Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition ("from my childhood" repeated) and correct verb forms ("insist me" → "encouraged me"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I developed the habit as a child because my parents encouraged me and my father often bought novels and poetry collections for me, so I grew up reading regularly.

提案: Answer directly then give two clear reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Correct mistakes like "it's hold your concentration" → "it helps me concentrate" and "it's affect my eyes" → "it affects my eyes". Avoid fillers (uh) and unnecessary generalizations.

例: I prefer reading on paper because it helps me concentrate better and is less tiring for my eyes. Although I sometimes read on screens for convenience, I find paper-based reading more comfortable and effective.

提案: Give a complete, clear response with proper tense and specific examples. Start with a direct topic sentence, then contrast with when you skim. Fix grammar: "my academic" → "my academic work/course materials", "I used to read" → "I read carefully". Finish the second clause fully instead of trailing off.

例: I read carefully when the material relates to my course or academic assignments, because I need to understand concepts and remember details for exams. In contrast, I skim articles or social media posts that are unrelated to my studies to find only the main points.

提案: Be concise and avoid repetition. State your preference and give clear examples and linking words. Correct phrases: "detailed readings" → "detailed reading", "from the passes" → "from passages". Remove fillers like "uh" and repeated ideas.

例: I prefer detailed reading for academic study because I need to understand and remember complex information. For news or long articles, I usually scan to pick out key points and headlines so I can save time.

× I do like reading.

✓ I like reading.

The original uses unnecessary auxiliary 'do' for simple present affirmative; this is a sentence structure and style issue. Use the simple present 'I like' to state general preferences.

× I started this habit from my childhood and my parents actually insist me for reading.

✓ I started this habit in my childhood and my parents actually insisted that I read.

Use preposition 'in' with 'childhood' (not 'from'). 'Insist' requires a clause or 'insist on someone doing something'; here use 'insisted that I read' or 'insisted on my reading'. Also adjust tense to past 'insisted' to match 'started'.

× So my father brought me lots of books from novels and poems and I have built my habit from my childhood.

✓ So my father bought me many books, including novels and poetry, and I developed the habit in my childhood.

Use 'bought' not 'brought' (brought is bringing to the current location). 'Lots of' is informal; 'many' is better. 'Poems' -> 'poetry' or 'collections of poems'. 'Built my habit from my childhood' is unidiomatic; use 'developed the habit in my childhood'.

× I do prefer read on paper because it's hold your concentration more and also I sometimes I used to read on the screen however it's affect my eyes so I think the paper based reading is more uh, appropriate, uh, for people.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because it helps you concentrate more, and sometimes I read on a screen; however, it affects my eyes, so I think paper-based reading is more appropriate for people.

Use simple present 'prefer' (no unnecessary 'do prefer'). Verb pattern: 'prefer to read' or 'prefer reading'. 'It's hold' is incorrect; use 'it helps you concentrate' (third person singular 'helps'). 'It's affect' should be 'it affects'. Remove redundant 'used to' and filler words. 'Paper-based' hyphenated adjective.

× When it's about my course curriculum or my academic, then I used to read carefully.

✓ When it is about my course curriculum or my academics, I read carefully.

Mixing tenses: 'used to' implies past habitual actions; here general present habit requires simple present 'I read carefully'. Use 'academics' or 'academic work' instead of 'my academic'.

× However, when it is not related to my Academy or sometimes while I was reading, I find that this topic is not appropriate or I should not concern then I.

✓ However, when it is not related to my academic work, or sometimes while reading I find the topic inappropriate, I stop reading it.

Sentence was incomplete and ungrammatical. 'Academy' incorrect noun; use 'academic work'. 'Should not concern' is wrong phrase — use 'I stop reading it' or 'I do not pay attention to it'. Ensure a complete clause.

× For academic studies, I prefer detailed readings.

✓ For academic studies, I prefer detailed reading.

'Readings' as a plural noun is odd here; use uncountable noun 'reading' to refer to the activity. This is a quantifier/word choice issue.

× However, if it is about news or I have to choose the bullet points from the passes, then I used to do scanning.

✓ However, if it is about the news or I need to pick out the bullet points from passages, I scan.

'Used to do scanning' incorrectly suggests past habit; use simple present 'I scan' for current habit. 'Passes' is wrong word; 'passages' is intended. 'Choose the bullet points' -> 'pick out the bullet points' is more natural.

× However, uh in my academic I used to go for UH.

✓ However, in my academic work I usually do detailed reading.

The original is fragmented and uses 'used to' inappropriately. Replace with present habitual 'usually do' and clarify 'academic work' and 'detailed reading' to match earlier statements.