Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more natural and concise, correct grammar, reduce hesitation and avoid redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Correct article use and plural/singular errors (e.g. 'books' or 'other people's wisdom').

例: Yes, I love reading. I read almost every day because books are an inexpensive way to learn from other people's experiences, and I enjoy both fiction for relaxation and non-fiction for self-improvement.

提案: Remove filler sounds and unclear phrases, correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g. 'physical books are inconvenient to carry' and 'an entire library'). Begin with a direct answer, then give two specific reasons using linking words such as 'because' and 'so'.

例: I prefer reading on a screen because physical books can be bulky and I have a subscription to a reading app, so I can carry an entire library on my phone.

提案: Prefer a clear topic sentence and tighten phrasing; replace vague phrases like 'the test is hard to understand' with specific situations. Use linking words such as 'for example' and 'because' correctly and avoid repetition.

例: I read carefully when the material is difficult or unfamiliar, for example complex exam questions or academic articles, because I need to understand key ideas and details.

提案: Eliminate hesitations and use consistent terminology: 'scanning' vs 'detailed reading' or 'skimming' vs 'close reading'. Provide concise reasons and a coherent contrast with linking words like 'whereas' or 'but'.

例: I usually scan or skim straightforward material to get the main points quickly, whereas I use detailed reading for complex texts or exam passages to fully grasp the arguments and examples.

× I believe that book is the easiest and cheapest way to absorb others wisdom so I basically read every day.

✓ I believe that a book is the easiest and cheapest way to absorb others' wisdom, so I basically read every day.

Missing indefinite article before singular countable noun 'book' requires 'a'. Possessive for plural 'others' needs apostrophe: 'others\' wisdom'. Also add a comma before coordinating conjunction 'so' joining independent clauses. Suggestion: use 'a book' and 'others\' wisdom' and punctuate clauses.

× now I prefer reading on screen because people reading is inconvenient to carry around and I have a membership on a reading app so I can take a entire library with me everywhere.

✓ Now I prefer reading on a screen because printed books are inconvenient to carry around, and I have a membership for a reading app so I can take an entire library with me everywhere.

Pronoun/phrase 'people reading' is incorrect and unclear; the intended noun is 'printed books' or 'paper books'. Also missing article before 'screen' ('on a screen') and wrong preposition 'on a membership' changed to 'for a membership'. 'a entire' should be 'an entire' because 'entire' begins with a vowel sound. Suggestions: use correct noun ('printed books'), include appropriate articles, and choose correct prepositions.

× Which more come? Which much more?

✓ Which do you prefer more? Which one much more? -> Better: Which do you prefer more?

These fragments are ungrammatical and do not form a complete question. Simplest correction matching context is 'Which do you prefer more?' which uses auxiliary 'do' for question formation and places the adverb 'more' correctly. Suggestion: use full question structure: 'Which do you prefer more?'

× I read carefully when the test is hard to understand, for example the complex answer questions on exams or articles with new topics I don't know well.

✓ I read carefully when the text is hard to understand, for example complex answer questions on exams or articles on new topics I don't know well.

Mismatch: 'test' vs 'text' — likely intended 'text' or 'material'. 'the complex answer questions' is awkward; 'complex-answer questions' or 'questions that require complex answers' is clearer. Also use 'articles on new topics' not 'with new topics'. Suggestion: use consistent nouns ('text' or 'material') and correct prepositional phrases.

× I prefer scanning when the material is umm, easy to understand.

✓ I prefer scanning when the material is, umm, easy to understand.

Main issue here is punctuation: add commas around discourse marker 'umm' for clarity. Article 'the material' is acceptable; no other grammar change needed. Suggestion: punctuate fillers and pauses properly.

× And I do detail reading, uh, when the test is hard to understand or. Or it's a complex test.

✓ And I do detailed reading, uh, when the text is hard to understand or when it's a complex text.

Use adjective form 'detailed' rather than noun 'detail' to modify 'reading'. 'test' likely should be 'text' or 'material' for reading context; ensure parallel structure: 'when the text is hard... or when it's a complex text.' Also remove sentence fragment 'or.' Suggestion: use 'detailed reading' and maintain parallel clauses.