Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one brief specific reason and an example. Avoid repetition and use linking words for coherence.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s more convenient and saves time. For example, when I write essays or emails on my laptop, I can edit quickly and use spell-check, which helps me work faster.

提案: Correct grammar and use precise vocabulary. Give a concise topic sentence then one supporting detail explaining why. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

例: I usually type on my laptop every day because I carry it to classes and use it for studying and entertainment. As a result, I’m more comfortable with the laptop keyboard than with a desktop.

提案: Be specific and avoid filler words. Give a clear time and one brief detail about how you learned. Use correct verb forms and avoid uncertain ranges like '12 or 16'.

例: I learned to type when I was about 12 years old at school, where we had a basic computer class that taught typing techniques and practice exercises.

提案: Provide a clearer description of your practice methods with correct grammar and one specific example of a resource or routine. Use linking words to connect idea and result.

例: I improve my typing by practicing daily with online typing tests and typing passages from articles, which increases my speed and accuracy. For example, I spend 15 minutes each evening on a typing website to track my progress.

× I prefer typing because typing is very convenient and save time.

✓ I prefer typing because typing is very convenient and saves time.

The verb 'save' must agree with the singular subject 'typing.' This is a subject-verb agreement issue falling under present participle use combined with third-person singular; the correct third-person singular form is 'saves.' Use 'saves' to match the singular noun phrase 'typing.' Suggestion: use 'saves' when the subject is singular (e.g., 'This saves time').

× I usually tap on my laptop because I use my laptop very usual at my daily life.

✓ I usually type on my laptop because I use my laptop very often in my daily life.

There are several problems: 'tap' is an incorrect verb choice for typing and should be 'type.' 'Very usual' is incorrect; the adverb form 'usually' or 'very often' should be used to modify the verb. Also 'at my daily life' is incorrect preposition and noun choice; use 'in my daily life' or 'in my daily routine.' Suggestion: say 'I usually type on my laptop because I use my laptop very often in my daily life.'

× Well, when I was about 12 or 16 years old I learned how to use computer and umm, how to tap on a keyboard.

✓ Well, when I was about 12 or 16 years old, I learned how to use a computer and how to type on a keyboard.

Use the past tense 'learned' correctly but nouns and verbs need correct forms: 'computer' requires the article 'a.' 'Tap on a keyboard' is awkward; use 'type on a keyboard.' Also add a comma after the time phrase for clarity. Suggestion: include articles with singular countable nouns and choose the correct verb 'type.'

× I usually tap a passage or a letter that can helps me improve my typing skills.

✓ I usually type a passage or letters that can help me improve my typing skills.

Problems: 'tap' should be 'type.' 'A passage or a letter' is mismatched; better to use plural 'letters' or keep parallel structure. 'Can helps' is incorrect because modal 'can' must be followed by the base form 'help.' Change to 'can help.' Also using plural 'letters' fits typical practice. Suggestion: use 'type' and 'can help' and maintain parallel noun forms (passages or letters).