Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然な語彙選択や文法の誤り、発音の繰り返し（

例: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. I live in a residential area, so most of the buildings are houses and low-rise shops like supermarkets and restaurants.

提案: 答えは短く意図は伝わるが、語彙と文法、論理のつながりが弱い。具体例や時制を正しく使う練習が必要。

例: Yes, I enjoy photographing buildings, especially in cities. For example, last month I visited the city center and was surprised by how tall the skyscrapers were, so I took several photos from different angles.

提案: 回答の主旨（古い寺院を訪れたい）は分かるが、語彙の誤り（shine→shrine）、固有名詞の誤記、時制と理由の説明があいまい。具体的な理由と正しい名称を使う練習を。

例: I would like to visit historical buildings such as shrines and temples. For instance, Kiyomizu-dera in Kyoto is famous worldwide for its wooden stage and views, and I would love to see it in person because of its history and architecture.

提案: 理由は述べているが “tall phobia” の表現が不自然で、理由の説明も途切れている。代わりに “I’m afraid of heights” や具体的な不便さ（緊急時や眺め）を明確に述べる練習を。

例: No, I wouldn’t want to live in a very tall building because I’m afraid of heights. I would feel uncomfortable on high floors and worry about emergencies or elevators, so I prefer a low-rise house.

× There are not any tall wedding because I live in residential area so we we can see just many ho many houses.

✓ There are not any tall buildings because I live in a residential area, so we can only see many houses.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'wedding' is a wrong word choice for 'buildings' (vocabulary), 'residential area' needs the article 'a', and word order and redundancy ('we we', 'ho many') make the sentence unclear. Also use 'there are not any' or 'there aren't any' is acceptable; here 'There are not any tall buildings' is corrected but more natural is 'There aren't any tall buildings.' Suggestion: use correct noun 'buildings', include articles where needed, remove repetition, and use 'only' before the verb phrase to express limitation. Grammar problem type ID:1,22,26

× Yes, I like taking on photography or cities.

✓ Yes, I like taking photographs of cities.

Use 'take photographs' or 'take photos' and the correct preposition is 'of' to indicate the subject of the photos. 'Taking on photography' is ungrammatical. Also 'photographs' is the correct noun form; if using gerund 'taking photos' is fine. Suggestion: use 'taking photographs of cities' or 'taking photos of cities.' Grammar problem type ID:8,11

× When I went to the hour earlier I was surprised how how high the building is in the our city.

✓ When I went there an hour earlier, I was surprised at how high the buildings are in our city.

Use 'there' not 'to the', and 'an hour earlier' needs the article 'an.' 'Surprised at' is the correct preposition. 'How high the building is' should match plural 'buildings are' if referring generally; keep tense consistency by using present 'are' to state a general fact. Remove duplicate words and incorrect article 'the our'. Suggestion: say 'When I went there an hour earlier, I was surprised at how high the buildings are in our city.' Grammar problem type ID:5,26,11

× I would like to visit the old building like Temple and Shine.

✓ I would like to visit old buildings such as temples and shrines.

Use plural 'buildings' when speaking generally and parallel plural forms for 'temples and shrines.' 'Like Temple and Shine' is incorrect capitalization and word choice; 'shrines' is correct. Use 'such as' to give examples. Suggestion: use plural nouns and correct vocabulary: 'temples and shrines.' Grammar problem type ID:1,22,26

× In Japan there are many many SH many old buildings especially Kiomeza Temple and the king of temple is famous for famous around the world.

✓ In Japan there are many old buildings, especially Kiyomizu Temple, which is famous around the world.

Remove repetitions and correct the temple name 'Kiyomizu Temple.' 'The king of temple' is incorrect; use a relative clause 'which is famous around the world.' 'Famous for famous' is redundant. Suggestion: check proper nouns and simplify the sentence: 'especially Kiyomizu Temple, which is famous around the world.' Grammar problem type ID:22,26

× That is why I went to.

✓ That is why I went there.

The verb 'went' is correct past tense but requires an object or adverbial 'there.' 'Went to' needs a following place; without it the sentence is incomplete. Suggestion: add 'there' or the place visited: 'That is why I went there.' Grammar problem type ID:23,5

× Well, I don't I don't want to live in the tall building because I'm a tall phobia.

✓ Well, I don't want to live in tall buildings because I have acrophobia.

Do not use 'I'm a tall phobia' — a person 'has' a phobia: 'I have acrophobia' or 'I am afraid of heights.' Use plural 'tall buildings' for general statement and remove repetition. Suggestion: say 'I have a fear of heights' or 'I have acrophobia.' Grammar problem type ID:4,22,12

× So if I live in in the tall building like sky high building, I could not see the building and under the under the.

✓ So if I lived in a skyscraper, I would not be able to see the ground below.

For hypothetical present/future situations we use the past tense in the if-clause ('if I lived') and 'would' in the main clause. Use 'skyscraper' for 'sky high building.' 'Could not see the building and under the under the' is unclear; likely means 'could not see the ground below.' Use 'be able to' or 'would not be able to.' Remove repetition. Suggestion: use proper conditional structure: 'If I lived in a skyscraper, I would not be able to see the ground below.' Grammar problem type ID:7,26,8