Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cümle yapınızı daha akıcı ve doğru hale getirmek için gereksiz duraklamaları ve tekrarları azaltın; fiil formlarına dikkat edin (örneğin "prefer to read", "I am proud of reading" yerine "I’m proud to read"). Ayrıca cevapları 2-4 kısa cümleyle sınırlandırın ve somut detaylar ekleyin (örneğin hangi tür kurgu ve neden).

例: Yes, I like reading and I try to read every day for at least twenty minutes. It’s a hobby of mine and I mainly enjoy contemporary fiction because I like character-driven stories and realistic dialogue.

提案: Daha doğru ve doğal ifadeler kullanın; bağlaçları etkili kullanarak görüşünüzü açıkça ifade edin (örneğin "although" ya da "despite"). Göz açıklamasını daha kısa ve net söyleyin: "screens hurt my eyes" yerine "they strain my eyes". Gereksiz tekrar ve dolgu sözcüklerinden kaçının.

例: I prefer reading on paper. Although reading on screens is more convenient, I find that screens strain my eyes, so I enjoy the tactile feel of a book and find it easier to concentrate.

提案: Daha açık ve organize cevap verin: başlangıçta doğrudan konu cümlesi, sonra nedenleri açıklayın. "Read carefully" için örnekler verin (resmi metinler, sınavlar) ve boş vakit okumalarını ayırt edin. Dolgu kelimeleri azaltın ve grameri düzeltin (örneğin "for my own enjoyment").

例: I need to read carefully when I’m studying for exams or reading official documents because accuracy is important. But when I read for pleasure, I read more casually and skip parts that don’t interest me.

提案: Cevabı netleştirin: tercih ettiğiniz yöntemi doğrudan söyleyin ve nedenleri mantıklı sırayla verin. "Scanning saves time" gibi kısa ve doğru ifadeler kullanın. Son cümlede çelişki var (prefers vs doesn't prefer) — bunu düzeltin. Bağlaçlarla neden-sonuç ilişkisi kurun.

例: I usually prefer scanning when I’m looking for specific information because it saves time and helps me find facts quickly. For in-depth understanding, however, I choose detailed reading.

× Yes, I prefer to, uh, reading every day, uh, and I'm proud to reading, umm, every day, at least for umm, 20 minutes.

✓ Yes, I prefer to read every day, and I'm proud to read every day, at least for 20 minutes.

The verb after 'prefer to' should be in the base form, not the -ing form. Use 'prefer to read' and 'proud to read'. Suggestion: replace 'to reading' with 'to read'. ID:8

× Uh, and uh, it's my hobby, I could say.

✓ Uh, and it's my hobby, I could say.

This sentence mainly has a punctuation/structure issue rather than a verb form error; removing the unnecessary comma improves flow. No -ing correction needed beyond keeping the verb 'say' in base form after modal 'could'. ID:8

× And I mostly prefer to read, uh, fiction.

✓ And I mostly prefer to read fiction.

'Prefer to read' is correct with base form; remove extra commas. This follows 'prefer to' + base verb rule. ID:8

× I actually prefer reading on paper and notwithstanding the easiness of reading on the screen, uh, because I think, uh, reading on screen and make my eyes umm, damage my eyes vision.

✓ I actually prefer reading on paper despite the ease of reading on a screen, because I think reading on a screen damages my eyesight.

Multiple issues: 'notwithstanding' is awkward here; 'despite' or 'despite the ease' fits. 'Easiness' is unnatural; use 'ease'. 'Reading on screen and make my eyes damage my eyes vision' has subject-verb agreement and word choice errors — use 'reading on a screen damages my eyesight'. This corrects verb form and vocabulary. ID:16

× I actually prefer reading on paper and notwithstanding the easiness of reading on the screen, uh, because I think, uh, reading on screen and make my eyes umm, damage my eyes vision.

✓ ...because I think reading on a screen damages my eyesight.

When the subject is 'reading on a screen' (singular gerund phrase), the verb must be in third person singular: 'damages' not 'make' or 'damage'. Also 'eyesight' is the correct noun. Suggestion: use 'damages my eyesight'. ID:2

× The time I have an exam is when, uh, I read with caution, a paragraph with caution and umm.

✓ When I have an exam, I read a paragraph carefully.

Sentence structure is awkward; 'read with caution' is unusual — use 'read carefully'. Also put time clause first: 'When I have an exam, I read a paragraph carefully.' This fixes 'there be' not directly but addresses clause ordering and adverb use. ID:3

× I usually prefer reading just for my own enjoy.

✓ I usually prefer reading just for my own enjoyment.

'Enjoy' is a verb; the correct noun is 'enjoyment'. Use the noun after 'my own' to express purpose: 'for my own enjoyment'. ID:13

× Then I don't have an, umm, urgent something.

✓ Then I don't have anything urgent.

'An urgent something' is incorrect word order and choice. Use 'anything urgent' or 'no urgent matters'. This corrects sentence structure and collocation. ID:26

× When I explore a specific information, I usually prefer, uh, doing scanning, uh, and because it's, uh, save the time and make me avoid the mistakes and yeah, that's all.

✓ When I look for specific information, I usually prefer scanning because it saves time and helps me avoid mistakes.

Several corrections: 'explore a specific information' is wrong — use 'look for specific information'. After 'prefer' use the -ing noun 'scanning' (not 'doing scanning'). 'It's save' needs third person singular 'it saves', and 'make me avoid' should be 'helps me avoid'. This fixes verb forms and idiomatic expressions. ID:8

× I don't usually prefer that.

✓ I don't usually prefer that.

The sentence is grammatical but awkward in context; consider 'I don't usually do that' or 'I usually don't prefer that' depending on intended meaning. No preposition needed. ID:11

× When I explore a specific information, I usually prefer, uh, doing scanning, uh, and because it's, uh, save the time and make me avoid the mistakes and yeah, that's all.

✓ When I look for specific information, I usually prefer scanning because it saves time and helps me avoid mistakes.

'Information' is an uncountable noun; do not use 'a' or 'specific information' with 'a'. Use 'specific information' without an article. Also 'the mistakes' should be 'mistakes' generally. ID:1