Food— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Сократите ответы, исправьте грамматику и произношение слов, используйте связки и конкретику. Например, начните с короткого определяющего предложения, затем добавьте одно-два уточняющих предложения с причинами или примерами. Избегайте лишних слов и исправьте ошибки типа "experiment with different cousins" → "experiment with different cuisines".

例: My favourite food varies depending on my mood. I enjoy trying different cuisines, especially local Thai dishes since I live in Thailand now. For example, I like spicy soups and street-food snacks because they are flavorful and fresh.

提案: Исправьте времена (use past tense), уточните детали и добавьте связку. Начните с чёткой темы, затем объясните причину и приведите пример конкретного блюда, чтобы ответ был конкретным и естественным.

例: When I was young, I mostly liked local dishes and Chinese food. My hometown was near the Chinese border, so Chinese cuisine was common there. For example, I often ate dumplings and stir-fried noodles with my family.

提案: Устраните запинки и грамматические ошибки, используйте связки (e.g., "for example", "in winter") и завершайте мысль. Формулируйте одно чёткое предложение о факте, затем добавьте пример с конкретными блюдами, чтобы показать разнообразие по сезонам.

例: Yes, my food preferences change with the seasons. For example, in winter I prefer hearty meals like stews and rice dishes, while in summer I like lighter foods such as salads and cold noodles.

提案: Сделайте грамматику корректной (present perfect/ present simple), уберите заклинания и закончите мысли. Конкретизируйте, какие изменения произошли (например, меньше фастфуда, больше овощей) и поясните причины (здоровье, образ жизни).

例: Yes, my eating habits have changed since I was a child. Now I choose healthier options, like more vegetables and whole grains, because I'm more health-conscious and plan my meals carefully.

× Mostly I like experiment with different cousins.

✓ Mostly I like experimenting with different cuisines.

The verb 'like' when followed by another verb requires the gerund form (verb + -ing) for habitual actions. Also 'cousins' is a spelling error; the correct word is 'cuisines'. Use 'experimenting' to indicate enjoying trying different types of food.

× Today I live in Thailand, that's why I'm interested in local food a lot.

✓ I live in Thailand now, so I am very interested in local food.

'Today I live in Thailand' is awkward; 'now' fits better for current residence. 'That's why' can be simplified to 'so'. 'Interested in local food a lot' is unidiomatic; use 'very interested in local food'.

× I tried new.

✓ I try new dishes.

The sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. If the student means they try new foods, use the simple present for habitual action: 'I try new dishes.' Alternatively, 'I tried something new' would be past tense.

× When I was young, I prefer local food mostly and also Chinese food because my native town was located near the China.

✓ When I was young, I preferred mainly local food and also Chinese food because my hometown was located near China.

The time clause 'When I was young' requires past tense, so 'prefer' should be 'preferred'. 'Mostly' is better placed as 'mainly'. 'Native town' is nonstandard; use 'hometown'. Do not use the definite article before country names like 'China'.

× That's why Chinese food was well spread in my region.

✓ That's why Chinese food was widespread in my region.

The adjective 'well spread' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'widespread' meaning commonly found.

× Sometimes my food preferences depends on season.

✓ Sometimes my food preferences depend on the season.

The subject 'preferences' is plural, so the verb must be 'depend' not 'depends'. Include the article 'the' before 'season' to indicate a specific concept (seasons in general).

× It's uh, especially was for me when I was living in my own country because it will there are there were four different seasons and in the winter I prefer something heavy and.

✓ It was especially true for me when I lived in my home country because there were four distinct seasons, and in winter I preferred heavier food.

The original sentence mixes tenses and has redundant words ('will there are there were'). Use past tense consistently ('was', 'lived', 'were'). 'My own country' is more naturally 'my home country'. 'Prefer something heavy and' is incomplete; change to 'preferred heavier food'.

× My food preferences, uh, truly changed since I was a child because nowadays I'm more organized and I today I prefer healthy food and organize my food list more carefully.

✓ My food preferences have truly changed since I was a child because nowadays I'm more organized; today I prefer healthy food and organize my meal plan more carefully.

Use present perfect 'have changed' for a change that started in the past and continues to present. Remove duplicated time adverbs ('nowadays' and 'today') or place them correctly. 'Food list' is awkward; use 'meal plan'.

× I trying to add more nutritions and herbal carbonites and.

✓ I am trying to add more nutrients and herbal carbohydrates.

After auxiliary 'am' use the present participle 'trying'. 'Nutritions' is incorrect plural; use 'nutrients'. 'Herbal carbonites' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'herbal carbohydrates' or 'herbal supplements' — 'carbohydrates' is spelled correctly. Ensure the sentence is completed or remove trailing 'and'.