Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response grammatically correct, concise and natural. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific details (why you like it and an example). Avoid unclear phrases like "study food" and correct noun-verb agreement and article use.

例: My favourite food is Thai cuisine because I enjoy bold, spicy flavours. For example, I often eat red curry, which I like for its creamy coconut base and fragrant chilies.

提案: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and then give specific supporting details. Use correct past tense, singular/plural forms, and clearer descriptions. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and use linking words like "also" or "for example."

例: When I was young, I loved eating fruit, especially rambutan. My parents often took me to the market to buy fresh fruits, and I remember rambutan because of its sweet flesh and hairy red shell.

提案: Provide a clear, structured answer using correct grammar and tenses. Start with a topic sentence about seasonal variation, then give concrete examples with linking words (e.g., "for example", "but"). Correct subject-verb agreement and months' names.

例: Yes, I eat different foods throughout the year. For example, at the beginning of the year I usually eat more Thai dishes because I spend time with my family, but when I go to university in April I try many international foods, such as Japanese cuisine.

提案: Answer directly and use correct past vs present tense. Give a short reason for the change and a specific example. Avoid awkward phrasing like "I am the 23 years old person" and use natural expressions.

例: Yes, my tastes have changed since childhood. I couldn't handle spicy food as a child, but now at 23 I enjoy very spicy dishes—for instance, I like Korean spicy noodles such as tteokbokki or fire ramen.

× I love study food and Thai food have many spicy food.

✓ I love spicy food and Thai food has many spicy dishes.

Multiple issues: 'love study food' is incorrect verb usage; likely meant 'love spicy food'. 'Thai food have' is incorrect subject-verb agreement (plural vs singular) and word choice: 'food' after 'spicy' should be 'dishes' or omit repetition. Use present simple: 'I love' correct, 'Thai food has' matches singular subject 'Thai food'. Suggestion: use correct collocations ('spicy food', 'spicy dishes') and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× For example I love the red Curry.

✓ For example, I love red curry.

Unnecessary definite article 'the' before a general dish name is incorrect. 'Curry' should be lowercase unless part of a proper name. Also add a comma after introductory phrase. Suggestion: omit 'the' when talking about a food in general: 'I love red curry.'

× When I was young, I love to eat fruit.

✓ When I was young, I loved to eat fruit.

Time marker 'When I was young' requires past tense. 'Love' should be past simple 'loved'. Suggestion: match verb tense to time expressions referring to the past.

× My father and my mother always went to the market to buy some food for me.

✓ My father and my mother always went to the market to buy food for me.

Sentence is mostly acceptable but 'some' is unnecessary here; not strictly wrong but better style to omit. No major grammar type from list except pronoun/quantifier; adjusted for natural phrasing. Suggestion: omit 'some' when referring to general food purchases.

× For the food that I really like when I was young, it is a rambutan.

✓ The food I really liked when I was young was rambutan.

Mix of tense and article/pronoun issues: 'when I was young' requires past tense 'liked' and 'was' not 'is'. Use 'rambutan' without 'a' when speaking generically; 'a rambutan' could be used if referring to a single fruit, but here we speak of the food in general. Suggestion: match tense and use correct article usage for uncountable or mass nouns.

× It's a fruits that have a a hair around.

✓ It's a fruit that has hair around it.

'Fruits' is plural while 'a' indicates singular; use 'fruit'. 'Have' should be 'has' for third-person singular. Remove duplicate 'a'. Also add 'around it' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: ensure number consistency and subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I is a lot of fruit at different time of the year.

✓ Yes, I eat a lot of fruit at different times of the year.

Missing main verb: 'is' is incorrect. Use 'eat' to indicate action. 'a lot of fruit' is fine, but 'time' should be plural 'times'. Suggestion: include the correct verb and pluralize nouns that refer to multiple occasions.

× Yeah, like sometime at the beginning of the year I ate the Thai food the most because I always spend the time with my family.

✓ Yeah, like sometimes at the beginning of the year I ate Thai food the most because I always spent time with my family.

Use 'sometimes' not 'sometime'. 'Thai food' does not need 'the'. 'Spend' should be past tense 'spent' to match 'ate' and the time reference 'at the beginning of the year' in past. Suggestion: maintain tense consistency and use correct adverb forms.

× But when I go to the university at the April, I try so many international foods such as the Japanese.

✓ But when I went to university in April, I tried many international foods such as Japanese cuisine.

Tense should be past 'went' and 'tried' to match narrative. 'Go to the university' is unnatural in general contexts; use 'go to university' or 'went to the university' depending on meaning. 'at the April' is wrong; use 'in April'. 'so many' is informal; 'many' is better. 'the Japanese' should be 'Japanese cuisine' or 'Japanese food'. Suggestion: correct prepositions, articles, and noun phrases and keep tense consistent.

× When I was a child, I cannot handle too much spicy.

✓ When I was a child, I could not handle very spicy food.

Past time requires past tense 'could not' instead of 'cannot'. 'Too much spicy' is ungrammatical; use 'very spicy' or 'very much spice' or 'too much spice'. Also specify 'food' for clarity. Suggestion: use appropriate past ability verb 'could' and correct modifier for 'spicy'.

× But right now I am the 23 years old person.

✓ But right now I am 23 years old.

Do not use 'the' before an age expression and avoid 'person' after age. Use the standard expression 'I am 23 years old.' Suggestion: state age without article or extra noun.

× I love is a lot of spicy food.

✓ I love a lot of spicy food.

Remove the extraneous 'is'. 'I love a lot of spicy food' is acceptable though more natural is 'I love very spicy food' or 'I love a lot of spicy foods'. Suggestion: eliminate wrong auxiliary and choose natural collocation.

× I love to eat spicy food from the Korea, eat the spiciest noodle.

✓ I love to eat spicy food from Korea and eat the spiciest noodles.

Do not use 'the' before country name 'Korea' in this context. Use plural 'noodles' or specify 'the spiciest noodle dishes'. Also connect clauses with 'and' for fluency. Suggestion: correct preposition/article with country names and pluralize/count nouns appropriately.