Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid hesitations and repetitions, correct word choices (e.g., 'read' not 'lead'), and give one or two specific supporting details. Keep it within 2–4 sentences and use linking words if needed.

例: Yes, I enjoy reading. It helps me relax after a long day, and I often read self-improvement books because they give me practical tips to manage stress and improve my productivity.

提案: Give a clear reason and one specific supporting detail. Eliminate fillers and repetitions. Use a linking phrase to connect your preference and reason (e.g., 'because' or 'so').

例: I prefer to read on paper because I already spend a lot of time on screens. For example, reading a physical book helps me focus better and reduces eye strain compared with reading on my phone.

提案: Answer directly with a clear contrast: when careful reading is necessary and when it is not. Use concise sentences and precise vocabulary (e.g., 'contracts', 'instructions'). Avoid trailing off and fill in the idea fully.

例: I need to read carefully when I am reviewing contracts or official documents because they contain important terms and conditions. However, I don't read carefully when browsing social media or casual articles, since those texts are informal and less consequential.

提案: State your preference clearly and give a specific reason with a linking word. Correct grammar (e.g., 'I prefer' and 'it helps me') and avoid repetitions. Keep to 2–3 sentences with a supporting example if possible.

例: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand complex information and avoid mistakes. For instance, when I study for exams I read textbooks carefully to make sure I grasp the concepts fully.

× I I often often lead a self improvement book.

✓ I often read a self-improvement book.

The student repeated words and used 'lead' incorrectly; the correct present participle/infinitive for the action is 'read' (base form pronounced /riːd/). Also add a hyphen in 'self-improvement'. Remove duplicate words to make the sentence fluent. Suggestion: practice saying the sentence slowly to avoid repetition and choose the correct verb form 'read'.

× Yeah, we I strongly believe does umm this on this on this Gen. on this gender help.

✓ Yes, I strongly believe this helps in this generation.

The original is fragmented with extra pronouns and an incorrect verb 'does'. The intended idea uses a simple present verb 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'this'. Remove filler words and restructure to Subject + Verb + Object. Suggestion: identify the main subject and verb before speaking to avoid insertions and wrong auxiliary verbs.

× I think is is a is the best way to read on paper and help me to like, uh, unsafe my, my care.

✓ I think reading on paper is the best way and helps me relax and take care of myself.

There is incorrect word order and missing subject for 'is'; 'helps' must agree with singular subject 'reading on paper' (third person singular). Also 'unsafe my care' is incorrect phrasing; 'take care of myself' expresses intended meaning. Suggestion: use a clear subject ('reading on paper') and match verb form ('is', 'helps'), and choose appropriate expressions for 'relax' or 'take care of myself'.

× I always read, umm, any, any contract carefully because it's, it contain a lot of details.

✓ I always read any contract carefully because it contains a lot of details.

The verb 'contain' must be in third person singular 'contains' to agree with subject 'it'. Also remove duplicated 'any'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement for 'it' + verb ('contains') and avoid repeating words.

× So if, if I don't, if we, if, uh, if I don't, if I don't read carefully, I can miss something.

✓ So if I don't read carefully, I can miss something.

The sentence has repeated conditional fragments and an incorrect 'we'. Condense to a single conditional clause 'if I don't read carefully' followed by the result. Suggestion: plan the conditional structure before speaking and avoid repetitions.

× I prefers detailed reading because I I think live through carefully is help me reduce and are an important thing need information.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I think reading carefully helps me find important information.

'Prefers' should be 'prefer' because the subject 'I' takes the base form. 'Is help' is incorrect; use 'helps' for third person singular agreement with the noun 'reading' as subject. The phrase 'are an important thing need information' is ungrammatical; replace with 'find important information'. Suggestion: use 'I prefer' for first person and structure cause-result with subject 'reading carefully' + verb 'helps'.