Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., "when I read"), avoid repetition, and give one specific example with a brief reason. Use linking words like "because" and "for example."

例: Yes, I love reading because it helps me relax after a long day. For example, I often read books about animals or manga like Detective Conan and Doraemon, which cheer me up and help me unwind.

提案: Provide a clear preference or balanced view with correct vocabulary and grammar. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases (e.g., "skin on the computer"). Use linking words to contrast ("but", "however") and give a concise reason for each format.

例: I like both, but if I had to choose I prefer reading on a screen for convenience, especially when I’m commuting or searching for information. However, I still enjoy paper books at home because the tactile feel and layout make long reading sessions more comfortable.

提案: Clarify the situations with correct grammar and specific examples. Use contrasting linking words ("when... but when...") and avoid vague phrases like "fight the case." Explain why careful reading is needed and when skimming is acceptable.

例: I need to read carefully when I must memorize facts or prepare for exams because I have to understand and remember details. But when I’m just browsing news or checking email, I usually skim to get the main idea quickly.

提案: Improve sentence structure and use linking words to contrast choices. Clearly define situations for scanning versus detailed reading, and use correct verb forms and articles. Keep the response concise (2–4 sentences).

例: It depends. I scan when I need to find keywords or get a quick overview, for example when reading emails. But I read in detail when I need to memorize information or study for exams because I must understand every point.

× I really love reading because I feel much more relaxed when I reading after a long day of work.

✓ I really love reading because I feel much more relaxed when I read after a long day of work.

The error is using the present participle 'reading' after 'when' instead of the base form 'read' for a habitual action. Use simple present 'read' to describe regular occurrences. Suggestion: use 'when I read' for repeated actions or routines.

× For example, I always read the animals book or a cartoon's book like Conan or Doraemon and I feel so good for.

✓ For example, I always read animal books or cartoon books like Conan or Doraemon and I feel so good afterward.

Multiple issues: 'animals book' should be plural noun phrase 'animal books' and 'a cartoon's book' is incorrect possessive; use 'cartoon books' or 'comic books'. The phrase 'feel so good for' is unnatural; use 'feel so good afterward' or 'because of that'. Suggestion: pluralize countable nouns and use proper noun modifiers, and replace awkward preposition phrase with 'afterward'.

× I think I like both because, uh, reading on the skin on the computer are very convenient for me nowadays, but before I on the way, reading a book in on the paper on a book and I feel so good.

✓ I think I like both because reading on the screen on the computer is very convenient for me nowadays, but before when I was on the way, reading a book on paper made me feel so good.

Errors include wrong word 'skin' instead of 'screen', incorrect prepositions 'on the paper on a book' should be 'on paper' or 'a paperback', and tense/subject-verb agreement 'are' should be 'is' for singular 'reading'. Also 'before I on the way' should be 'before when I was on the way' or 'when I was commuting'. Suggestion: use 'screen', 'on paper', correct verb agreement, and past continuous/simple past for past habits.

× Uh, I think two ways.

✓ Uh, I think there are two ways.

The sentence lacks the verb 'are' and the dummy subject 'there' to state existence. Use 'there are' to introduce plural items. Suggestion: include 'there are' when listing ways or options.

× I need to read carefully when I need to memorize more longer in my mind and I learn by heart, so I think this is the best way to recover it.

✓ I need to read carefully when I need to memorize something for longer and learn it by heart, so I think this is the best way to remember it.

Problems: 'more longer' is redundant; use 'longer'. 'Memorize in my mind' is awkward; say 'memorize something' or 'remember it'. 'Recover it' is wrong verb; use 'remember it'. Also parallel structure: 'memorize ... and learn' adjusted. Suggestion: eliminate redundancy, use 'remember' for retention, and keep parallel verb forms.

× And when I fight the case I can't read carefully.

✓ And when I am under pressure or dealing with a difficult case, I can't read carefully.

The phrase 'fight the case' is unclear and likely a wrong literal translation. It needs clearer expression like 'under pressure' or 'dealing with a difficult case'. Also include appropriate auxiliary 'am' for present continuous 'am under pressure'. Suggestion: rephrase unclear idioms into natural English expressions.

× It depends on the situation. When I scanning, when I need to find out the keywords on the message and when I learn by heart or memorize the works the information in the message, I always read details and carefully.

✓ It depends on the situation. When I am scanning, I look for keywords in the message, and when I need to learn something by heart or memorize the information, I always read in detail and carefully.

Errors: 'When I scanning' needs auxiliary 'am' + -ing form 'am scanning'. 'Find out' can be 'look for', and preposition 'on' should be 'in' for 'in the message'. 'Memorize the works the information' is garbled; simplify to 'memorize the information'. Use 'read in detail' rather than 'read details'. Suggestion: use correct continuous form with auxiliary verbs, proper prepositions ('in'), and concise phrasing for memorization.