Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan bentuk kata (grammar) serta buat jawaban lebih natural dan ringkas. Gunakan kalimat topik yang jelas dan jangan ulang-ulang kata. Contoh fokus: menyebutkan jenis bacaan yang disukai dan alasan singkat.

例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I especially like novels because they help me relax, and I also read journal articles to keep up with my studies.

提案: Perjelas pilihan Anda dan gunakan struktur yang logis. Hindari kalimat kacau dan gunakan linking words (however, because, so) untuk menjelaskan preferensi dalam konteks. Sebutkan alasan konkret untuk setiap pilihan.

例: I prefer paper for long or important texts because it is easier to concentrate and annotate. However, I often read on a screen for convenience when I’m traveling or checking short articles.

提案: Perbaiki bentuk kata kerja dan tambahkan sedikit penjelasan mengapa. Gunakan dua klausa yang terhubung dengan kata penghubung seperti 'because' atau 'while' untuk membuat jawaban koheren dan spesifik.

例: I need to read carefully when I’m studying in class because I have to understand journal articles for assignments, while I read novels more quickly for enjoyment and relaxation.

提案: Jawaban tidak jelas dan banyak kesalahan kata. Jelaskan kedua strategi membaca (scanning vs detailed) dan kapan Anda menggunakan masing-masing. Gunakan kosakata yang relevan seperti 'scan', 'detail', 'specific information'.

例: Generally I prefer scanning when I need to find specific information quickly, but I use detailed reading when the topic is important or complex and I need to understand it fully.

× Yes, I like reading a book.

✓ Yes, I like reading books.

Using 'a book' implies one specific book; as a general habit use plural 'books'. Use plural for general preferences.

× Especially I like reading novel or read journal article.

✓ I especially like reading novels or journal articles.

Order and forms were incorrect. 'Especially' should come before the verb phrase. Use plural 'novels' and 'journal articles' for general preferences, and use the gerund 'reading' for both objects.

× Both of them I prefer if I have more good I read on paper, but it's if I bet more I read or scroll on my screen.

✓ If I have better quality or prefer clarity, I read on paper; if I am in a hurry or prefer convenience, I read or scroll on my screen.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Reorganized into conditional clauses with clear reasons. Use correct comparative 'better' and parallel structure for contrast.

× When I'm in class I need read journal or article carefully, but sometimes if I read novel I always read quickly.

✓ When I'm in class I need to read journals or articles carefully, but when I read a novel I often read quickly.

Missing infinitive 'to' after 'need'. Use plural 'journals or articles' for general reference. Use 'a novel' or 'novels' and 'often' instead of 'always' to match intended meaning. Maintain consistent present simple tense.

× In generally I prefer skinny when I need to find specific information, but sometimes I always find give back with.

✓ In general I prefer skimming when I need to find specific information, but sometimes I reread to check details.

Use 'in general' not 'in generally'. 'Skimming' is the correct term, not 'skinny'. The second clause was unclear; replaced with 'reread to check details' to convey likely meaning. Adverb placement and word choice corrected.