Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer more fluent and natural by removing fillers (uh, um) and using correct tense and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one short supporting detail. Keep it under 4–5 sentences.

例: Yes, I enjoy reading. When I was a teenager I read many novels, especially mystery and adventure stories, which helped me relax and improve my vocabulary.

提案: Use correct tense and simple sentence structure. State your preference directly, then give a brief reason using linking words (for example, because, but, although). Avoid grammatical errors like wrong verb forms and articles.

例: I prefer reading on paper when I want to concentrate because physical books feel more comfortable. However, as an adult I often read on screens because ebooks are convenient and easy to carry.

提案: Give a clear direct answer with two contrasting situations and use linking words (for example, usually, however). Correct grammar and expand slightly with a specific example to show understanding.

例: I need to read carefully when the material is technical or unfamiliar, for example when I study academic articles. However, I don't read carefully when I'm skimming news headlines or social media posts because I just want the main idea.

提案: Answer directly, avoid fillers, and give one clear reason with a short example. Use accurate vocabulary (content, context) and correct grammar for clarity.

例: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand the full context and remember important information. For example, when I read a novel I focus on descriptions and character development to enjoy the story fully.

× Uh, yes. Uh, when I'm still, uh, teenage a boy, uh, I like reading novels.

✓ Uh, yes. Uh, when I was a teenager, I liked reading novels.

The student uses incorrect present tense and word order. 'When I'm still, teenage a boy' is ungrammatical and mixes present with past. Use past tense 'was' or 'was a teenager' because the action refers to a past time; also 'liked' agrees with past time. Suggestion: say 'When I was a teenager, I liked reading novels.'

× For me, when I'm still a child and I'm always are reading on a paper or a books and then when I'm become adult, books is now transferred to the digital world.

✓ For me, when I was a child I always read on paper or books, and when I became an adult, books were transferred to the digital world.

Multiple tense and agreement errors: 'I'm still a child' should be past 'I was a child' to match the rest; 'I'm always are reading' mixes auxiliaries and is incorrect—use simple past 'I always read'; 'on a paper or a books' has article and count errors—use 'on paper or in books'; 'when I'm become adult' must be past 'when I became an adult'; 'books is now transferred' has subject-verb agreement and unnatural aspect—use past passive 'books were transferred'. Suggest: 'When I was a child I always read on paper or in books, and when I became an adult, books were transferred to the digital world.'

× If I don't understand the context, I read it again, and then and when I'm not reading, yeah.

✓ If I don't understand the context, I read it again, and if I am not reading carefully, I skim or skip it.

The original sentence is disfluent and uses 'and then and when I'm not reading' incorrectly. Maintain present simple for habits: 'If I don't understand...' is correct; clarify second clause with appropriate verb forms. Use 'if I am not reading carefully' (present continuous) to contrast actions. Suggest simplifying to 'If I don't understand the context, I read it again; if I'm not reading carefully, I skim.'

× I prefer detailed reading because, uh, detailed reading is uh, there's already, uh, uh, it's give you a content, a contacts that has already been there.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because detailed reading gives you content that is already there.

Errors include incorrect subject-verb agreement 'it's give' should be 'it gives' (third person singular), and awkward clauses 'there's already' and 'a contacts that has'—'contacts' plural conflicts with 'has'. Use 'content' (uncountable) and 'that is already there'. Suggest: 'I prefer detailed reading because detailed reading gives you content that is already there.'