Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler (uh), correct grammar (e.g., 'it's also possible to add toppings such as mushrooms, pork, or chicken'), and limit to 3–4 coherent sentences. Add a specific detail about why you like it (taste, memories or occasion) and use linking words to connect ideas.

例: My favourite food is pizza because I love its crispy crust and rich cheese. In Thailand it’s very popular and you can find it on many restaurant menus. I especially enjoy pizzas with mushrooms and chicken, and I usually have them for dinner when I want something quick and tasty.

提案: Give a clear past-time sentence and use correct tense and vocabulary (e.g., 'when I was young I liked omelettes'). Remove filler words and be specific about types and reasons. Use linking words like ‘for example’ or ‘such as’ and explain why you liked them.

例: When I was young, I liked omelettes the most. For example, I often ate Thai-style omelettes with fish sauce and spicy chilies, and sometimes I tried Indian-style omelettes with herbs and spices. I liked them because they were tasty, easy to eat, and my parents often made them for breakfast.

提案: Answer directly and correct phrasing (‘every year’ not ‘every year's’). Use a topic sentence, then add a brief reason and an example of seasonal food if relevant. Use linking words like 'however' to show contrast.

例: Not really — I tend to eat similar foods throughout the year. However, if I get the chance I enjoy trying seasonal dishes, for example mango desserts in the summer. I like to try new foods when they’re available because it keeps meals interesting.

提案: Provide a clear comparison between past and present. Use correct grammar (past tense and perfect forms), avoid fillers, and explain why the new dish is preferred with specific reasons (taste, texture, ingredients). Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use linking words such as 'but' and 'because'.

例: My favourite food has changed a little. As a child I loved omelettes, but now I prefer a dish called Pak Kapal because it has stronger flavors and more vegetables. I find it more delicious and satisfying than the omelettes I used to eat.

× My favorite food is pizza.

✓ My favorite food is pizza.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.

× It is a common dish in Thailand.

✓ It is a common dish in Thailand.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.

× We usually have it in every menu.

✓ We usually see it on every menu.

Use the correct preposition 'on' with 'menu' and 'see' or 'find' is more natural than 'have' for items listed on a menu. The original 'in every menu' is incorrect preposition use.

× Uh, it's also can add the additional meats such as mushroom, uh, pork, chicken, and we usually have it for dinner.

✓ You can also add additional toppings such as mushrooms, pork, or chicken, and we usually have it for dinner.

Remove incorrect 'it's' before 'can' (modal verbs do not take 'it is') and use plural 'mushrooms' and the term 'toppings' for pizza. Also streamline the list with 'or' and fix word order.

× What kind of food did you like when you were young?

✓ What kind of food did you like when you were young?

Question is correct; no change required.

× I found out omelette is the best food since I was in kindergarten.

✓ I have thought that omelettes were the best food since I was in kindergarten.

Use present perfect 'have thought' with 'since' to link past to present, or use past tense 'thought' with a past time. Also pluralize 'omelette' and change 'is' to 'were' for consistency when reporting past opinion.

× So uh, after that I tried a lot of omelette such as uh Thai style, Indian style and another traditional style of omelette.

✓ After that, I tried many kinds of omelettes, such as Thai-style, Indian-style, and other traditional styles.

Use 'many kinds of omelettes' for countable variations, hyphenate 'Thai-style', and 'other traditional styles' is more natural. Replace 'a lot of' with 'many' for countable nouns.

× Not really, I usually try the same food at every year's but if I have an opportunity to try a new food I would like to.

✓ Not really. I usually eat the same foods every year, but if I have the opportunity to try a new dish, I would like to.

Use 'eat' not 'try' for habitual consumption; 'foods' plural, 'every year' (no apostrophe), and 'the opportunity' is the correct article. Add comma before the conditional clause.

× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

✓ Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

Question is correct; no change required.

× Not really, as I said, uh, when I was a child, I love omelette, but right now I'm starting to find another dish.

✓ Not really. As I said, when I was a child I loved omelettes, but now I'm starting to like another dish.

Match past tense 'loved' with 'when I was a child'. Use plural 'omelettes' or 'omelette' consistently and use 'like' instead of 'find' for preference. Split into sentences for clarity.

× So, uh, it is Pak kapal and I think it is more delicious than omelette that I've ever eat.

✓ It is Pak Kapal, and I think it is more delicious than any omelette I have ever eaten.

Use 'any' to compare, 'have ever eaten' uses present perfect and correct past participle 'eaten'. Capitalize proper noun 'Pak Kapal'.