'. Suggestion: choose present perfect (have been typing) to show duration up to now and use correct plural 'years'.

× I started to type keyboard on my laptop when I was a high school student, but basically I improved my typing skills after I became a software engineer and I improved a lot.

✓ I started typing on my laptop when I was a high school student, but I improved my typing skills a lot after I became a software engineer.

Use the gerund form 'typing' after 'started' (started typing). 'Type keyboard' is incorrect; say 'type on my laptop' or 'type on the keyboard.' Word order and repetition ('I improved... and I improved a lot') is awkward; combine and place 'a lot' after the verb phrase. Suggestion: use 'started typing' and 'type on my laptop/keyboard', and avoid repeating the same verb unnecessarily.

× When I became a software engineer, I started to practice typing on a website, uh, which, uh, on the platform we, we can measure the typing performance and the com compare with other participants.

✓ When I became a software engineer, I started practicing typing on a website that has a platform where we can measure typing performance and compare it with other participants.

Preposition and relative clause use is incorrect: 'practice typing on a website' is fine but 'which, uh, on the platform' is fragmented. Use 'a website that has a platform where...' Also 'com compare' is a typo; include object 'it' after 'compare' to refer to performance. Use 'practice' + gerund ('practicing'). Suggestions: use clear relative clauses ('that', 'where'), correct typos, and include objects for verbs ('compare it with').