Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Parla più chiaramente e struttura la risposta: inizia con una frase principale, poi aggiungi uno o due dettagli specifici. Correggi errori grammaticali come l'uso di tempi e articoli, evita ripetizioni e usa vocaboli più precisi (es. "worlds" al posto di "words"). Mantenere massimo 4-5 frasi.

例: Yes, I love reading. I have always enjoyed it since childhood because it relaxes me and makes me feel satisfied. Reading allows me to visit different worlds and learn about new ideas. For example, I often read historical fiction to understand past cultures.

提案: La risposta è chiara ma contiene ripetizioni e lievi imprecisioni. Usa una struttura: affermazione diretta, motivo specifico e un esempio breve. Evita ripetizioni come "definitely" due volte e correggi piccoli errori (es. "stay focused").

例: I definitely prefer reading on paper because it feels more comfortable and helps me concentrate. I also enjoy the smell and texture of books. For instance, I can read longer without feeling eye strain when I use a printed book.

提案: Rendi le idee più precise e grammaticalmente corrette. Dai esempi concreti e utilizza collegamenti logici (ad esempio "because", "however"). Evita esitazioni come "uh" e frasi confuse. Mantieni ordine: prima situazione che richiede attenzione, poi situazione che non la richiede, con motivazioni chiare.

例: I need to read carefully when studying for university or when I have to understand technical texts because I must remember details and concepts. However, when I read everyday news articles I often skim them quickly unless the topic seems important, since I just want a general overview.

提案: Rispondi in modo più naturale e specifico: introduci la preferenza e poi spiega perché con esempi concreti. Evita frasi generiche e ripetitive. Usa connettori come "because" e "for example" per chiarezza.

例: I usually prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand the meaning and remember important information. For example, when I read academic articles or novels I take my time to analyse difficult passages rather than skimming them.

× Yes I love reading. I always have read also when I was a kid I read because I it makes me feel good and satisfied and I can live in different type of words in my mind.

✓ Yes, I love reading. I have always read; even when I was a kid I read because it makes me feel good and satisfied, and I can live in different types of worlds in my mind.

Mixing present perfect and simple past without clear time reference and some incorrect word forms caused confusion. Use present perfect 'I have always read' to express a habit from the past continuing to the present. Keep 'when I was a kid' with simple past 'I read.' Remove the extra pronoun 'it' after 'because' and correct 'type' to plural 'types' and 'words' to 'worlds' for intended meaning. Suggestion: separate ideas with punctuation and keep tenses consistent for continuity.

× I definitely prefer to read on paper. I tried to read on a screen but I find it not very comfortable. So I definitely love also the smell of paper and it helps me to stay focus on the on the book.

✓ I definitely prefer to read on paper. I tried reading on a screen but I do not find it very comfortable. I also love the smell of paper and it helps me to stay focused on the book.

Use the gerund 'reading' after 'tried' when referring to the experience of reading on a screen. Use 'do not find' for negative present simple. 'Stay focus' is incorrect; the adjective should be 'focused.' Remove the duplicate 'on the' and place 'also' before the verb for natural word order. Suggestion: use gerunds for activities and correct adjective forms.

× I need to read carefully, for example when I am reading a school book on university paper. But uh, for example when I read the news, I pay less attention. Even if it will, it would be important as well.

✓ I need to read carefully, for example when I am reading a textbook or university paper. But when I read the news, I pay less attention, even if it is important.

'School book' is better as 'textbook' or 'university paper.' The clause 'Even if it will, it would be important' mixes future and conditional incorrectly. Use present simple 'it is important' or 'it would be important' depending on meaning. Here present simple fits because the news can be important now. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and choose clear noun forms.

× I usually prefer detailed reading, particularly because I wouldn't understand the book or the article or the newspaper. So definitely I would choose a detailed reading.

✓ I usually prefer detailed reading, particularly because I wouldn't understand the book, article, or newspaper otherwise, so I would definitely choose detailed reading.

Clarify conditional by adding 'otherwise' to show reason. Avoid repeating the article 'a' before each noun in a list and keep 'detailed reading' consistent without the indefinite article. 'Wouldn't understand' is a correct conditional; ensure the sentence clearly links cause and effect. Suggestion: use 'otherwise' to show consequence and keep noun phrases parallel.