Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は直接的で意図は分かるが、文法ミスや語順の乱れ、語彙の不正確さ（“Phil philosophy”“biotechs”“Only designs book”）が見られます。より自然で簡潔なトピックセンテンスを使い、分野を列挙する際は並列構造（andでつなぐ）を守り、仕事との関連を明確に述べてください。さらに1〜2文以内に収め、不要な中断を避けること。

例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I usually read books on philosophy and biotechnology, and I also read design books because I work as a graphic designer.

提案: 意見は明確だが、自然な表現と流れ（linking）を改善してください。理由を述べる際は接続詞を使い、単語の重複を避け、一文を簡潔に保ちましょう（最大5文）。“tired my eyes”は不自然なので“tire my eyes”や“strain my eyes”を使う。

例: I prefer reading on paper because screens tend to strain my eyes, and I enjoy the tactile feeling of holding a book.

提案: 基本構成は良く、具体例もあるが最後の文が未完で終わっているため話が不完全です。対比を明示する接続詞（However, On the other hand）を使用し、なぜ小説やSNSでは厳密に読まないのか理由を1文で補ってください。文法は概ね良好なので、一貫した完全文を心がけること。

例: I need to read carefully for work documents and contracts because they contain important details and rules; for example, I always check emails from my boss twice to avoid mistakes. On the other hand, I don't read novels or social media as carefully because I read them mainly for entertainment.

提案: 最初の“Yes, I do”は質問に合っておらず冗長です（質問 asks preference）。トピックセンテンスは“I prefer detailed reading”で十分。その後の理由は良いが“books content”の語順と所有格が不自然（should be “book content” or “the content of books”）。最後が未完で具体例を入れ切れていないので、1つの明確な例を添えて完成させてください。

例: I prefer detailed reading because I want to understand the ideas deeply and reflect on them; for example, when I read design theory I take notes and reread difficult sections to apply the concepts to my work.

× Yes I do, I usually read any books about Phil philosophy and biotechs and.

✓ Yes, I do. I usually read books about philosophy and biotechnology.

The student used 'any books' incorrectly; use 'books' without 'any' in positive statements. 'Phil philosophy' is likely a repetition or typo; correct to 'philosophy'. 'biotechs' should be 'biotechnology' or 'biotech' as an uncountable noun. Also add punctuation and conjunction clarity. Suggestion: Use 'books about philosophy and biotechnology' and add commas and sentence breaks for clarity.

× Only designs book because I'm a graphic designer, I work.

✓ Only design books because I'm a graphic designer; it's part of my work.

The phrase 'Only designs book' is grammatically incorrect. As a subject speaking about their own activities, use the verb 'design' in base form with plural 'books' or 'design books' as a habitual action. 'I work' is vague; better to specify 'it's part of my work' or 'I do it for work.' Suggestion: Use 'I design books' or 'I only design books' and connect clauses with appropriate punctuation.

× I prefer to read a book on paper because screen makes me tired my eyes so I like to read book on the paper and I like to touch.

✓ I prefer to read books on paper because screens make my eyes tired, so I like to read on paper and I like to touch the pages.

Article and plural errors: use 'books' or 'a book' consistently; 'screen' should be plural 'screens' when speaking generally. 'Tired my eyes' is wrong order; say 'make my eyes tired.' 'read book on the paper' should be 'read on paper' and 'touch the pages' is natural. Suggestion: Say 'I prefer to read books on paper because screens make my eyes tired'.

× Well, I need to read carefully when I am dealing with work documents or contracts because they can contain important details and rules.

✓ Well, I need to read carefully when I deal with work documents or contracts because they can contain important details and rules.

The progressive 'am dealing with' is acceptable but less natural for habitual situations; use simple present 'deal with' for routines. This fits the question about when you need to read carefully. Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual actions: 'when I deal with'.

× For example, I always check emails from my boss twice to avoid mistakes.

✓ For example, I always check emails from my boss twice to avoid mistakes.

This sentence is correct. It uses present simple appropriately to describe a habitual action. No change needed. Suggestion: None.

× But I don't need to read carefully when I read novels or social media because.

✓ But I don't need to read carefully when I read novels or browse social media because they are for enjoyment.

The original sentence is incomplete; 'because' requires a reason. Also 'social media' should be paired with a verb like 'browse social media.' Complete the clause by providing the reason. Suggestion: Finish the thought: 'because they are for enjoyment' or 'because they are for leisure.'

× Yes, I do. I prefer detailed reading because I want to understand deeply and I like to think about books content.

✓ Yes, I do. I prefer detailed reading because I want to understand things deeply and I like to think about a book's content.

'Understand deeply' is acceptable but 'understand things deeply' is clearer. 'books content' lacks possessive; use 'a book's content' or 'books' content.' Also ensure article consistency. Suggestion: Use possesive form: 'a book's content' and include an object for 'understand'.

× For example, I.

✓ For example, I take notes and reflect on important ideas when I read.

The fragment 'For example, I.' has no verb and is incomplete. Provide a full example of what you do during detailed reading (e.g., take notes, reflect). Suggestion: Complete the sentence with specific actions: 'I take notes' or 'I highlight passages.'