Building— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer clearer and more natural: start with a direct short answer, then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct grammar (articles, prepositions, plural nouns) and avoid unclear words like “sugar.” Use linking words if you add details.

例: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. I live in a small town in Phuket, not in the city center, so most houses are low-rise and surrounded by trees.

提案: Give a clearer reason and correct grammar; avoid unclear phrases like “bellboard.” Use one concise reason and a specific example of what you like to photograph. Use a linking word to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I sometimes photograph buildings because I enjoy their shapes and details. For example, I like taking pictures of skyscrapers with interesting rooftops or decorative facades.

提案: Be specific about which building you mean and why. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the building or type of building, then add a reason with concrete details. Fix vague words like “skycrafts.”

例: Yes, I would like to visit the tallest office tower near the city center because it has an observation deck and impressive glass architecture, which I think would offer great views of Phuket.

提案: This answer is mostly clear but could be improved by giving a brief additional reason and a linking word. Correct grammar (use articles and verb forms) and add a specific example of a concern to make it more persuasive.

例: No, I wouldn’t want to live in a tall building because it would feel unsafe during earthquakes or severe storms. For instance, I worry about power outages and slow emergency access in high-rise apartments.

× No, because our home is here in Phuket but not near in sugar or like a city so we don't have a buildings near at home.

✓ No, because our home is here in Phuket and not near a town or a city, so we don't have any tall buildings near our home.

This sentence has several preposition and article errors. 'near in' and 'near at' are incorrect; use 'near' without 'in' or 'at' (e.g., 'near our home'). 'Sugar' seems to be a wrong word; likely 'a suburb' or 'a town' was intended. 'a buildings' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'any tall buildings' for plural. Also clarify word choice ('town' or 'suburb'). Suggestion: replace improper prepositions with 'near' and correct articles and noun number.

× Yes, because I love capturing the tall buildings in the city and there's have any bellboard on the top.

✓ Yes, because I love capturing tall buildings in the city, and some of them have billboards on top.

Errors include incorrect contraction and verb form: 'there's have' is wrong. Use 'some of them have' to refer to buildings. 'any bellboard' is incorrect word and article use; 'billboards' is likely intended and plural without 'any' in this affirmative context. Also remove unnecessary 'the' before 'tall buildings' unless specific. Suggestion: use 'some of them have billboards on top'.

× Yes, I like to visit the nearest building in the city because there are skycrafts and look impressive.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the nearest tall building in the city because there are skyscrapers and they look impressive.

Several issues: 'like to' is acceptable but 'would like to' is more polite for expressing desire. 'Nearest building' is okay, but probably 'nearest tall building' fits context. 'Skycrafts' is a wrong word; correct term is 'skyscrapers'. Missing subject for 'look impressive' — add 'they' to agree with plural noun. Suggestion: use correct vocabulary 'skyscrapers' and include proper subject 'they'.

× No, because it's too dangerous if having a earthquake or a storm in the city.

✓ No, because it would be too dangerous if there were an earthquake or a storm in the city.

Grammar issues: 'if having a earthquake' is ungrammatical. Use conditional 'would be' to express potential danger and the correct past-subjunctive form 'if there were an earthquake' for hypothetical events. Also use 'an earthquake' with the article 'an'. Suggestion: use 'it would be too dangerous if there were an earthquake or a storm'.