Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は主題文があり理由を述べていますが、文法や語順の誤り、語彙選択の不自然さ、冗長さがあります。具体的には “clear flavor” は不自然で “light” や “refreshing” を使うべきです。また時制や表現（“And then I was hot. Today I can eat easily.”）が不明瞭です。改善方法： 1) トピックセンテンスを明確にする（I like buckwheat noodles.） 2) 理由は2つ以内で具体的に述べる（taste, texture, occasions）。 3) 接続詞を使って文をつなげる（because, so, and）。 4) 時制や主語を正しく使う。 練習例文で自然な語彙と構造を身につけてください。

例: I like buckwheat noodles because they have a light, refreshing flavor and a pleasant, chewy texture. I also enjoy them when it’s hot because they’re easy to eat and very cooling, so they’re my go-to dish in summer.

提案: 過去の好みを述べる際は過去形を使うべきです（I liked）。また“junky and bad for body”は言いたいことは分かるが不自然なので “unhealthy” を使い、感情を表す語（I loved it）も正しく使いましょう。接続詞や対比表現（but）で理由と感情を明確に。文は簡潔にまとめてください。

例: When I was young, I liked fried chicken a lot. Although it was unhealthy, I loved the taste and often ate it as a special treat.

提案: 意図は伝わりますが、表現が不自然で文法エラーが多いです。“in charge of year”は間違いで “at different times of the year” や “seasonally” を使います。例を挙げるときは具体的に述べ、文を完結させましょう（例: mochi in winter; unagi in summer）。接続詞や列挙表現を使い、文を2〜3文にまとめると良いです。

例: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. For example, I often eat mochi (rice cakes) in winter, especially during New Year, and I usually eat grilled eel (unagi) in summer because it is believed to give you energy.

提案: 変化を述べる際は現在完了形や過去形の使い分けを注意する必要があります（My favourite food has changed since I was a child.）。また “I have been changed” は受け身で不自然です。比較表現（now I love it more than before）や理由を付け加えると説得力が増します。文を簡潔にまとめ、理由を1〜2点具体的に示してください。

例: My favourite food has changed since I was a child. For instance, I didn’t like curry rice when I was young, but now I love it because the flavors are richer and I enjoy spicy dishes more than I used to.

× My favorite food is buckwheat noodle.

✓ My favorite food is buckwheat noodles.

The noun refers to a type of food and should be pluralized with an -s or use an article. Use 'buckwheat noodles' (plural) or 'the buckwheat noodle' with context. Also 'noodle' as a countable noun requires plural when speaking generally: 'buckwheat noodles'. Improve by memorizing common food collocations and checking singular/plural forms.

× This is because it is clear flavor.

✓ This is because it has a clear flavor.

English does not use 'is' directly with 'clear flavor' in this structure. Use the verb 'have' to indicate possession: 'has a clear flavor'. Also include the article 'a' before 'clear flavor'. Practice subject-verb-object patterns and use 'have' for possession.

× And then I was hot.

✓ It is also served hot.

The original 'I was hot' implies the speaker felt hot, which is not the intended meaning. To describe the food temperature, use a passive or stative construction about the food: 'it is served hot' or 'it is hot'. Ensure subject refers to the food, not the speaker.

× Today I can eat easily.

✓ Nowadays I can eat it easily.

The adverb 'today' is not appropriate; 'nowadays' or 'these days' fits general preference. Also include the object 'it' referring to the food. Correct word order: adverb + subject + modal + verb + object. Use 'can eat it easily' to indicate the ability to eat the food now.

× I have liked fried chicken when I was young.

✓ I liked fried chicken when I was young.

Mixing present perfect 'have liked' with a past time expression 'when I was young' is incorrect. Use simple past 'liked' for actions in a finished past period. Use present perfect only with unspecified time.

× It is so junky and bad for body but I like love it.

✓ It is junky and bad for the body, but I love it.

Use 'junky' alone without 'so' for natural tone; add the article 'the' before 'body'. 'I like love it' is ungrammatical—choose either 'I like it' or 'I love it'. Here 'I love it' suits emphasis. Improve by choosing one verb and adding necessary articles.

× I eat different foods at different times of the year in charge of year.

✓ I eat different foods at different times of the year.

The phrase 'in charge of year' is meaningless here. Removing it yields a correct sentence that matches the question. Keep sentences concise and relevant to the prompt.

× For instance I ate mochi like rice soup ball and in summer I ate unagi and.

✓ For instance, I eat mochi, like rice dumplings, in winter, and in summer I eat unagi.

Use consistent tense (present simple) to describe habitual seasonal foods. 'Mochi like rice soup ball' is awkward—'rice dumplings' or 'rice cake' is clearer. Remove the trailing 'and.' Use commas for clarity and proper word order: time phrase after the item.

× Yes, I have been changed since I was I was a child.

✓ Yes, I have changed since I was a child.

Use present perfect 'have changed' to describe a change from childhood to now; 'have been changed' is passive and incorrect here. Also remove the duplicated 'I was'. Use active voice: 'I have changed since I was a child.'

× To be honest, I didn't like Curry rice when I was a child, but now I love it more than.

✓ To be honest, I didn't like curry rice when I was a child, but now I love it.

Remove the unnecessary comparative 'more than' with no object. Also 'curry rice' does not need capitalization for 'curry.' The contrast uses past simple for the child period and present simple for current preference. Use complete comparisons if including 'more than' (e.g., 'more than before').