Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and correct word choices. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use precise vocabulary (e.g., ‘Malatang’ and ‘many restaurants’ instead of ‘melatonin restaurants’). Limit to 2–3 sentences and add one brief reason with a linking word.

例: My favourite food is Malatang. I eat it often because there are many Malatang restaurants nearby, and I enjoy the spicy broth and variety of ingredients it offers.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence, correct grammar, and avoid repetition. Use one linking phrase to explain the change and a specific example. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

例: When I was young I loved very sweet foods, such as candies and desserts. However, my taste has changed over time, so I now prefer less sugary or savoury dishes.

提案: Answer directly and avoid filler phrases. Use linking words (e.g., ‘in winter’, ‘in summer’) and correct the food name consistently. Provide one specific reason for the seasonal choice and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

例: Yes. In winter I eat more Malatang because I like hot, spicy food to warm up, while in summer I prefer cold dishes like naengmyeon, a Korean cold noodle, because they are refreshing.

提案: Respond with a clear contrast and avoid incorrect words (e.g., ‘melatonin’). Use one linking phrase to explain the reason, but avoid unsupported biological claims like hormones unless you can briefly justify; instead, say ‘my taste changed’ or ‘I grew to like spicy food’. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and correct grammar.

例: Yes, it has changed. I liked sweet foods as a child, but now I prefer spicy dishes because my tastes developed over time and I grew to enjoy stronger flavours.

× My current favorite food would be Malatang as there are a lot of melatonin restaurants here.

✓ My current favorite food is Malatang because there are a lot of Malatang restaurants here.

Use of 'would be' is unnecessary for a simple preference (use present simple). 'As' can be replaced by 'because' for clearer causal meaning. 'melatonin' is a wrong word; context shows the restaurant type is 'Malatang'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'there are a lot of Malatang restaurants' is correct.

× I have quick access to them so I often eat them a lot so it has been my favorite.

✓ I have quick access to them, so I often eat there, and it has become my favorite.

Pronoun and verb usage: 'eat them' is incorrect for restaurants; use 'eat there'. 'so it has been my favorite' mixes time references; use 'it has become my favorite' to show change over time. Added commas and conjunctions for clarity.

× I used to like really sweet foods like sugar, sugar, candy but now I can eat those.

✓ I used to like very sweet foods such as sugar and candy, but now I cannot eat those.

The original likely intended contrast: 'used to like' vs 'now I cannot' (or 'I can eat those' is contradictory). Also 'sugar, sugar, candy' is redundant; use 'such as'. 'very' better than 'really' in formal correction. Maintain tense contrast.

× I think my taste buds has have changed.

✓ I think my taste buds have changed.

Subject 'taste buds' is plural, so use plural verb 'have'. Remove duplicated words 'has have'.

× I mean, I will eat more Malaten in winters and in summer I will eat cold food like naengmyeon is.

✓ I mean, I eat more Malatang in winter, and in summer I eat cold dishes like naengmyeon.

Use present simple to describe habitual actions rather than 'will'. 'Malaten' seems misspelled; use 'Malatang'. 'winters' -> 'winter' for general season. 'cold food like naengmyeon is' is ungrammatical; use 'cold dishes like naengmyeon.'

× It is a Korean cold noodle thing.

✓ It is a Korean cold noodle dish.

Informal 'thing' is vague; 'dish' is appropriate. Structure is fine but word choice improved.

× Yeah, as I have mentioned I used to like sweet foods but now I am more into spicy foods like melatonin.

✓ Yes, as I mentioned, I used to like sweet foods, but now I prefer spicy foods like Malatang.

Use 'as I mentioned' (simple past) for reference to prior statement. 'am more into' is acceptable but 'prefer' is clearer. 'melatonin' incorrect; should be 'Malatang'.

× I think it has to do with hormone in my system because I couldn't eat spicy thing when I was young but now I can and I enjoy it a lot.

✓ I think it has to do with hormones in my system because I couldn't eat spicy foods when I was young, but now I can and I enjoy them a lot.

Use plural 'hormones' and plural 'spicy foods' and pronoun 'them' to refer back. 'spicy thing' is incorrect; use 'spicy foods'. Added comma before 'but' for clarity.