Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn rõ ràng và thể hiện ý kiến cá nhân, nhưng có một vài lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt lủng củng (ví dụ: 'Yet I would like say', 'makes me'). Bạn nên mở đầu trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (thời động từ, số ít/những), và thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (thể loại sách hoặc ví dụ) để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên và thuyết phục hơn. Hãy giữ độ dài không quá 5 câu.

例: Yes, I really love reading. I usually read one or two books a week, mostly non-fiction about history and science. Reading helps me relax after a long day and lets me learn new things at the same time.

提案: Bạn trả lời rõ quan điểm nhưng có vấn đề về mạch câu và ngữ pháp ('touching on a screen', 'so in.'). Câu nên mạch lạc hơn, dùng liên từ phù hợp và cung cấp lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: tiện lợi, dễ tìm kiếm, điều chỉnh kích thước chữ). Tránh câu thừa và giữ tối đa 5 câu.

例: I prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient; I can carry many books on my tablet and adjust the font size for comfort. Also, it's easy to search for information and access a wider range of topics online.

提案: Ý chính rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp ý ('read carefully' nhiều lần, 'I don't want to scan it and I try to avoid these mistakes'). Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề, dùng liên từ để nối ý, và nêu ví dụ cụ thể về 'mistakes' bạn muốn tránh hoặc cách bạn đọc cẩn thận (ghi chú, đánh dấu).

例: I need to read carefully when I'm studying historical documents or academic texts because I must remember dates and facts. In those cases, I take notes and highlight key points to avoid missing important details, while I skim light news articles when I only need a general idea.

提案: Câu trả lời trực tiếp và có lý do, nhưng cấu trúc hơi dài và một số cụm từ có thể chỉnh để tự nhiên hơn ('paying close attention in these important details'). Bạn nên tách thành câu ngắn gọn hơn, dùng từ ngữ tự nhiên và nêu một ví dụ cụ thể về cách bạn áp dụng kiến thức sau khi đọc.

例: I prefer detailed reading because I like to focus on important details and truly understand the material. For example, when I read a book about marketing, I take notes and later apply the strategies to projects at work.

× Yet I would like say that I really love reading.

✓ I would like to say that I really love reading.

Missing infinitive marker 'to' after 'would like'. Use 'would like to' + base verb for polite statements. Suggestion: include 'to' and keep present tense 'love' for a general preference.

× I usually read some books in a day to explore new knowledge and makes me feel more comfortable and relaxed after a long day.

✓ I usually read a few books a day to explore new knowledge, and it makes me feel more comfortable and relaxed after a long day.

Two issues: 'some books in a day' is awkward; use 'a few books a day' or 'some books each day'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'makes' needs a subject 'it' when linking the action to its effect. Suggestion: add 'it' before 'makes' and change quantifier to 'a few'.

× I definitely prefer reading on a screen because I love the feeling of touching on a screen rather than a physical paper, so in.

✓ I definitely prefer reading on a screen because I love the feeling of touching a screen rather than physical paper.

Do not use 'touching on a screen'; use 'touching a screen'. 'A physical paper' should be 'physical paper' or 'a physical page'. Remove stray 'so in'. Suggestion: eliminate unnecessary prepositions and extra words.

× Reading on the screen, there are lots of kinds of topics.

✓ When reading on the screen, there are many kinds of topics.

'Lots of kinds of topics' is awkward; use 'many kinds of topics' or 'lots of topics'. Also 'on the screen' is acceptable but 'on screens' or 'on the screen' depends; keep 'the screen' if meaning screens in general. Suggestion: use 'many kinds of topics' or 'lots of topics'.

× Whenever I meet some historical documents, I will read it carefully because I need to remember these important details and I don't want to scan it and I try to avoid these mistakes.

✓ Whenever I encounter historical documents, I read them carefully because I need to remember important details, and I don't want to just scan them; I try to avoid mistakes.

Use 'encounter' or 'come across' instead of 'meet' for documents. Pronoun 'it' should be plural 'them' to match 'documents'. Tense consistency: prefer simple present for habitual actions. 'Scan it' should be 'scan them' and 'these important details' can be 'important details'. Suggestion: keep plural agreement and consistent tense.

× I prefer detailed reading because I love paying close attention in these important details and moreover I want to use my knowledge which I gained from each reading.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I love paying close attention to these important details, and I want to use the knowledge I gained from each reading.

Use 'paying close attention to' not 'in'. 'The knowledge' is more natural than 'my knowledge' in this context, and 'which I gained' can be 'I gained' for clarity. Suggestion: use correct preposition 'to' and streamline the relative clause.